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Author has written 44 stories for Life, Love, Friendship, and General. I like to keep it short and sweet, but i do get away from that sometimes. I just recently started to write more intently and would like to carry on with the intentions of publishing Something Someday, so please share what you think needs to be worked on and what I do well that I should repeat. I hope you enjoy, and look forward to your feed back, be it good or bad. -Lisa It's never done- -It's only due -Live and Let Live ~________________one of my favorite things about poetry is that it does not always need to make sense to the reader _ but they still understand____________________ | |||||||
1. Always the Same as It Never Is 2Just visualize as you read, I hope it takes you to another place, I'm still working on this one so constructive comments are more than welcome!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 938 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-27-09 - Published: 5-27-092. My favorite part about Me and You reviewsbackwardsComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-26-09 - Published: 5-26-093. Little people hopping around reviewsan artist statement for a photo assignmentLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-17-08 - Published: 11-17-084. Some People Say reviewsWhat I would like to know is if this poem makes sense to you and if you get anything out of it or if it is just easily bypassed. Thanks!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-22-08 - Published: 10-22-085. Plastic SpoonsI was in art class makiing a list of things i needed and this is just what popped into my head. The format doesn't work for me on here so that makes a big difference but let me know what you think reguardless. Thanks!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-29-08 - Published: 6-29-086. he went creating music reviewssays it all. mostly about life. I actually wrote this poem under a restrait but I'm not saying what it is unless you are specifically intersntedLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-15-08 - Published: 4-15-087. Just Friends? reviewsI wrote this a long long time ago. hmmmm I might revise it... but what do you think?Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 255 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-24-08 - Published: 2-24-088. I just hope you realize reviewsaaah life.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-4-08 - Published: 2-4-089. What I had » reviewsshort. just popped into my head. two versions of the last line let me know which one you like better.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-21-08 - Published: 1-21-0810. Surprise Inside reviewsI wrote this for my college writing class. it was under the theme of identity. My teacher thought it was brilliant, I thought she was crazy. What do you think?Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-7-08 - Published: 1-7-0811. Change The World and Paint it Our Way reviews.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-3-08 - Published: 1-3-0812. A Story I Do Not Know reviewswell. the poem speaks for itself. again the formatting is in now way the way i want it to be and that makes a biiiiig difference but let me know what you think anyways : thanks!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-3-08 - Published: 1-3-0813. I Went Back to Being Myself Today reviewsWhen writing this poem I tried to base it of off the poet Shel Silversteins style. Let me know what you thinkLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-12-07 - Published: 11-12-0714. Always the same As it never is reviewsYou're life is always changing, you're always moving forward, we can look back, but not go back. It's never the same, it's always changingLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 941 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-30-07 - Published: 10-30-0715. Short but Sweet » reviewsSometimes i think of cool little three liners but i don't really put them into poems too often so here is my collection specifically for them!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 4 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-3-07 - Published: 7-3-0716. Words reviewsI hate not knowing, but i like that i didn't know.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-3-07 - Published: 7-3-0717. Won't You Tell Me? reviewsEven if you think i don't want to know.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-27-07 - Published: 6-27-0718. That Girl reviewsYou know how you write poems about other people. well i thought if someone wrote a deep insightfull poem about me it might be something like this, so i stepped out of myself and wrote as if from someone else... it's important to me that i get feedback!ThnLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 228 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 6-8-07 - Published: 6-8-0719. Sameness Genius reviewsI wrote this for my college writing class... but i like it so i thought i'd share. what do You think?Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-6-07 - Published: 6-6-0720. Let's Not Say Anymore reviewsWhat do you say we just don't say anymore...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-17-07 - Published: 5-17-0721. Take me with you » reviewstrue story, however, i never told him because i didn't think he would. CHAPTER 2: perhaps i will elaborate eventually, but these two have to do with eachother and don't at the same time. same boy, same situation, different phasesmoods in life.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 2 - Words: 30 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-18-07 - Published: 3-15-0722. I dont have a title yet! read me! reviewsOkay. so i wrote this poem and it is definately not done, and i don't know how i feel about it, but i felt like putting it out there and i hope to get lots of feedback so that i can revise it. so please read and let me know what you think!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-9-07 - Published: 4-9-0723. Sometimes That's the Point reviews...who knows what i'm getting at... but here it isLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 246 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-6-07 - Published: 4-6-0724. A Nice Realization reviewsjust breath, that's all there is to it.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-6-07 - Published: 4-6-0725. Oh it Hurts Holding Back reviewsI just can't get over this boy. I'll always wish that it had ended differently. Please let me know what you thinkComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-26-07 - Published: 3-26-0726. No Title Yet reviewsTrue story but i still dont know quite what i want. i know that the first two lines are kind of done before but keep reading past that, and let me know if you think they work anyways or not. Enjoy !Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-23-07 - Published: 3-23-0727. So Real and So True reviewsJust a beginning thought, shall i go along with it or is it too much the same as the others and not worth... ?General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 22 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-17-07 - Published: 3-17-0728. A purple house with a yellow mailbox reviewshmmm mm m...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-17-07 - Published: 3-17-0729. Light Me Up reviewsjust so.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-16-07 - Published: 3-16-0730. But oh reviewsbittersweetLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 25 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-15-07 - Published: 3-15-0731. This Time reviewsyou probably won't like this one. it might or might not be done.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-15-07 - Published: 3-15-0732. Intense Boots reviewsDo we not like this one? yay or nay?Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-2-07 - Published: 3-2-0733. True and Free and Easy I Suppose reviewsWhy do you make it so complicated, really its soooo simple. Challenge yourself. Note: ignore first line, that is title, not part of the poem.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-2-07 - Published: 3-2-0734. Smear it So Splendidly reviewsIt's a good thing.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-1-07 - Published: 3-1-0735. Used to Be reviewsyes i know the title is lame, and the poem is certainly not phenomenal but... it is me and you can be your own judge of thatComplete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-27-07 - Published: 2-27-0736. Okay reviewsthis is basically my last relationship. it's not formatted the way i want it to be though so it's not as effective. if you can tell me how to format it let me know please ! Thank youLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-25-07 - Published: 2-25-0737. so you say reviewsyou know, i just Don't believe you.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-25-07 - Published: 2-25-0738. A Thousand Cartwheels reviewshas a bit do do with friendship...and boys put together and torn apartLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-21-07 - Published: 2-21-0739. So Shy reviewsIf I was not so shy, this is what i'd do... Just the way I am, you either love it or you leave it, there is nothing I can do about it but hope that you see through it.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-19-07 - Published: 2-19-0740. Today Today reviewsAs much as I love this poem, others don't seem to enjoy it as much as I do but hopefully I will find someone out there who gets it and if you don't get it... let me know why, maybe i am just crazyComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-19-07 - Published: 2-19-0741. Way So Lame reviewsyou write the first draft with your heart. thats what this is. A very confused state i'm inLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-15-07 - Published: 2-15-0742. Matters reviewsI wrote this a long time ago, but it applies to my life now recently. I want to know what you think of it, if it needs to change, what you'd like to see and such. and also what you think it may pertain to and how you can realate to it.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-31-07 - Published: 1-31-0743. Simple as Orange Juice reviewsThis was a tricky one to write, but i'm pretty sure it's complete. I guess you could say it was about love, if that is what you want to call it, perhaps more about feelings in general on life and love :Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-21-07 - Published: 1-21-07
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