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Author has written 63 stories for Love, Life, General, Fantasy, Friendship, General, War, Nature, School, Family, and Play. Hey all. So if you want to know about me... well, ask. I'm not going to sit here spouting random facts about me 'cause that's just boring. Go read my stuff instead. It's way more interesting... Before you do though, just one note about some of the poems and stories before I get disowned by a few certain friends of mine... Just because it's first person, doesn't mean it's from my perspective. So many people don't get that. But just because I said that, doesn't mean it's not. If you for some reason need to know- ask me. Maybe I'll tell you. Maybe I won't. It's worth a gamble, though. Oh, and for the record, I have gone through and cleared out a few of the pieces I just couldn't stand anymore... Anyway, on with the show. Slow it down Don't dance so fast Time is short The music won't last Carpe Diem, kids- you only get one shot at life. | |||||||||
1. daisyLife for someone of us is dark or mundane... everything is different for DaisyComplete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 672 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-30-08 - Published: 12-30-082. Umbrella reviewsRain doesn't matter so much when we're togetherComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-21-08 - Published: 12-21-083. For You reviewsThe things I do to hear you laugh...Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-21-08 - Published: 12-21-084. Probability reviewsWhat's the probability of you and me? I can't decide if this one is done or not... so suggestions would be welcome!Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-3-08 - Published: 8-3-085. 23 Flavors reviewsMy friends and I have often wondered what the '23 flavors' are that make Dr. Pepper so good... so I decided to write about 23 things that have 'flavored' my summer so wonderfully.Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 217 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-24-08 - Published: 7-24-086. Savior's Dream reviewsa rondeau about God's obsessive love for humanity.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-12-08 - Published: 7-12-087. Je Me Rend reviewsWhen we dance, I surrender. Because it makes us beautiful.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-7-08 - Published: 7-7-088. I Would reviewsSometimes, I feel powerless. Like no matter what I could possibly do, ultimately, I cannot change what matters most.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-2-08 - Published: 7-2-089. Puppet Master reviewsA character study of a sound techie.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,223 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-3-08 - Published: 6-3-0810. Drowning in Grey reviewsWhat happens when 'tolerence' goes too far? My formatting was beautiful... but it all changed when I loaded it in. Oh well. you get the idea.Complete - Play - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,744 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-3-08 - Published: 6-3-0811. Something to Believe InYeah, okay, I took my title from the Ramones... but it fits the story. Mark Dalton's survival depends on his ability to find something to believe in...Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,685 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-3-08 - Published: 4-3-0812. stolen security reviewswe had to write about an article of clothing for creative writing. I chose my brother's flannel shirt.Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-22-08 - Published: 3-22-0813. Hobo Truck reviewsYes, I really drive this thing.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-22-08 - Published: 3-22-0814. Clover reviewsA conceit. From creative writing. Sorrow is like clover... somehow.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-3-08 - Published: 2-3-0815. Yellow Monster reviewsA recurring nightmare of mine... T because it scares me.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 263 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-26-08 - Published: 1-26-0816. Book One reviewsThis isn't going to make a lot of sense... It's the titles of every poem in the book I just finished writing...Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 333 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-22-08 - Published: 1-22-0817. The Madman reviewsOnly a fool would ask for immortality...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-22-08 - Published: 1-22-0818. Girl, in a Nutshell reviewsI guess the title pretty much sums it upComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 279 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-14-08 - Published: 1-14-0819. Dark Eyes reviewsHow can eyes that dark.. be so bright?Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 251 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 1-5-08 - Published: 1-5-0820. Nobody Promised Tomorrow reviewsYou only get one shot at life. That one shot is here and now. Yesterday is gone. Tomorrow may never come. Just here. Just now. Just live.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-23-07 - Published: 11-23-0721. Radio Roulette reviewsWhy can't they play my song?Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-27-07 - Published: 10-27-0722. Time and Fate reviewsAnother dizzy dance of a poem that kind of sounds like Simon and Garfunkel...Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-27-07 - Published: 7-20-0623. Let Me Jump reviewsoh, sweet misinterpretation... Based on a conversation.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-27-07 - Published: 8-27-0724. Fifteen Hearts reviewsThis isn't about a hero. It isn't about a victim. It's just about some strangers who became a family who built a city and changed the world.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 376 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-17-07 - Published: 7-17-0725. Joy Is reviewsSomething optimistic and happy about the good things in life...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-13-07 - Published: 7-13-0726. Static Tragedy reviewsWhen it comes to an internal war... he's not getting anywhere...Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-13-07 - Published: 6-13-0727. Write Me Away reviewsEver wish you could turn over the pen and let someone else write the story of your life for a while? This is to the one person who took my pen away for a while...Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-7-07 - Published: 6-7-0728. Hey Muse reviewsHow come it's the always the ones we want to immortalize in literature that just refuse to be written down?General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 366 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-25-07 - Published: 4-25-0729. ThirtyTwo Tears reviewsTo VT.