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Twilight Starr
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since: 01-23-07, id: 554065, Profile edited: 03-09-08
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Author has written 22 stories for Young Adult, Romance, Supernatural, General, and Biography.

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MY LINKS
FanFiction: Twilight Starr-Phoenix. LiveJournal: twilight_starr.

LINKS THAT YOU WANT TO CHECK OUT
FanFiction about Animorphs: Chicken Paddy.
Great stories: GrannyP.
Good poetry: Sweets555.
Cool stories: ILikePie18.

BETA OPENINGS

I need a beta for Exchanging Karma, Consequences of a Happy Ending, and Finding Hope. If you're interested in any of them, please PM me.

For every 6 reviews I have given I have received 1 back currently as of 03.10.07. My point is if you do review you'll probably get something back.

~Twilight Starr's Profile~

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Now accepting anonymous reviews!

Facts About My Writing

I'm a work-in-progress. Imperfection is a given. (I think that is true of everyone. Just that some people need more work than others.)

I'm bad at writing.

If I were a great writer I would be published by now. My plots are generally all okay (overall), but complex and not highly developed. I try to develop them. I would if I had time. They are developed, but not to the point of professional writing. Do not expect perfection. You will be sorely disappointed.

ALERT: In my stories, I do have symbols signaling a scene change, but FP hates me so it didn't include them. I'm trying to go back through and fix it.

I have very low self-esteem especially about my writing.

MY STORIES AREN'T MEANT TO BE EXTREMELY REALISTIC.
That's why I write fiction.

I do have spelling and grammar mistakes. I'm sort of dyslexic. By sort of dyslexia I do not mean I am. I just think a lot like a dyslexic person and my thoughts get jumbled around in my head. Then things come out all messed up and different from what I thought in my head if I speak or write. Please tell me what I can do to fix those mistakes. Don't just tell me I made them. If I published it I didn't see the errors before I did.

---twilight starr---

REVIEW POLICY:If you review mine and you are nice about it (meaning you don't flame me) I try return your reviews if you are a fellow writer. I review everything I read. So every chapter I read I review. I like to let people know I was there and what I think. I appreciate it when people kindly return the favor. Why read it and not leave your mark?

If I review your stuff it would be great if you would return the favor. People who review get first priority for me reading and reviewing their stories.

----twilight starr----

CLICK FOR WHERE YOU WANT TO GO.

About Me

Facts About My Writing

Faults in My Writing I Already Know About

Reviewer Hall of Fame

My C2

My Stats

----twilight starr----

REVIEWER HALL OF FAME
People who have reviewed more than one of my stories.
(The numbers are in parenthesis are the numbers of reviews)

Always Pencil (9) :::: Blade Silver (16) ::::: sdavis2k (7) ::::: found.eventually (19) :::::: IlikePie18 (14) ::::: Innervoice (8) ::::: J Paine (15)::::: Kendyl Burch (25) ::::: portabellaprincess (4) ::::: random writers block (6) ::::: RoseLife (3) ::::: Silveralsa (12)
::::: sweets555 (14) ::::: the1theonlyshinchan (8)

Thank you so much for your reviews!

---twilight starr---

My Stats (03/07/08)

I am on the favorites list of 74 members.

I am the author alert list of 40 members.

I have submitted a total of 6794 signed reviews.

Total words archived : 353,566 words.

Avg. number of words per entry : 16,836.

Numbers of hits to my profile page : 6529.

---twilight starr---

Faults in My Writing I Already Know About

I don't have all the commas I'm supposed. Where I live we do not put commas in all the place the rest of you do that tell me I missing commas I have no clue what you are taking about. And I have taken several English classes.

I'm not detail oriented. I'm sorry about that. I just don't believe in wasting time writing in a bunch of detail that most people cares about.

I think outside of the box. Some people criticize my writing because it doesn't follow the normal standards. My plots can be complex if that bugs I wouldn't suggest reading my stuff.

I use spell check and edit, but I am only human and I can miss some things. If anyone wants to be my beta please PM. I hope it's someone who knows where all the commas go. ;)

Sometimes I don't explain as much as I should have so I have to go back. I assume people know stuff and they don't know it.

