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Author has written 35 stories for Romance, Life, Friendship, Family, War, Love, Young Adult, Essay, and Mystery. Hello! I hope you like my stories! Well, read my work, if you please, or just hit the review button to say hi. I can be a depressing writer but I do have a heart, ok?! I find that i can convey true philosophies that I believe in and not all of my work is sad, some of it is thought provoking. If you know who I am, I mean have physically met me, then you may see a poem that I was inspired to write during a time that you probably know of. Who knows, the poem could have been a piece I wrote when I was thinking of you To everyone else, you will get a good look into my mind and get to know me, if you read my work. Anyways, I hope people will read my writings and let me know what they think of them. I really need some reviews please, even some criticism, but no flames I implore you! Now that I'm in college, I have little time to write and I apologize for not keeping up with my work. I just added a few poems, new and more upbeat than my others, but check them out. Happy ending, somewhere a clock strikes midnight, and if i were a princess. Please review them! As an aside, almost none of my friends go here and actually read my work. So I am sending out a big thank you to Julia Gulia and all my other review-ers who do. FAVORITES: Anime:Inuyasha, Fushigi Yuugi, Ceres, Orphen, Alice 19th, Bleach, Absolute Boyfriend Books: Among Whales, The Pillars of the Earth, Forgotten Realms, Mallorean, The Sea Around Us, Redemption of Althalus, Wicked, Wise Child, sigh there are too many! Movies: Pirates of the Carribean, LOTR, UP!, 10 Things I hate About You, RENT, Horton Hears A Who Hobbies: drawing, reading anime/manga, reading in general, writing poems and stories, studying marinebio Quote: "The opposite of war isn't peace; its creation," Mark (RENT) "Two Muffins both alike in dignity.." Nate, "Neighbor hey Neighbor, you want to walk on water then you got to get out of the boat!" The pastor from New Hope Song: Pretty Girl by Sugarcult, Missing Person by Michael Smith, and Every Heart by BoA, Holy Water by Big & Rich, Underground by David Bowie, Tourniquet by Evanescence, Defying Gravity by Wicked, What About Everthing by CarbonLeaf, Dare To Live by Andrea Bocelli, Pain, Animal I Have Become,Never Too Late all 3 are by 3 Days Grace, Beautiful Disaster by Kelly Clarkson, Don't Give Up by Pat McGee, Do You Believe Me Now by Jimmy Wayne, The Change by Garth Brooks, Confessions of a Broken Heart by Lindsey Lohan, Restless, More Time, Again, Nothing Left To Lose all 4 by Needtobreathe, She Don't Know She's Beautiful by Sammy Kershaw, Don't Go Away by Buckcherry, Southern Girl by Joshua Hart (Incubus, too), Polly by Nirvana Heroes: My friends, Gulia, Lanna, Cherry, Diimari and many more; David Fields, he is a marine scientist at Bigelow Lab in Maine and he is so amazing&enthusiastic and I thank him for influencing me in marinebiology just by showing my ocean bowl group about copepods; Rachel Scott, a victim of Columbine who believes kindness is the ONLY way. I agree. If you want me to read your story simply send me a message and it will be done. 98 percent of teenagers do or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2 percent who hasn't, copy & paste this in your profile. | |||||||||||||
1. The Barbed Wire Rose » reviewsLillian Danae accidently kills her very best friend, her parents disown her and send her to her Great Aunt's where in a new town and new school,Lillian must try to heal from her past&move on.Thankfully a boy with a hidden past reaches out to her.R&R pleasYoung Adult - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Friendship - Chapters: 9 - Words: 11,949 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 11-6-09 - Published: 3-8-082. The Dreams Hurt reviewsYour hands are healing my heart, but the dreams hurt so much.. r&r pleaseComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-6-09 - Published: 11-6-093. Mirror, mirrorSHow me the beauty that I don't see. I'm not an angel. I brush my hair, as though I could brush the beauty underneath out. As if I could brush the ugly away. Read and review..pleaseComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-14-09 - Published: 10-14-094. Somewhere A Clock Strikes MidnightA poem I wrote the morning after prom, which was a romantic and friend-filled night. It was more than I would have expected it to be. It downpoured on us as we were dancing to Journey, but I won't ever forget that night. Read and review pleaaseComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-15-09 - Published: 9-15-095. If I Were A PrincessA poem written in a new form. Read and review, I find its good if you've ever wanted to be a fairy tale princess, but life hasn't turned out quite the way you planned it toComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-15-09 - Published: 9-15-096. Happy EndingI want a happy ending a happy hopeful poem in a new format I learned PLease read and review, its very sweet and relatableLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-15-09 - Published: 9-15-097. Better Left Forgotten »A murder in a marine laboratory? That's what Gregory Briggs, an arrogant psycologist, and Michelle Adler, a young toxicologist intern, are out to find out. Includes hidden identities, sarcasm, and red haired, hot tempered female villainy! PLEASE R&R!Mystery - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Mystery - Chapters: 4 - Words: 9,676 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-14-09 - Published: 1-14-098. Shades of Grey reviewsI had a dream that someone I love completely ignored me and was unresponsive and cold. This a poem based on my dream.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-14-09 - Published: 1-14-099. Waiting To See You AgainSometimes waiting is worse than just your everyday pain..Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 242 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-30-08 - Published: 12-30-0810. Too Long reviewsIts been too long since I've seen him, or since I've talked to him.. way to long to go without seeing someone you care aboutComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 222 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-30-08 - Published: 12-30-0811. I WonderAm I already just a memory? Do I even exist? I wonder... R&R pleaseComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-14-08 - Published: 11-14-0812. Anger reviewsI don't have a better title for this, if you have an idea I am open to it. It's about how I feel when I am angry but I hold it all in so I don't hurt anyone with it. R&R pleaseLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-14-08 - Published: 11-14-0813. The Last HugI can't hug my friend anymore, for reasons difficult to explain. But she always gave me the greatest hugs and I miss them so much. R&R pleaseComplete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-14-08 - Published: 11-14-0814. Impossible to Define reviewsMy first taste of love? IF its not love I dont know what it is... "Its a disease that has me trapped...A beautiful disease..."Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-14-08 - Published: 11-14-0815. What is Left?When your heart is broken, and for no reason, what is left?Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-18-08 - Published: 10-18-0816. Let Me Pretend reviewsI told someone how I felt, they admitted feelings as strong..a tiny assumed thought &it was all over before I even got a chance to know him or a chance to love him. I wish I got the chance to..Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-19-08 - Published: 9-19-0817. Is it Real? reviewsA poem I wrote about how I felt about my best guy friend. We went out, and it didn't work out, and now we're trying to fix the friendship. Anyways its pretty good, and from a third person point of view. please r&rComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-19-08 - Published: 9-19-0818. A Sailor's Philosophy reviewsA good inspiring poem, told using metaphors that a sailor would. PLease R and R. Its one of my best and its a happy poem.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 11-30-07 - Published: 11-30-0719. What Irritates Me reviewsA short rant catcher in the rye style about what irritated me one day while I was washing the dishes and watching the news. Its an English Class piece, About The world and its ignorance with money.Complete - Essay - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,077 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-27-07 - Published: 7-27-0720. Minna's Star reviewsTragic tale of two sisters, the younger is voiceless and the elder is trying to solve the puzzle of her parents' death. Trauma, romance, betrayal and sisterly love. R&R Please!Young Adult - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,036 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-27-07 - Published: 7-27-0721. To Put Them At Rest » reviewsTheodora doesn't beleive in love and is hunting the murderer of her family. She created a vow to never stop until she kills the assassin. Then she falls in love...will she let the vow she took control her? Or will she choose love? R&R please!Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 11 - Words: 28,728 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-27-07 - Published: 10-21-0622. My Rebellious and Unrequited Heart reviewsThis is a poem I wrote this year. I really like someone and know it is impossible to love him or vice versa...in other words its not supposed to happen but it kinda is. Very sad and troubling.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-7-07 - Published: 6-7-0723. Your Sorrowful Tears reviewsI was very deppressed when I wrote this...I want to end the hatred I seeStop the world from implosionOr explosionJust let me die andSave your tearsYour sweet sorrowful tears..Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-28-07 - Published: 1-28-0724. Hope's Losing War reviewsThis is yet another of my deppressing poems...it's way morbid. But, please, R&R!Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-7-06 - Published: 12-7-0625. Not Even The Moon reviewsI wrote this when I realized that I had people that cared for me but never took notice. Especially when I felt this way...R&R!Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-7-06 - Published: 12-7-0626. Acid Tears reviewsI wrote this poem two years ago in eighth grade. It was how I was getting sick of making my friends sad, so this poem was created upon a situation where I reprimanded myself.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-4-06 - Published: 11-4-0627. The Wishing Star reviewsThis poem is about how my friend is always there for me no matter what. I wrote it for her to say that I felt grateful and if in any way I could do something for her, I would. R&R Please!Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-4-06 - Published: 11-4-0628. Smile reviewsA poem about someone talking to me and my response about my family life.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-4-06 - Published: 11-4-0629. A Dog's Point Of View reviewsThis is a poem about people and how I feel about war in general. After I wrote it I named my poem Dog's Point Of View because I think that a majority of humans do not think this way as maybe some animals do.Complete - War - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-4-06 - Published: 11-4-0630. Not Real reviewsMy parents got into yet another huge fight. All I want is to be a family again and I wrote a poem to express my feelings.Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 11-2-06 - Published: 11-2-0631. Warmth reviewsMy parents were arguing last night and I went outside and started writing. This poem was how I was feeling when they were fighting.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-2-06 - Published: 11-2-0632. My Fire reviewsThis is an inspirational poem I wrote for fun. it's really deep when you think about it. I won an award for it so R&R and tell me if my poem deserved the award.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 10-25-06 - Published: 10-25-0633. Nothing reviewsYet another of my depressing writings. I think it's good. Please R&R and tell me!Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-25-06 - Published: 10-25-0634. The Rain reviewsSomething that I wrote when I missed a girl. She had just died at 19 years old and neither my sister nor I got over her. R&R please!Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-25-06 - Published: 10-25-0635. A Farewell reviewsSomething I wrote when I was sad. My friends say they love it but R&R please and tell me what you think about it.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 10-25-06 - Published: 10-25-06
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