[Tanka] Reviews are always returned. I replaced the third line. I thought what I have there now sounds better than what was previously there. It used to be The gift of laughter but I wasn't happy with that so I changed it. Any input would be appreciated!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 25 - Published: 10-18-07 - Complete