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Author has written 6 stories for Haiku, Life, and Horror. Hullo. Most stories I post are likely in the "rough draft" stage. Therefore, I would greatly appreciate reviews, especially reviews with concrit and comments on specific parts of the story. I've put "Wolf" back up, with several changes that hopefully make it better. It's still somewhat rough draft-ish, though. I suppose I may as well write something here about myself. I tend to write what I don't like to read. This is because when I read something I don't like, I have the urge to fix it, and thus the urge to write. I'm not necessarily good at fixing what I dislike, but I'd like to believe that I do a little bit of good and that my writing is at least passable. I plan on writing several more horror stories, and the one I'm currently working on is about a zombie, from the zombie's POV. I have begun exploring 1st person POV, since I never used to write in it. I would like to try my hand at 2nd person POV, but I'm not sure I could do it properly at the moment. I am terrible at keeping up chapter stories, so I do not expect that I will be posting any here any time soon. One shots are easier for me to write, since they have a quick plot that begins and ends in a relatively short span of time, and I do not need to think up many characters. I hope that one day I can figure out how to concentrate on a story long enough to write something novel length, since I do have a few ideas that I would like to write out, but that could never be complete in a single chapter. Sometimes I think I might be a little crazy, and sometimes I think I might be more normal than I will ever know. I can be a little over-dramatic, and I desperately want to use words like "phantasmagorical" in my stories, but I have a fear of sounding pretentious when I write. Plus, I can never remember the proper word at the right moment, and then I end up recalling the most delightful words when I'm in no position to write anything. It takes me ages to go back to a story and rewrite it, but my work always comes out so much better when I take the time to rework it. I dislike cliches, but I also think that some of them can be very well used in a story. I'm a total sucker for happy endings, but you will rarely find a happy ending in a story I write. Fluff and cuteness make my world go round, but again my writing contains very little of either. Laughter is the universe's way of making up for pain, and I do try to put humor into my writing when the it will not harm the flow of the story. If anyone happens to read this and feels kind enough to offer beta services and loads of constructive criticism, I would be eternally grateful. If you wish to contact me and for some reason don't want to use a PM, you can email me at mooseydoll@gmail.com. I promise that I, unlike my characters, do not bite. Thank you for reading. I do hope it was somewhat interesting and not terribly boring. | |||||||||
1. Envy reviewsYou wish that you were beautiful, but wishes and dreams come true only in fairy tales and this is real life that you live.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-25-09 - Published: 10-25-092. Flying reviewsI'd like to fly away from here. I'd like to glitter and shine, and fly away from here.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-19-09 - Published: 10-19-093. Masquerade reviewsWe all wear masks sometimes to hide parts of ourselves. But even the masks we choose says something about who we are.Complete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-21-09 - Published: 3-21-094. Moon Dance reviewsThe new moon calls to each of us in a different way. Sometimes, the call is rather... bloody. Warning: contains a vampire.Complete - Horror - Fiction Rated: M - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 883 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-1-08 - Published: 12-1-085. Silent Silver reviewsTears are when the soul is bleeding.Complete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 9-28-07 - Published: 9-28-07