Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Captain-Dalien
Feed . Send Message. Subscribe . Favorite
email: Email
since: 07-03-06, id: 531159, Profile Updated: 08-06-08
country: United States
Author has written 63 stories for Love, Life, General, Fantasy, Friendship, General, War, Nature, School, Family, and Play.

Hey all.

So if you want to know about me... well, ask. I'm not going to sit here spouting random facts about me 'cause that's just boring. Go read my stuff instead. It's way more interesting...

Before you do though, just one note about some of the poems and stories before I get disowned by a few certain friends of mine...

Just because it's first person, doesn't mean it's from my perspective. So many people don't get that. But just because I said that, doesn't mean it's not. If you for some reason need to know- ask me. Maybe I'll tell you. Maybe I won't. It's worth a gamble, though.

Oh, and for the record, I have gone through and cleared out a few of the pieces I just couldn't stand anymore...

Anyway, on with the show.

Slow it down

Don't dance so fast

Time is short

The music won't last

Carpe Diem, kids- you only get one shot at life.

Sort: Category . Published . Updated . Title . Words . Chapters . Reviews . Status .

1. daisy
Life for someone of us is dark or mundane... everything is different for Daisy
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 672 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-30-08 - Published: 12-30-08
2. Umbrella reviews
Rain doesn't matter so much when we're together
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-21-08 - Published: 12-21-08
3. For You reviews
The things I do to hear you laugh...
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-21-08 - Published: 12-21-08
4. Probability reviews
What's the probability of you and me? I can't decide if this one is done or not... so suggestions would be welcome!
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-3-08 - Published: 8-3-08
5. 23 Flavors reviews
My friends and I have often wondered what the '23 flavors' are that make Dr. Pepper so good... so I decided to write about 23 things that have 'flavored' my summer so wonderfully.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 217 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-24-08 - Published: 7-24-08
6. Savior's Dream reviews
a rondeau about God's obsessive love for humanity.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-12-08 - Published: 7-12-08
7. Je Me Rend reviews
When we dance, I surrender. Because it makes us beautiful.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-7-08 - Published: 7-7-08
8. I Would reviews
Sometimes, I feel powerless. Like no matter what I could possibly do, ultimately, I cannot change what matters most.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-2-08 - Published: 7-2-08
9. Puppet Master reviews
A character study of a sound techie.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,223 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-3-08 - Published: 6-3-08
10. Drowning in Grey reviews
What happens when 'tolerence' goes too far? My formatting was beautiful... but it all changed when I loaded it in. Oh well. you get the idea.
Complete - Play - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,744 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-3-08 - Published: 6-3-08
11. Something to Believe In
Yeah, okay, I took my title from the Ramones... but it fits the story. Mark Dalton's survival depends on his ability to find something to believe in...
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,685 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-3-08 - Published: 4-3-08
12. stolen security reviews
we had to write about an article of clothing for creative writing. I chose my brother's flannel shirt.
Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-22-08 - Published: 3-22-08
13. Hobo Truck reviews
Yes, I really drive this thing.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-22-08 - Published: 3-22-08
14. Clover reviews
A conceit. From creative writing. Sorrow is like clover... somehow.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-3-08 - Published: 2-3-08
15. Yellow Monster reviews
A recurring nightmare of mine... T because it scares me.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 263 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-26-08 - Published: 1-26-08
16. Book One reviews
This isn't going to make a lot of sense... It's the titles of every poem in the book I just finished writing...
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 333 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-22-08 - Published: 1-22-08
17. The Madman reviews
Only a fool would ask for immortality...
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-22-08 - Published: 1-22-08
18. Girl, in a Nutshell reviews
I guess the title pretty much sums it up
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 279 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-14-08 - Published: 1-14-08
19. Dark Eyes reviews
How can eyes that dark.. be so bright?
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 251 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 1-5-08 - Published: 1-5-08
20. Nobody Promised Tomorrow reviews
You only get one shot at life. That one shot is here and now. Yesterday is gone. Tomorrow may never come. Just here. Just now. Just live.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-23-07 - Published: 11-23-07
21. Radio Roulette reviews
Why can't they play my song?
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-27-07 - Published: 10-27-07
22. Time and Fate reviews
Another dizzy dance of a poem that kind of sounds like Simon and Garfunkel...
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-27-07 - Published: 7-20-06
23. Let Me Jump reviews
oh, sweet misinterpretation... Based on a conversation.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-27-07 - Published: 8-27-07
24. Fifteen Hearts reviews
This isn't about a hero. It isn't about a victim. It's just about some strangers who became a family who built a city and changed the world.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 376 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-17-07 - Published: 7-17-07
25. Joy Is reviews
Something optimistic and happy about the good things in life...
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-13-07 - Published: 7-13-07
26. Static Tragedy reviews
When it comes to an internal war... he's not getting anywhere...
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-13-07 - Published: 6-13-07
27. Write Me Away reviews
Ever wish you could turn over the pen and let someone else write the story of your life for a while? This is to the one person who took my pen away for a while...
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-7-07 - Published: 6-7-07
28. Hey Muse reviews
How come it's the always the ones we want to immortalize in literature that just refuse to be written down?
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 366 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-25-07 - Published: 4-25-07
29. ThirtyTwo Tears reviews
To VT.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-18-07 - Published: 4-18-07
30. End of the Road reviews
It's amazing the things I find when cleaning my room: a half finished poem, memories, and old emotions
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-16-07 - Published: 4-16-07