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-18-07 - Published: 4-18-0730. End of the Road reviewsIt's amazing the things I find when cleaning my room: a half finished poem, memories, and old emotionsComplete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-16-07 - Published: 4-16-0731. The World's Like A Stage reviewsInspired by spending 12 hours straight in a theatre...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 282 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-31-07 - Published: 3-31-0732. What Genre Are We? reviewsMy teacher told us all to write the stories of our lives...and this was my question in response to that...Complete - School - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-16-07 - Published: 3-16-0733. Celtic Man reviewsWrote this for a friend. However, I'd love to get some reviews or advice before I send it on. Thanks.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-17-07 - Published: 2-17-0734. Dawn reviewsCan you imagine having been there to see the first sunrise?Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-23-07 - Published: 1-23-0735. Give it Up reviewsThere comes a time that, no matter how good things used to be, you have to move onComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-23-07 - Published: 1-23-0736. Pickup Truck Memories reviewsMy neighbor and I went stargazing in the back of my big brother's pickup. And so a poem is born. ...I love my neighborhood...Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 228 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-21-07 - Published: 1-21-0737. Sea Song reviewsI've always wanted to write a poem about the ocean. It's so...inspiring. But I've never been able to, until now. So here it is.Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-21-07 - Published: 1-21-0738. Tears reviewsReading it back, I find this poem extrememly depressing. If you're in that sort of mood, by all means, read away. But if that's not your thing, I would suggest finding another poem to read.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-18-07 - Published: 1-18-0739. Always reviewsZach finally learns the extent of a father's love.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 891 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-16-07 - Published: 1-16-0740. My Superman reviewsMy little brother thought he was going to fly like Superman when he grew up...that wish came true sooner than any of us expected.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,681 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-16-07 - Published: 1-16-0741. Catching London reviewsThis is a poetic version of a strangely true event. The weirdest things happen backstage....Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-2-07 - Published: 1-2-0742. Surrender Pride reviewsA plea to a friend...Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-28-06 - Published: 12-28-0643. Tin Foil Armour reviewsSo maybe her defenses really aren't as strong as they seem... I may add more to this, but this is it for nowGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-14-06 - Published: 12-14-0644. Don't Make My Brother Fight reviewsDedicated to my big brother, and to all big brothers the Draft has and will take away.Complete - War - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 228 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-3-06 - Published: 12-3-0645. I Won't Let Go reviewsThere are some people who, when faced with something they cannot handle be that fear, pain, or something else they simply hide within themselves and wait for it to pass. I am one of those people, and I felt the need to explain this.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-1-06 - Published: 11-1-0646. The Art of Life reviewsDoes art reflect life, or is it the other way around? This piece kind of sounds like it could be a companion to my 'Sands of Time'... it's got the same style...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-1-06 - Published: 11-1-0647. More Weight reviewsThis is my theory of 'high-school-is-like-the-Salem-Witch-Trials' told in second person form. I don't really know if it makes sense outside of my own head, so feeback would be incredibly appreciated.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 565 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 10-7-06 - Published: 10-7-0648. A Fighter, a Writer, and Letters from War reviewsOkay, I can hear the music to this in my head, but it works as a poem, too. I think the title's pretty self explanatoryComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-26-06 - Published: 9-26-0649. Echoes reviewsYou've waited forever to return to a well loved place...And then get back to realized that it's just not the same...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-17-06 - Published: 9-17-0650. Sands of Time reviewsSo what happens if you take a book of cliches to the beach? Never done it, so I wouldn't know... but maybe it would be something like this.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-25-06 - Published: 8-25-0651. Sarania's Love reviewsSo here's to the boy who's too good to be true. ...based on a true story?Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-16-06 - Published: 8-16-0652. Lady Lenore reviewsA love affair with an instrument...Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-10-06 - Published: 8-10-0653. Hands reviewsSo, again, this is proof #2 I shouldn't write form poems... but I still do. This is an odd diamante comparing hands of artists and soldiers... (Don't ask about inspiration- I like hands)General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-7-06 - Published: 8-7-0654. Breaking Safety Glass reviewsDo you ever get frustrated to the point of needing to do something you'll regret? Welcome to my world.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-5-06 - Published: 8-5-0655. Forgotten reviewsWe all know that feeling when we see the familiar face of an old friend after a long time away...and all they see is another face in the crowd.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-25-06 - Published: 7-25-0656. Unhuggable reviewsRandom freestyle here that makes me question- how far away is too far for a hug?Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-25-06 - Published: 7-25-0657. To Memories reviewsThis one's an ode to a friend of mine that I wrote upon entering High School ...You know who you are...Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 264 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-25-06 - Published: 7-25-0658. Wanted: Hero reviewsI wrote this bittersweet, poetic rant following an essay on becoming a knight...Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-25-06 - Published: 7-25-0659. Voice of the Future reviewsSo this is my rant to the grown-up world... Wish they'd listen.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-20-06 - Published: 7-20-0660. PleaA kind of desperate freestyle piece inspired by too much music...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-20-06 - Published: 7-20-0661. The Burden reviewsPreviously entitled 'The Rover'... It's got a fantasy sort of mood to it...General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-19-06 - Published: 7-19-06