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Author has written 48 stories for Love, Friendship, Family, General, Politics, Humor, Religion, Life, and School. Okay so I just uploaded a poem around five minutes ago, and I'm sitting here typing another when my yahoo account thingie alerts me that I have mail. And to my surprise IT MY VERY FIRST REVIEW EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!I was so happy I cried..seriously I cried. So thank you very much esoteric-rubbish you made my day! I want everyone to know that I made some typing errors on my poems, but in order to keep the reviews that have been sent to me I haven't deleted and re-uploaded them so I could fix the mistakes. So I just wanted to apologize for that. More people to thank- Michael Aliester Smith(reviewed twice! Twice how cool is that!?), and Createanarchy (this person is definatly one of my favorite authors and reviewers)! You guys rock! My very first day of posting poems and I already have people giving me positive reviews! So thankyou, thankyou, thankyou!!!! Freed by Mercy (also reviewed twice. I feel like a doughnut I'm so happy.)protection-to the top(this writer has some great poetry.),Hemlock, Mithxerra the MoonLily (even though she doesnt agree with my views), Incognegro (gave me some good advice and a compliment!),Temperhemi (thanks much!)Makingituptoher, Etheral, Delium'sQueen (one of my favorite people.), this bitch is shady, jo-joba-music-girl, poetic abortion(Cool name! And even though your not a fan I really like your review, I try to think about what you said when I write.), sharpedgedpen, alice is dying (I like the adoration! And its good to know that someone out there is feeling the way I do, so thanks muchos Alice is dying!), Kerbi ( your review was really sweet and I appreciate the concern, but I still havent changed my opinion. Also I know that all christians are not like that, its just what I was feeling at the time. I "love love love"-d your review.), Rozlin (Your review made me sad, not because you said anything mean or whatever, but because someone else has had to go through that. Thankyou very much though.)Princess-anna57( This one actaully surprised me! I had literally just posted the poem for five minutes and all the sudden I got a review! Ah I love people on fiction press. And thanks for the "write on!"!).jenniferdaly( I cant believe that you called me moving! That is such a compliment, I cant even begin to thank you!),Ashley Hyperkins (She made me cry with all of her incredibly nice and evcouraging reviews! Thank you so very much! You are, most seriously, one of my favorite reviewers.), charmedbuffylova(thanks muchos! I have enjoyed your work immensely and cant wait till your next post!), C Colucy ( thank you for your nice comments. I was glad to find that someone could see images in my poems. It makes me proud!), Dawn Castle (You gave me one of the best compliments I have ever recieved, thank you so much.), Gaurdrail( I am really glad that you enjoyed it. And thanks for appreciating the"straightforewardness" not many people like that.), Teenfreakingangst (Ah! You calledmy poem passionate!Thankyou!),Wild Inside (You really got the poem and thats what Ilike! I hate the fakers to, we're, like... kin or something.),Caralita( I LOVED your review. Thanks muchos for the compliments!), Over-achieving-misfit (Its cool that you connect and your right, "what is a poem without emotion?" Oh and I like you name. Clever!), Noir Fleurir ( Thank you! What does your name mean?), morbid-fantasies ( You said I had talent! Thankyou muchos, deary!), slitwristremix (Ah, cool name! Your review made me consider the way I had written the beginning of the poem. I just might get around to changing it one day...), The Fool On The Hill ( Your name reminds me of my brother...anyway thank you!), Chuff (Did...you...call ME talented! I love your poetry, you and I aren't even on the same level. Your above me :)! ), I hOld tHe kEys oF lifE ( You really connected to the poem and I was happy to know that it was relatable. Thankyou.), Three Cheers for Eve ( Anger is the one thing that I think that I'm able to convey. Thank you, your compliment made me haaaappppyyyy.) HaleyJamesNathan ( I'm sorry that you did that, and I'm sorry that you had to know what that feels like. Its not a good place to be and I hope that you are now out of it. Thanks for the WOW ;)! ), Hallie Stunt ( I like to make people think, if I made them braindead I'd feel a little worried. thanks for the well written compliment!), Persecuted Angel (Seriously, you are fucking awesome.), Ashelin ( Thank you very much!), VampireSesameStreet ( I'm drinking coffee, still havent found real music but I'm searching. And I'm soopah happy I didnt confuse you! I feel all warm inside.) I really appreciate what all of you have to say, so thank you for taking the time to review. And when (if) you do then you get to see your name up here! Yay! Some stuff about me... My name- Michael. Yes Michael you wonderful people you. Sex- I am a girl! Yay me! Age-16 Stuff I like- Well...stuuuufffffff. Why do you want to know all this useless crap about me anyway? Well if anyone wants to say 'allo e-mail or message me at notthecreepyfatguy@yahoo.com HEY GO AND ADD ME ON MYSPACE!!! www.myspace.com/notthecreepyfatguy | |||||||||
1. Habit For a Habit reviewsI took up smoking because of you.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-13-09 - Published: 3-13-092. You're Not Worth It reviewsYou're not worth it, you never were.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-15-08 - Published: 4-15-083. Sweet Things reviewsWhen I first kissed you it was like being transported back to the nervous fumblings of middleschool...Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-31-08 - Published: 1-31-084. Stock Market Jesus reviewsMy heart beating furiously in my chest, remind me with each thathump that..Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-2-07 - Published: 9-2-075. Forced To Pretend reviewsI choose to ignore those glances that you so frequently send her way.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-2-07 - Published: 9-2-076. Easy reviewsAll that I seem to attract are horny losers that think....Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 6-6-07 - Published: 6-6-077. BulletProof Junkie reviewsYou’re a bulletproof junkie girl...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-26-07 - Published: 4-26-078. Enough reviewsSure lets all take a crack at the bulimic whore...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-26-07 - Published: 4-26-079. Sickly Love Poems reviewsThey’re coughing up rejection and too sweet lies.They quietly whisper all the things I’d like to hear you say and then some...Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-26-07 - Published: 4-26-0710. Stage Fright reviewsEveryone’s staring, waiting,For me to say something,Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-25-07 - Published: 4-25-0711. Untitled2 reviewsFuck all of you and your popular drugs, You all say that the trip is what made you...Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: M - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-25-07 - Published: 4-25-0712. Choke On Those Words reviewsYou're nothing.Not even a blip on the screen.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-17-07 - Published: 2-17-0713. Untitled reviewsFickle as can be.I fall in love with the snap of two fingers.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-17-07 - Published: 2-17-0714. My Rant reviewsYou kill yourselves and BRAG about it!Your racist and you LAUGH about it!Complete - School - Fiction Rated: M - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-17-07 - Published: 2-17-0715. I'll Die reviewsA girl talking about how she will die. Slightly emo I must admit.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-9-06 - Published: 11-9-0616. Making Our Mark reviewsSome rockstar teens wanting to make their mark on the world, or at least some messed up kid.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-9-06 - Published: 11-9-0617. Poetry by the Debate Inspiration reviewsI got bored in Debate and wrote a series of poems about thoughts floating through my head.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 303 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-7-06 - Published: 11-7-0618. Gods reviewsWhy we worship the teen rockstars the way we do.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-7-06 - Published: 11-7-0619. For You reviewsThey told me that the worst was overFriendship - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 245 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-7-06 - Published: 10-7-0620. Ponder reviewsI wish I could scream it in your face over and over again until you got it.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-7-06 - Published: 10-7-0621. Your Regret reviewsHow you wished you hadnt or how you cant believe that you didntFriendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-7-06 - Published: 10-7-0622. Fake reviewsThey giggle and hide behinf their fake beautyLife - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-7-06 - Published: 10-7-0623. Take The Drag reviewsFunny how little you see the realLove - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-7-06 - Published: 10-7-0624. Take It Away reviewsCall me a Liar. Call me a fake.Family - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-7-06 - Published: 10-7-0625. Because I Loved You reviewsI cried because you did everything you always told me not to.Family - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-7-06 - Published: 10-7-0626. Insults reviewsI take it out on myself with my own thoughts.General - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-7-06 - Published: 10-7-0627. War Hero reviewsOkay this poem hasn't got much attention but its one of my personal favorites.Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-7-06 - Published: 10-7-0628. Save Me reviewsFor the suicide and those who helped prevent it.Friendship - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 264 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-29-06 - Published: 9-29-0629. Performing reviews"I laugh in order to cover the sob"Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 9-29-06 - Published: 9-29-0630. Force reviews"Your idea of right is..."Family - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-29-06 - Published: 9-29-0631. Unanswered reviews"I prayed to god for him to make you stop but I heard nothing."Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-29-06 - Published: 9-29-0632. Ruler, Ruler reviewsCleopatra, Cleopatra that is who you are.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-19-06 - Published: 9-19-0633. Shattering reviewsshowed me how to gracefully fallFriendship - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 207 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-19-06 - Published: 9-19-0634. Growth reviewsThey told me that regret was guilt and guilt was a lie so I shouldnt feel it.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-19-06 - Published: 9-19-0635. Bubble Gum Bubble reviewsBubble gum bubble carry me away.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-18-06 - Published: 9-18-0636. Inflicted reviewsGET OVER LOVELove - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 232 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-18-06 - Published: 9-18-0637. I Wish You Had Understanding reviewsBreaking down the barriers of the unwilling isnt fullfilling, Dont make me hate you.Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 182 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-18-06 - Published: 9-18-0638. Idol Worship reviewsWhen adoration for a band or a singer goes to far.Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-18-06 - Published: 8-18-0639. Lack of Interest reviewsLack of intrest from a guy makes a girl question herselfLove - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-11-06 - Published: 8-11-0640. Perfect Bigot reviewsThis is a poem about when I asked a couple of questions about God and a woman yelled at me.Religion - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 8-9-06 - Published: 8-9-0641. Your Taste reviewsA girl wakes up in the morning to find she's been used and thrown away, left with only the taste.Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-7-06 - Published: 8-7-0642. Dr Pepper reviewsIts about the killing nature of Dr.P. Anyway read it and laugh.Humor - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-7-06 - Published: 8-7-0643. Happy Now? reviewsThis is on pollution and corruption that I see going on around me with no effort to stop it.Politics - Fiction Rated: M - English - Poetry/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-6-06 - Published: 8-6-0644. Tell Me reviewsThis girl finds out her boyfriend has been using her and questions him as to why she hates him.Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-6-06 - Published: 8-6-0645. The Delicate Few reviewsThis is about how America turns a blind eye to many of the problems that are going on right in front of them.General - Fiction Rated: M - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 230 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-6-06 - Published: 8-6-0646. The Demon reviewsA girl turns to her mother for help when she is in trouble but the mother turns her back.Family - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 227 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-6-06 - Published: 8-6-0647. This Is My Thank You Letter reviewsA girl thanks the person who influenced her most.Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 261 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-6-06 - Published: 8-6-06
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