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since: 01-10-07, id: 552119, Profile Updated: 02-12-09
Author has written 2 stories for Spiritual, and General.

I've been writing for over 20 years, but I just decided to step out and share my stories. I'm hoping for feedback so I can improve my writing, although I have yet to decide what I'll do beyond that. I am a Christian, and while my stories might not seem to be Christian stories, it is something I strive to change and improve on.

My first story, "Sins of the Father", is something I've been working on for several years. It's the story of a man returning to his father's home after a long absence. While the circumstances surrounding his estrangement from his father are revealed early on, his flashbacks paint a larger picture of his struggles to avoid repeating the same mistakes his father made. This story means a lot to me, and there are many themes of this story that were inspired by my own life, even though it is completely fictional. Feedback is welcome because it can only improve the story. The story has been completed, but I will be posting a chapter at a time as I continue to edit as I go.

I posted "Her Brother's Keeper" because I really love this story even though it has yet to go beyond that one chapter. I have started writing more, but I'm not sure if that will be posted after "Sins of the Father" or not. I do hope to add to it later, but I'm still unsure where it goes from here.

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1. Sins of the Father » reviews
After over ten years of silence, Aaron Kincaid returns for his father's funeral. Reluctantly staying for the reading of the will, Aaron suddenly finds himself responsible for the family he never knew, and the son he never knew he had.
Complete - Spiritual - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 43 - Words: 99,737 - Reviews: 111 - Updated: 4-30-09 - Published: 11-11-08
2. Her Brother's Keeper reviews
Nicole must say goodbye to the only family she had left. This will remain a oneshot for now. I plan to someday write more on this so I'm leaving it as in-progress. I do think it stands alone well though.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,654 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-20-08 - Published: 12-20-08
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