The new account of Decollage. Some old material is still there- I
may or may not move it.
I don't promise to return reviews.
Why? Because that sort of policy encourages the pat-on-the-head,
sentence long reviews, consisting of 'I like it, write more', or 'I
like it, read my work'. I probably will review your work if you review
mine, but not because I feel obligated to. If I review your work, and
you want to review mine, great, I'm glad- but don't give me a bullshit
review, and don't review my work just to talk to me about a review I
submitted to yours. I have messengers for that.
I like extended correspondences, questions, and random conversations. My screennames on AIM, Y!M, and GoogleTalk are bluecattz.
A Brief Guide to Common Mistakes
1. Commonly confused words: 'Your'
is possession ('your book'), whereas 'you're' is a conjunction meaning
'you are'. 'They're' means 'they are', verses 'their', which is
possessive ('their book'), verses 'there' the place. 'Then' refers to
time- 'then I went swimming'- whereas 'than' is a comparative- 'I swim
faster than you.'
2. Apostrophes: Denote
either possession or a conjunction. For example, 'Lisa's at the pool'
demonstrates conjunction between 'Lisa' and 'is'. By contrast, 'Lisa's
book' shows that Lisa owns the book. Apostrophes are not to be used to
make a word plural. Some words may look strange with just an S on the
end (like Nazis, wanna-bes, and foxes) but if you add an unnecessary
apostrophe, you'll have people looking around for the direct
object.
3. Weak adjective modifiers: 'Rather',
'quite', and 'somewhat' should never be used as adjective modifiers. For
example, 'the pool was quite blue', 'the argument was somewhat
serious', 'the house was rather quiet'. It either is, or it isn't.
Nothing is 'rather' anything. These types of adjective modifiers are a
common mistake of beginning writers, because it's falsely believed that
it makes prose seem more posh. It doesn't. It sounds juvenile,
presumptuous, and it weakens the overall writing.
4. Tenses:
Present: She is walking to the store.
Past perfect: She walked to the store.
Past imperfect: She was walking to the store.
There's a reason third-person imperfect past is considered the
storytelling tense. This probably the most common style. Second person
'You were walking to the store' is annoying, and fiction is escapist-
if I'm reading it, I don't want to have to 'Be the main character!'
First person can be done, but there's the temptation to do it in
present tense ('I walk into the store') which sounds awkward unless it's
done right. I haven't figured out how to write well in first person
present, but I will say this- in my experience, present tense cuts down
on the amount of description. Description is key. Stick with imperfect
past.
5. Show, don't tell: I don't want you to say 'he
was grubby and unkempt'. I want you to say 'his hair hung in greasy
hanks over his stubbled face, dirt smudging his protruding wrists and
caked under his fingernails. The smell of cheap alcohol and urine
exuded in offensive tendrils from his moth-eaten clothing.' Engage all
of the senses if you can- don't make it seem contrived.
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