Thank all of you who have left actual coments on my stories. Especially The Astronaut, who left a very long and detailed note with very help full advice, I am taking his/her advise and going over the way I right about certain subjects. I Have struggled long and hard over this and I think I'm going to change the text, I'm a little stuck though. I am sorry for the lack of updating, but I am trying my hardest to figure out the best way and best perspective to write it in. I am realising, that if Jacob is the Narator, then certain scenes would have to be cut out all together, and if it's one of those wise all knowing narator points, then I can't describe how Jacob feels... not a well. or it would seem judge mental. I am thinknig of doing both... somehow, so any helpful advise in this area would be greatly appreciated.
OH GOD NO... NO NO NO NO NO NO NO. DAMMIT. okay, i will not be updating for a long, long time. My computer went horse shit on my, my dad got a virus for me to play with so... um. I LOST EVERYTHING... see what procrastination gets you. i was just about to back up everything and BOOM it's gone. I'm sorry and this is my fault. there is no one to blame but me so i Appologize for trhet inconvienences. it will take a while but i will get up and running again.
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