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Author has written 18 stories for Essay, Humor, Humor, General, Young Adult, Thriller, School, Nature, Life, and General. First things first, I always always return the favour of a review and do my best to give a detailed, intelligent, and constructive one too. And so it goes without saying that I more or less expect the same treatment in return, especially if I've left you a very long review. I don't need lavish praise. I just want honest, constructive criticism, something which is really hard to come by on this site nowadays. I would like more responses for To Sleep, My Sweet Retreat, Song of the Earth, Mother Nature's Revenge, Fever, A Bodybuilder's Epiphany, and Scholarly Sorrows, as these six are my most recent work. However, if you would prefer to critique my older work, you are also most welcome to do so. Finally many thanks to all who have reviewed my work. I really appreciate it. About me: You are on the favorites list of 6 members.You are on the author alert list of 4 members.You have submitted a total of 154 signed reviews. | |||||
1. To Sleep, My Sweet Retreat reviewsMy third sonnet, potentially my best, I don't know. Rather escapist, an agent of despair. Enjoy anyway.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 2-8-09 - Published: 2-8-092. Song of the Earth reviewsMy second English sonnet, a celebration of nature, a lamentation of man and his deeds. Review review review review review!Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-1-09 - Published: 2-1-093. Scholarly Sorrows reviewsAn exaggerated lamentation of the trials and tribulations of college life.Complete - School - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-20-09 - Published: 1-20-094. A Bodybuilder's Epiphany reviewsMy first English sonnet.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 1-20-09 - Published: 1-20-095. Fever reviewsA narrative poem about someone suffering a terrible fever.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 334 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-20-09 - Published: 1-20-096. Mother Nature's Revenge reviewsSomething I wrote a long long long time ago. Please critique.Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 258 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-20-09 - Published: 1-20-097. A Student's Pledge reviewsA Student's PledgeComplete - School - Fiction Rated: M - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-3-07 - Published: 9-3-078. A Day In School reviewsA Day In SchoolComplete - School - Fiction Rated: M - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 9-2-07 - Published: 9-2-079. Darkside reviewsCritique.Complete - Thriller - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,062 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-11-07 - Published: 3-11-0710. Loss reviewsPlease critique.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Adventure/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,198 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 11-25-06 - Published: 11-25-0611. Dreams reviewsAn essay I wrote for English and for which I scored 26 out of 30 and rewrote for my national exam. Please critique. Thanks.Complete - Essay - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,158 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 11-16-06 - Published: 11-16-0612. The End of Xavier Elizabeth Koo reviewsAnother disgusting story. I won't be writing such stuff anymore, I think. This is going to be the last thing I post on fictionpress before my national exams.Humor - Fiction Rated: M - English - Humor/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,479 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-15-06 - Published: 9-15-0613. The Life of Xavier Elizabeth Koo Part II reviewsMy longest work to date. Critique at will.Humor - Fiction Rated: M - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,636 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 9-4-06 - Published: 9-4-0614. Xavier Elizabeth Koo and his Brassiere reviewsXavier is fifteen this year, and yet he seems confused about his gender. Or is he?Young Adult - Fiction Rated: M - English - Humor/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,198 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 8-4-06 - Published: 8-4-0615. Reversal of Fortunes reviewsA story in which there is a twist in fates at the end.General - Fiction Rated: M - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,600 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 7-2-06 - Published: 7-2-0616. Shaun reviewsA prurient poem about a person namd Shaun and his encounter with a witch.Humor - Fiction Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 601 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 6-22-06 - Published: 6-22-0617. Turkey Dinner reviewsA story of how a disastrous experience of preparing turkey dinner ended unexpectedly.Humor - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 837 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 6-22-06 - Published: 6-22-06