31. The World's Like A Stage reviews
Inspired by spending 12 hours straight in a theatre...
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 282 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-31-07 - Published: 3-31-07
32. What Genre Are We? reviews
My teacher told us all to write the stories of our lives...and this was my question in response to that...
Complete - School - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-16-07 - Published: 3-16-07
33. Celtic Man reviews
Wrote this for a friend. However, I'd love to get some reviews or advice before I send it on. Thanks.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-17-07 - Published: 2-17-07
34. Dawn reviews
Can you imagine having been there to see the first sunrise?
Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-23-07 - Published: 1-23-07
35. Give it Up reviews
There comes a time that, no matter how good things used to be, you have to move on
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-23-07 - Published: 1-23-07
36. Pickup Truck Memories reviews
My neighbor and I went stargazing in the back of my big brother's pickup. And so a poem is born. ...I love my neighborhood...
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 228 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-21-07 - Published: 1-21-07
37. Sea Song reviews
I've always wanted to write a poem about the ocean. It's so...inspiring. But I've never been able to, until now. So here it is.
Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-21-07 - Published: 1-21-07
38. Tears reviews
Reading it back, I find this poem extrememly depressing. If you're in that sort of mood, by all means, read away. But if that's not your thing, I would suggest finding another poem to read.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-18-07 - Published: 1-18-07
39. Always reviews
Zach finally learns the extent of a father's love.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 891 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-16-07 - Published: 1-16-07
40. My Superman reviews
My little brother thought he was going to fly like Superman when he grew up...that wish came true sooner than any of us expected.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,681 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-16-07 - Published: 1-16-07
41. Catching London reviews
This is a poetic version of a strangely true event. The weirdest things happen backstage....
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-2-07 - Published: 1-2-07
42. Surrender Pride reviews
A plea to a friend...
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-28-06 - Published: 12-28-06
43. Tin Foil Armour reviews
So maybe her defenses really aren't as strong as they seem... I may add more to this, but this is it for now
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-14-06 - Published: 12-14-06
44. Don't Make My Brother Fight reviews
Dedicated to my big brother, and to all big brothers the Draft has and will take away.
Complete - War - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 228 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-3-06 - Published: 12-3-06
45. I Won't Let Go reviews
There are some people who, when faced with something they cannot handle be that fear, pain, or something else they simply hide within themselves and wait for it to pass. I am one of those people, and I felt the need to explain this.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-1-06 - Published: 11-1-06
46. The Art of Life reviews
Does art reflect life, or is it the other way around? This piece kind of sounds like it could be a companion to my 'Sands of Time'... it's got the same style...
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-1-06 - Published: 11-1-06
47. More Weight reviews
This is my theory of 'high-school-is-like-the-Salem-Witch-Trials' told in second person form. I don't really know if it makes sense outside of my own head, so feeback would be incredibly appreciated.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 565 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 10-7-06 - Published: 10-7-06
48. A Fighter, a Writer, and Letters from War reviews
Okay, I can hear the music to this in my head, but it works as a poem, too. I think the title's pretty self explanatory
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-26-06 - Published: 9-26-06
49. Echoes reviews
You've waited forever to return to a well loved place...And then get back to realized that it's just not the same...
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-17-06 - Published: 9-17-06
50. Sands of Time reviews
So what happens if you take a book of cliches to the beach? Never done it, so I wouldn't know... but maybe it would be something like this.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-25-06 - Published: 8-25-06
51. Sarania's Love reviews
So here's to the boy who's too good to be true. ...based on a true story?
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-16-06 - Published: 8-16-06
52. Lady Lenore reviews
A love affair with an instrument...
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-10-06 - Published: 8-10-06
53. Hands reviews
So, again, this is proof #2 I shouldn't write form poems... but I still do. This is an odd diamante comparing hands of artists and soldiers... (Don't ask about inspiration- I like hands)
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-7-06 - Published: 8-7-06
54. Breaking Safety Glass reviews
Do you ever get frustrated to the point of needing to do something you'll regret? Welcome to my world.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-5-06 - Published: 8-5-06
55. Forgotten reviews
We all know that feeling when we see the familiar face of an old friend after a long time away...and all they see is another face in the crowd.
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-25-06 - Published: 7-25-06
56. Unhuggable reviews
Random freestyle here that makes me question- how far away is too far for a hug?
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-25-06 - Published: 7-25-06
57. To Memories reviews
This one's an ode to a friend of mine that I wrote upon entering High School ...You know who you are...
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 264 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-25-06 - Published: 7-25-06
58. Wanted: Hero reviews
I wrote this bittersweet, poetic rant following an essay on becoming a knight...
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-25-06 - Published: 7-25-06
59. Voice of the Future reviews
So this is my rant to the grown-up world... Wish they'd listen.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-20-06 - Published: 7-20-06
60. Plea
A kind of desperate freestyle piece inspired by too much music...
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-20-06 - Published: 7-20-06
61. The Burden reviews
Previously entitled 'The Rover'... It's got a fantasy sort of mood to it...
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-19-06 - Published: 7-19-06
62. Circles reviews
This is a semi-sequel to 'Lines' which doesn't happen to be up here, so I guess that really doesn't help.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-19-06 - Published: 7-19-06
63. Moment reviews
What is there to say? It's a cute little thing inspired by watching a wedding...
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-19-06 - Published: 7-19-06
Return to Top