I thank everyone that has commented. Wheather the meaning you get from my words is my own or yours, you leave with an idea that you didn't have before. To me, that is what writing is about. Expressing ones self. Wheather the expressed idea is sad to one and joyous to another it makes no difference. You received what you needed out of that particlar piece. Interpretation counts for everything. especially with my writing. I tend to use metaphors often, just for that reason. I don't want too much of myself in any given piece, just the emotion that was involved.
Still to those that have to comment on grammar only, keep it to yourself. I know I'm not the best, some things do get over looked. The only thing I am looking for is comments on content. If you have ideas on ways for me to imrove my style I gladding welcome them. Like I have said before, content before grammar.
Leave, journey and return unharmed.
Adam
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