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| Jack Saucy |
Author has written 43 stories for Life, Humor, Thriller, General, Love, Friendship, General, Nature, Historical, and Fantasy. Hello all! My name's Becca. I'm 18 and a freshman at Western Washington University with a technically undeclared major, but I'm pretty sure I'm going to shoot for Biology/Anthropology. My main project for this site is now complete. It's called "Killing Time" and is a historical fiction about the tale of Jack the Ripper. I write poetry and sometimes prose, though not very often. I really do appreciate critiques with some sort of substance, so if you like my stuff, I'd appreciate knowing exactly what you liked...or alternately, what you disliked. Then I can know what techniques to continue and which to fix. Hit me up. I don't bite. Much. | |||||||||
1. The Orphan reviewsA ruby river rushing through the dams of deadened veins to bring vivacity to an ashen world. A savior. No...A demon.Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-19-09 - Published: 11-19-092. Soul SearchingThis is a re-telling of my worst nightmare. First draft.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: M - English - Poetry/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 723 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-2-09 - Published: 9-2-093. Roses reviewsWe hang here by a thread like the hangman who has lost his last letter...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 252 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-31-09 - Published: 8-31-094. The Strange Life of One Disneyasaurus Childae reviewsDisneyasaurus childae, commonly known as the Disney child star, and the spell-binding tale of its existence.Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 531 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-26-09 - Published: 3-26-095. Dreamscape reviewsWhen a world of grey finds color for the first time...a recurring dream.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 302 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-25-08 - Published: 12-25-086. A Modest Proposal reviewsA play on Jonathan Swift's "A Modest Proposal" for the betterment of the United States of America’s economic condition by developing technology to use organic gas-releases.Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,120 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-16-08 - Published: 12-16-087. Killing TimeJack the Ripper in a tale of madness.Complete - Historical - Fiction Rated: M - English - Mystery/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14,968 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-8-08 - Published: 11-8-088. Ash Tray reviewsBe my cancer, baby. I'm tired of second-hand smoke.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-30-08 - Published: 10-30-089. Tale of A Goldfish reviewsI'm no mermaid. I'm just scales and a gaping mouth, no flowing hair, no siren's serenade...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 228 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-13-08 - Published: 10-13-0810. Synesthesia reviewsA poem about seeing sound.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-9-08 - Published: 10-9-0811. Tantrum reviewsPretty angsty, not very proud of it, but tell me what you think.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-9-08 - Published: 10-9-0812. The Clarity of Emeralds reviewsTentative title A narrative poem that speaks of walking through a redwood forest.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-6-08 - Published: 7-6-0813. Patients reviewsThis is what happens when I get writer's block. Your thoughts?Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-2-08 - Published: 7-2-0814. The Audience reviewsThe last guest, the last listener waiting for the end of decrescendo upon memory's stage.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-23-08 - Published: 6-23-0815. All DolledUp reviewsMaybe someone will pick me up off the shelf...General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-11-08 - Published: 6-11-0816. The Whisperings of Blackened Feathers reviewsTruly, if I had a choice, this would remain untitled because I have no idea what this means. It just happened. Your interpretations?Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-3-08 - Published: 6-3-0817. Untitled reviewsI'm not even sure what this means. It sort of just happened, and I'd love some interpretations...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-1-08 - Published: 6-1-0818. The Checker Game reviewsThere is a strict hierarchy to this war of wit, only those who are dead and those who are dying for the "betterment of the kingdom."General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-25-08 - Published: 5-25-0819. ChokeChained reviewsI'm taking one step forward and two steps back in the choke-chain of footsteps forming the noose around my neck.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-25-08 - Published: 5-25-0820. ShortWaved reviewsTesting 1, 2, 3. Do you read me?Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-13-08 - Published: 5-13-0821. Fallen reviewsExsanguinate your soul of embarrassment, doubt, and fear.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-6-08 - Published: 5-6-0822. The Magic Trick reviewsWill you escape?Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-6-08 - Published: 5-6-0823. Sweet Dreams and Goodnight reviewsNo need to worry, honey, I'm just another monster.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-12-08 - Published: 1-12-0824. Eden reviewsCremated dreams fall around spider-leg hands...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-12-08 - Published: 1-12-0825. The TRUTH Behind Tickle Me Elmo reviewsTickle Me Elmo. Evil incarnate.Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 712 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-12-08 - Published: 1-12-0826. Smoke Screen reviewsLove is ungraspable, like trying to catch smoke with bare hands. I need help with titling this, please.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-24-07 - Published: 1-24-0727. Sirens Tied to a Heartstring Balloon reviewsSing me the song of your soul. Let me feel the melodies of your spirit...Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-27-06 - Published: 11-27-0628. The Artist's Mannequin reviewsHe only recognizes the feelings embedded in the positions the Artist makes...Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-21-06 - Published: 11-21-0629. In the TidesEver heard that there's more fish in the sea? Well, anyone who has told you that is completely right, just wait for the right fish to be brought by the tides...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 214 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-13-06 - Published: 11-13-0630. A Fly Ball reviewsThe poem of how a ball is released from the comfort of a glove...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-6-06 - Published: 11-6-0631. Shed a Single Tear reviewsIt is far too silent for comfort, my beautiful one...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-6-06 - Published: 11-6-0632. A Sketch of Reality reviewsI was inspired by a colored pencil. Seriously. Now, go plan, erase, and sketch your reality.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 10-17-06 - Published: 10-17-0633. A Social Hierarchy reviewsI don't even know if you could call this "prose" or not. Hmm. Well, here's my philosophy on stereotypes i guess.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-9-06 - Published: 10-9-0634. A Knot So Intricate reviewsA poem of a busy mind. I was bored...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 10-9-06 - Published: 10-9-0635. False ComfortsThe poem of when friends break up...which is what I'm feeling right now.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-8-06 - Published: 10-8-0636. Guess What? IT DIDN'T START WITH PHONETAPPING! reviewsThought phone-tapping was bad? Well, the government has been using a little childrens' toy to spy on us all along. CODENAME: FURBY.Humor - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 627 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 10-5-06 - Published: 10-5-0637. Three Letters, Two Words, One Phrase reviewsThis is my poem about a wedding that has been published before. Hope you like it!Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 233 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-5-06 - Published: 10-5-0638. A Pane of Glass reviewsA poem about feeling completely invisable.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 10-5-06 - Published: 10-5-0639. John Doe reviewsThis poem was rated T because it talks about death a lot. It's basically what the whole poem is about, but go ahead and read it.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 212 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-5-06 - Published: 10-5-0640. He Who Held the Night reviewsA Jack the Ripper poem. Hey, I'm "Saucy Jack" Who can blame me?General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Horror/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 256 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-5-06 - Published: 10-5-0641. A Game of Cat and Mouse reviewsCHASE THORTON: His father is dead; his mother, a drunk. He's a loner, misunderstood, and a social outcast. But when his father's killer comes to exterminate the only witness to his father's death, it is up to Chase to escape the mouse's trap.Thriller - Fiction Rated: T - English - Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,147 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-5-06 - Published: 10-5-0642. Barbie: A Friend or a Highly Effective Weapon? reviewsBarbie: next year's weapon!Humor - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 509 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 10-5-06 - Published: 10-5-0643. A March Down the Road of Life reviewsWe all go down the road of life...in fact, we're forced to...but at what speed is our choice.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-5-06 - Published: 10-5-06