| hmfan24 |
Author has written 17 stories for Love, Young Adult, Life, Friendship, General, Manga, and Romance. 02-03-2013 Yo! I think I'm a lot different now with how I see my writing. Please let me know what you think. I want criticism. But if you do so, make it long and hard. ;D My titles are pretty generic. I only give them 10 seconds of thought. Sometimes they're better that way. Sometimes they're not. The cool part is to search for other stories with the same title and read the summaries. I like that anyway. I stopped taking myself seriously ages ago. I still do it to impress teachers, but my writing is getting to be a lot more natural. Hopefully. I need more critics. 09-27-2008 I joined a while back, now. I began writing fanfiction back in fifth grade (I'm in 9th now), and I started writing my own crap in fourth. I've been writing for quite a while. My teachers say I'm good but I have yet to feel comfortable with a pen in my hand. | |||||||
1. One Last Drink for this Little Soul"You're not the same person when you drink like this." Yeah, that's the point.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Published: 3-24-13 - Complete2. The Fall reviewsA man was asked by his current lover about his past love experiences. He wasn't able to speak the words, but, instead, wrote a poem.Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-3-133. Da Capo reviewsSome people never make the same mistake twice. Some people never make the same mistake thrice. My flaws, however, are the notes in this repeating melody of failure. When will I make my final mistake and find what I want?Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-3-13 - Complete4. Do You Want MeWith some people, it's hard to tell what their intentions are in a bond. Just because they're around you often doesn't mean they have any sort of attachment to you. "Never allow someone to be your priority while allowing yourself to be their option."Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Published: 12-18-115. Wondering Wishing WantingAlliteration with a serious tone.Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Published: 5-7-11 - Complete6. Memento Mori reviewsMemento Mori is Latin for "Remember your mortality".Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-26-11 - Complete7. Get the Door8 years after a young, teenage girl falls for a fruitless pizza delivery boy, she comes to terms with the fact that maybe it was infatuation all along. She wants to move on, but after he gets a promotion, she's suddenly willing to find her love for him.Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,131 - Updated: 9-30-10 - Published: 8-30-108. Boarded Up » reviewsHayato, 16 year old boy, goes to Tokyo to run away from the yakuza. He then finds a broken down boarding house with people in it. He's only the 4th out of 8 to move in. Then a heiress on the run comes to move in and he's the only one who knows her true IDFiction: Manga - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,385 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-27-09 - Published: 6-10-099. Slice of Life: With a Side of ChaosIt began when it ended. From crayons to boys to crayons and boys, a group of artists and writers go about life encountering pains of the past while trying to find themselves as Mangaka to secure a successful future.Fiction: General - Rated: M - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,585 - Published: 11-13-0810. Living Life: According to ThemGrowing in my chest - I'll never be the best.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Published: 11-13-08 - Complete11. Love is Not a GameI'm trying to teach this boy a lesson. He needs my help. It's pretty deep since it came from my sub-conscience. It deals with moving on, as if you were the moon moving on to another day rather night. Each day you live without the sun is a day of pitch blaPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Published: 5-11-08 - Complete12. And So It Ends reviewsI'm not sure how my relationships are. They go up and down with most people. Others are cool whatever I do. And So It Ends talks about how sarcastic I get when my friend starts yelling my head off.I know we're not going to stop being friends because...idkPoetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-16-08 - Complete13. I Had to Move On reviewsIt's cool how I start poems: I heard someone say "I had to..." I completed it with my own words and then BAM, there you have it. I like repetition, and I used a lot of logic in this. This is worthy of a contest? I'm still a little novice at this all.Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-16-08 - Complete14. This Poem is Not About You reviewsI could have made this into a series of poems, but again they're pretty personal. This may be the title of my new book coming in fall or whenever the heck I get some money. I was testing my vocabulary, I knew all these words, but not the pronunciation.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-16-08 - Complete15. Evidence reviewsI'm trying to enter a contest. This poem is a little too personal, probably shouldn't have printed it. I was testing my ability to change tone but maintain a theme. "Tell me now, if you'll see, the evidence I have in me." I might make a song...Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 329 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-16-08 - Complete16. Crushes Never Last10 years have past since graduation. So much can happen in that time. They're reunited after a outcast was brutally murdered and the most popular kid committed suicide. This bring a group to reflect and regroup 10 years after their eight grade.Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 995 - Published: 2-10-0817. Don't Come any Closer reviewsConnect the bolded words for the end of the poem. Friendship, love, and...now I don't want to give away the end! Ever found any further could be the breaking point? Everyone has had a friend that seemed to be love but wasn't. Well..this poem kicks it up.Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 242 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-11-07 - Complete