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The Wandering Emo
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since: 11-09-06, id: 546128
Author has written 1 story for Life.
Finally I have uploaded my first story, a poem actually. It is called "A Different Person" and describes how some people hide themselves and don't show anything about themselves. They hide themselves and forget who they really are leaving only a body inside a shell of insecurities and a mask to hide their unhappiness. I hope none of you are like this and that you will not become a monster like the person in the poem. Please read it and visit the site of my close friend Miomo who is also situated on fictionpress.com.

P.S. Criticism welcome!

A Different Person

Aboard the train
That they call life
After the thought
Before the lie
Against the current
A rock in the crowd
Along this Path
Amidst the joy
Among the People
But never actually there
Behind the mask
Below the shell
Beneath the flesh
Beside the heart
Beyond the soul
Lies a different person
I have yet to meet him
I am sure he is there
But in this hell
Will I ever find Me? 
1. A Different Person reviews
A poem about how some people hide themselves and forget who they really are.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-12-07 - Published: 6-12-07
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