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Author has written 29 stories for Supernatural, Life, Humor, General, Romance, Song, Young Adult, Love, Nature, Action, General, Mystery, Family, and Friendship. Hey all! I am a girl somewhere on the planet earth who loves to read, act, sing, and most of all write!! I am a sophmore in high school, and LOVE all people who review my stories. The only reason I have this account is to make my writing better, so please give me all the help you can, and do not feel bad in any way for correcting even the tiniest things! Well, on May 5th, 2008 I went up to the Children's Hospital and had a very successful spinal fusion surgery to correct my scoliosis (curvature of the spine) and so I am not allowed to do much this summer! That is a really good thing for you, since that means I have a lot of free time on my hands... but I also can't sit in a chair for hours on end. Tell me what stories or even poems you want me to change or add on to, and I will work on it!! I am doing a lot better now, but surgery has changed the tone of my stories, so basically anything before May 5th 2008 is a lot simpler and in my eyes needs the most help! love and kisses (not really) Ashley My Story Updates: My Name Is Amy: This is a new story that I am actually planning on finishing... ( I know, novel idea for me!) So I would appreciate any help. I am going to have several editors and such outside of this website, but since they know me and my writing they are most likely not going to help me as much as I need. I don't even mind flames, as long as they have a point! If my story sucks, tell me WHY... and I WILL work to fix it. Anyways, this story is hopefully going to go along very fast, so please read and review! If you want to know about anything else please review!! | |||||||||||
1. My Name Is Amy reviewsThis is a sad story that turns into a girl questioning all the things in her life, and discovering that the world is so much more that we will ever know. PLEASE R&R I want critique for even the littlest things! Help me make this amazing!Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 647 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-6-08 - Published: 10-6-082. Wounds and Breaks reviewsA short poem about the capabilities of humans, how we can change the way we do things and influence others around us. Bad summary.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-27-08 - Published: 6-27-083. True FeelingsA poem about tough times in a relationship, and breaking bad news to somebody.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-27-08 - Published: 6-27-084. Ghosts » reviewsA ghost learns the truth about herself, and in the process. . .Supernatural - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Supernatural - Chapters: 9 - Words: 3,192 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 6-11-08 - Published: 8-27-065. Just DanceFeelings come and go, and you never know how they are going to affect you...Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-9-08 - Published: 6-9-086. I Want You To Be HappyA poem I wrote for my brother, who is going off to college.Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-9-08 - Published: 6-9-087. For You reviewsFriends support each other in times of trouble. A poem for a friend going through hard things.Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-9-08 - Published: 6-9-088. FriendsA story that is about one of my friends and our relationshipComplete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-30-08 - Published: 3-30-089. Into the Unknown WT » reviewsA girl has left her unknown village in hopes to find her family and reunite the village, but trouble is heading her way. Please R&RAction - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,220 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-9-08 - Published: 11-4-0610. My Angel reviewsI wrote this after I found out my granfather died, its very touching.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-3-08 - Published: 2-3-0811. Remember reviewsA poem about two girls who lost their parents.Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-3-08 - Published: 2-3-0812. Locked UpA poem about forbidden love. . .Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-3-08 - Published: 2-3-0813. The Way You Make Me FeelA poem that I wrote. . .will write music to it if you like it enough. . .Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-3-08 - Published: 2-3-0814. Love reviewsA poem that I wrote in 7th grade that I just found. . .very depressing. :Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-3-08 - Published: 2-3-0815. Accepting Myself » reviewsTwins hate each other and are complete oppisites. . . . Or are they? PLEASE please please R&RYoung Adult - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 4,709 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 1-21-07 - Published: 9-12-0616. Holding On reviewsThis is a mystery novel that I am going to be submitting a chapter to hopefully every week. It's about a girl who is after a guy who broke her family apart by turning her sister into a druggie. PLEASE PLEASE R&R!Mystery - Fiction Rated: T - English - Mystery/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 253 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-17-07 - Published: 1-17-0717. My Deepest Thoughts reviewsThis is a story that I am writing with a bunch of random things that I think of. Kind of interesting things to think about. Please R&R, be the first!General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-20-06 - Published: 11-20-0618. Dreaming Big » reviewsCrystal goes through the hardships of middle school, while still cracking jokes along the way.Humor - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 567 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 11-20-06 - Published: 8-27-0619. Snow reviewsA poem that I wrote the same time as Wandering and DrowningComplete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-27-06 - Published: 10-27-0620. Drowning reviewsPoem about my life and the guy that I love.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 182 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-27-06 - Published: 10-27-0621. WanderingA poem I wrote late when i was sickComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-27-06 - Published: 10-27-0622. Forever reviewsThis is a poem that I wrote for several reasons, please R&RLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-11-06 - Published: 10-11-0623. Lost Life reviewsThis is a poem that I wrote the same time as Forever, please R&RLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-11-06 - Published: 10-11-0624. Questions reviewsA poem that I wrote the same time as I Saw You, but totally different. I guess it is about how I am feeling right nowLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-10-06 - Published: 9-10-0625. I Saw You reviewsA song that I wrote while I was listening to the news about 9/11 5 year anniversary, not really related thoughSong - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 9-10-06 - Published: 9-10-0626. Ordinary, or Extraordinary? reviewsTay learns that even though she might not know everything that is going on, more is happening then she thinks. Is life as boring as she thinks it is, or are there some surprises for her around the corner?Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 237 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-7-06 - Published: 9-7-0627. Evil reviewsA poem that just came to me as I was trying to write a sonnet for Shakespeare class. Please R and RGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-7-06 - Published: 9-7-0628. Guiding Light reviewsA sonnet that I had to write for Shakespeare class, the first sonnet I have ever written. I decided no to put it to waste.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-29-06 - Published: 8-29-06
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