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Author has written 37 stories for General, Love, Life, and Nature. I'm Naomi. Basically, it's like this: So I ended up here, hoping to receive some intelligent comments//constructive criticism. And please do remain constructive. I'd rather not receive some comment telling me that my stuff sucks without explaining why. I'll try my best to respond to reviews, but I'm pretty pressed for time as it is, so I'm sorry if I don't get back to you. :/ ~Peace and Happiness~ | |||||||||
1. Second Chances?...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-21-09 - Published: 10-21-092. Red SweaterI wear my heart on my sleeve.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-21-09 - Published: 10-21-093. The WindMoving away.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-21-09 - Published: 10-21-094. These Days reviewsOdd.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-21-09 - Published: 10-21-095. TimeAbout attempting to ignore time. R&R please.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-23-08 - Published: 7-23-086. The Love of My LifeExactly what it sounds like. R&R, please.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-13-08 - Published: 1-13-087. Precious Moments » reviewsSnapshots of the happiest times of my life. Short. Free verse. But honest. Real. Read and review please.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 5 - Words: 271 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-12-07 - Published: 11-14-078. Each DayAn old woman, a lost love... sigh Read and Review, please.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-26-07 - Published: 7-26-079. My Poet's Cry reviewsI know the title sounds whiney, but that's not really how I meant to come off. I just was writing, venting, for the sake of writing. shrugsLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-23-07 - Published: 7-23-0710. Nothingness reviewsHmm. Some thoughts I've been having recently about lack of anything and how we, as humans, will never be able to understandcomprehend complete nothingness, no matter how wise we think we are.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-23-07 - Published: 7-23-0711. Not Much Longer NowHmm... I'm not entirely sure. I haven't written in a while, and this is what broke my block. R&R please.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-13-07 - Published: 6-13-0712. Remind Me reviewsAsking for some reassurance. I'm stuck between a rock and hard place in life right now. R&R please.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-3-07 - Published: 3-3-0713. BrokenAbout a friendship... a little more harsh than I really feel, though it's still very similar. R&R please.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-3-07 - Published: 3-3-0714. Blind Lies reviewsI'm not really sure what this is about... but, whatever. Read and review please.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-3-07 - Published: 3-3-0715. Rivers reviewsYeah, this is kinda bad really. I just wrote it without thinking. Short. R&R please.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-29-07 - Published: 1-29-0716. Life Song reviewsMmhmm... I don't really know. It just sort of came out like this. I haven't written in a while? shrugs R&R please.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 250 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-29-07 - Published: 1-29-0717. Grey reviewsAn unfinished little eight line thing that I wrote, and am planning to write more on. An odd mood... Review Please.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-28-06 - Published: 11-28-0618. My Offer: A Deal reviewswell, about when people decide to hide behind clever lines instead of telling you straight up how they feel. shrugs Review Please.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-3-06 - Published: 11-3-0619. Security reviewsNot in the greatest shape, but still conveys the feelings. Friendships falling apart and such. Review Please.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-30-06 - Published: 10-30-0620. Regret reviewsA fight with one of my close friends. Please Review.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-30-06 - Published: 10-30-0621. Please Don't Forget reviewsIn thinking about life, and changes, and moves, I started thinking about my friends... Please Review.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-30-06 - Published: 10-30-0622. Falling Leaves reviewsFall Inspired... Review Please.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-4-06 - Published: 10-4-0623. Hour Glass reviewslife. growing older. losing our innocence. shrugs review please.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-1-06 - Published: 9-1-0624. Robots reviewshmm...yeah. a thought on society. could have been better though...review please.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-1-06 - Published: 9-1-0625. The Question reviewsi'm not sure what inspired this...just a random thought attached to an event earlier this year. review please.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-1-06 - Published: 9-1-0626. Rush reviewssociety's impatience...the rush everyone's stuck in. review please.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-26-06 - Published: 8-26-0627. Lost Hopea veiw of a friend who's stuck in life...review please.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-26-06 - Published: 8-26-0628. Flashbacki just let the poem take me...and this is what i got. review please.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-26-06 - Published: 8-26-0629. The Flame reviewsa candle got my thoughts moving...review please.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-26-06 - Published: 8-26-0630. Alone In The Darki don't usually do free verse, this just...happened. review please.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-26-06 - Published: 8-26-0631. Kiss Me In The Rain reviewsi actually really like this one. tell me what you think...Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-26-06 - Published: 8-26-0632. Innocence Lost reviewsas though looking at a photo of my brother as a young boy...please review.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-25-06 - Published: 8-25-0633. Love In 3 Partsjust a thought, i suppose. love, and it's three stages. please review.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-25-06 - Published: 8-25-0634. Realization reviewsthe difficulties of admitting when you're wrong. when you've lost. review please.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-25-06 - Published: 8-25-0635. Speak reviewsoh, the confusion...to speak, or stay silent. reveiw please.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-25-06 - Published: 8-25-0636. Anywherea thought i had when small town life was getting to me...review please.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-25-06 - Published: 8-25-0637. Love's Suicide reviewssometimes, love kills. review please.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 298 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-25-06 - Published: 8-25-06
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