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| aridelaine |
Author has written 17 stories for General, Religion, General, Life, Friendship, Love, and Family. Hello...my name is Ari and I am crazy, not literally, college student that loves to write poetry and short stories; however, most of the time it is poetry. I love to write about life experiences and other things that I come across in life. A lot of my things may have a dark, as other's might say "emo", side to them but I am in no way "emo." I have no life outside of school because I am education major with a psychology minor so I may not post as often as I should or would like to but I am constantly reading other's works. Another reason that any stories that I may post may not necessarily get updated is because I am slightly ADD, sorry can't help it that is just how I was drawn. shrugs shoulders My Policy: If you review my work I will most certainly review yours because I now know you exist. Now about reviews that you may submit please do not post flamers. I can respect that you may not like my stuff, hell I don't even like all of mine, but please give a reason and how you think I can improve my writing. If you do flame me I am apt to block you completely and not review your work. All I ask for is respect and I will return the favor. P.S. my newest work is "The Tempest" and would really appreciate some reviews because I think that it is good but may be able to be improved drastically. It is kinda my baby right now. P.S.S. My next story that I am working on is called What Was Once is No Longer. It is a collection of thoughts and stories some are fictional while others I gather from my own life. It is something that is going to take lots of time but I don't know when I will be putting it up because the order is not right yet! Enjoy and Thanks for reading!!! Ari | |||||||
1. The Lift reviewsIt is set in a hospital elevator and well if I summarize a short story to much it will give away the ending!Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 902 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-10-08 - Complete2. Paranoia reviewsIt is a short story about a ladies paranoia and her life that she leads in fear of the people that surrounds her with an interesting twist at the end!Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,341 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-10-08 - Complete3. My Mask reviewsIt is about the mask that people wear when they are afraid to show who they truly are. I am not happy with the title so any suggestions would be great! R&R and I will return the favor!Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-28-07 - Complete4. Would You still Love Me? reviewsIt is questioning if someone will love them if they only knew the truth! Please R&R and I will return the favor!Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-25-075. The Tempest reviewsIt is hard to summarize properly it is kinda about life and a storm and how anxiety eventually passes. This is the first time I used this mush natural imagery and would appreciate reviews and critiques of any sort and I will return the favor!Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-17-07 - Complete6. It reviewsIt is hard to summarize but it plays off the idea of the the book The Child Called It. This is not my best : please R&R and help me in improve it and I will return the favorPoetry: Family - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2-27-077. Suicide of a Businessman reviewsThis is about someone who has made the ultimate decision about life and death because of money. Please R&R and i will do the same for you.Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 327 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1-29-07 - Complete8. The Haunting Shadow reviewsSo I finally it named thanks to one of the readers. It has a sense of a shadow that is following the narrator around punishing for past actions. Please Read and Review and I will do the same for you!Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-20-07 - Complete9. My Heart reviewsRather short Please R&R and I will do the same for you...recently edited and changed upon some of the reviews.Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 1-20-07 - Complete10. My Walls reviewsThis is about the walls that people build up over time for protection. Please R&R and I will do the same for you!Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 1-14-07 - Complete11. Roses and Dreams reviewsI wrote this when i was bored in English and Econ. Hope you enjoy and please R&R and i will do the same thing for you.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-13-07 - Complete12. What if reviewsThis is one of my first romantic poems I have written. Please R&R and I will do the same for you.Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 1-4-07 - Complete13. Lost reviewsI don't know if it is salvageable but heck I tried. Please R&R and I will do the same for you.Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 255 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1-2-07 - Complete14. Vindication reviewsThis is hard to sumerize but it is about the things that can be shattered so quickly in life. Please R&R and I will do the same for you. use to be called ShatteredPoetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-1-07 - Complete15. Who Am I reviewsUm...I am really not sure where i am going with this exactly it just came to me while I was on a 8 hour trip so. But please R&RFiction: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 425 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-28-0616. The Eucharist reviewsThis poem is about the Eucharist and it kinda is a Catholic thing...there are some lines that corresponds with some of the things that are said at Mass. EnjoyPoetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-20-06 - Complete17. Alone reviewsThis is a poem about suicide that is playing off the cliche cry yourself a river, build yourself a bridge and get over it Please R&R and i will do the same for yours. ThanksPoetry: General - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 343 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 11-15-06 - Complete
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