Just write some poetry and songs on occasion, people I know say they are pretty good, would like to know what other people think about them.

Be honest and tell me what you think, I would appreciate any input either positive or negative.

Thanks

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1. Shattered

Deep attachment often leads to a broken heart

Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-29-07 - Published: 8-29-07

2. Dreadful Toll

the pain of love lost or unattained can cut deep

Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 313 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-22-07 - Published: 8-22-07

3. Razor

the tiny cuts of unacknowledged love can leave their scars

Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 299 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-21-07 - Published: 8-21-07

4. Leach reviews

about always seeking those who are unatainable

Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 288 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-13-07 - Published: 8-13-07

5. Careless reviews

rough poemsong idea, about how the worst pain when someone is interested is sometimes not acknowledging it at all

Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 268 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-6-07 - Published: 8-6-07

6. Incurable disease

Rough poemsong idea, needs improvement, please comment.

Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-25-07 - Published: 5-25-07

7. Hate reviews

Please comment rough poem song ideaneed ideas to improve

Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 394 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-19-07 - Published: 5-19-07

8. Nice Guy reviews

finishes last

Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-3-06 - Published: 12-3-06

9. My Sun

Romantic poem about how important the one you love is.

Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-1-06 - Published: 12-1-06

10. Search reviews

Poem about searching for love lost or never found

Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-1-06 - Published: 12-1-06

11. Dying Moments

Poem with medieval setting about fighting in something you don't believe in

War - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-1-06 - Published: 12-1-06

12. Dream

Poem about teenage love

Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-1-06 - Published: 12-1-06

13. Living in a Second

Poem about how long a moment can be in baseball or anything you love

Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-1-06 - Published: 12-1-06

14. Real World reviews

Poem about what we need to look for both in this world and in the next

Religion - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-1-06 - Published: 12-1-06

15. Alone Now

Poem about depression and how it can feel

Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-1-06 - Published: 12-1-06

16. Help Me God reviews

Poem about letting go of your strugles

Religion - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-1-06 - Published: 12-1-06

17. Beholders Eyes

A poem a longing for someone believed unattainable

Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-1-06 - Published: 12-1-06

18. Brutal World

Poem about what real life can be like

Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-1-06 - Published: 12-1-06

19. Perfect Smile

PoemSong about a love that cannot be attained, possible mortalimmortal theme

Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-1-06 - Published: 12-1-06

20. True Beauty reviews

Poem about what most teenage girls don't realize that a guy will admire

Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-1-06 - Published: 12-1-06

21. Reason to Live

A poemsong about how powerful lust can be on a teenager

Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-1-06 - Published: 12-1-06

22. For You

Song about what we often try to do in order not to burden those we love

Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-1-06 - Published: 12-1-06

23. Misguided

Song about how foolish young love can be, chorus and alt ending attached

Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 240 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-1-06 - Published: 12-1-06

24. Scum

Poem, possibly a song about my feelings on certain aspects of everyday society.Warning, some themes and language may offend

General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-1-06 - Published: 12-1-06