I'm not perfect, but I will defend myself if I feel the need to. I spend a lot of time on my stories and don't like them insulted. I haven't really been insulted on this site before. Although a couple reviews did make me mad.

My character names? Don't comment on them being unusual or unrealistic. No name is unrealistic. That's like saying if your name is different, it doesn't exist. I know they are different. They are supposed to be!

Now you can't say I didn't warn you!

With much love,

Twilight Starr




1. Fayth Required » reviews
COMPLETE! Bad guys are after Fayth because they want information. She has an entourage and becomes supermodel for her family's company, which she didn't want to do for a good reason. An arranged marriage also. Chances of survival? Slim.
Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 11 - Words: 22,701 - Reviews: 93 - Updated: 5-15-08 - Published: 8-17-07
2. Corruption and Innocence » reviews
Agent Bella Dawn and her friends find themselves tangled in a web of deception and lies when they involve themselves in a investigation that revolves around their childhood friends. There's never a dull moment for heiress Arabella Dawn.
Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 10 - Words: 15,528 - Reviews: 54 - Updated: 5-14-08 - Published: 9-18-07
3. Consequences of a Happy Ending » reviews
Sequel to SI. Ashlee is a product of her parents' happy ending. Happy endings are a commidity in a cynical society, which she lives. People hate her because they are jealous. She finds out secrets of her family and just how cruel people can be.
Young Adult - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 9 - Words: 11,295 - Reviews: 41 - Updated: 5-13-08 - Published: 9-21-07
4. Finding Hope » reviews
Sequel to HH. Hope's escape of her father's control was hard enough. Now what will she do with that freedom? Dramatics, romance, matchmaking, and friendship take place in Hope's new found life. Will she survive? Or will the cancer come back?
Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 8 - Words: 11,424 - Reviews: 45 - Updated: 5-13-08 - Published: 8-29-07
5. Punishing the Tormentor of the Starved » reviews
The plan to take down the most popular boy in school sounded good, but not everything can go as planned. Iris didn't want to be part of it although she was. Her evil half sister's appearance complicates matters. And does everybody has a crush on Iris?
Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama - Chapters: 12 - Words: 19,841 - Reviews: 107 - Updated: 5-13-08 - Published: 9-1-07
6. Wasting Your Time » reviews
Reading this journal is a complete waste of your time. I felt the compulsive need to share. I keep hoping this helps and you'll forgive me for putting this online. This is serious, but if you're looking for an actual fiction story look at my other stuff.
Biography - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 4 - Words: 3,229 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 4-5-08 - Published: 3-24-08
7. Unusual Dawn » reviews
COMPLETE! Roxy is in big trouble and it is not because her cheating boyfriend's car was involved in an 'accident'. She is in trouble because she has caught the attention of a certain lawyer who wants revenge against his stepbrothers. This should be 'fun.'
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 15 - Words: 23,373 - Reviews: 141 - Updated: 3-31-08 - Published: 8-29-07
8. Reckoning » reviews
Three girls face challenges and undergo major changes when a magickal war begins. Hopefully they will learn to readjust and fight back, otherwise they will end up dead. Dramatics, angst, and everything seems to take place around them.
Supernatural - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 11 - Words: 29,841 - Reviews: 124 - Updated: 3-29-08 - Published: 8-25-07
9. Dancing Among the Flames » reviews
A man has been in love with his best friend female friend since he met her. Betrayal, matchmaking, plotting, a hunt for a missing princess, and discovery of family take place around him, his true love, and his other BFF. Will they get a fairytale ending?
Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 10 - Words: 22,873 - Reviews: 67 - Updated: 3-29-08 - Published: 8-15-07
10. Exchanging Karma » reviews
COMPLETE! Charity isn't very fortunate. She's the kind of girl that learned how to make her own luck. An exchange program, some bad karma, stepfather, and boys make her life more difficult. Will she make it through with her pride intact? Probably not.
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Supernatural - Chapters: 12 - Words: 23,600 - Reviews: 79 - Updated: 3-25-08 - Published: 9-1-07
11. Places I Thought I Would Never Go reviews
COMPLETE! Something I had to write. It's about mental abuse and a girl's feelings. Involves low self esteem and low self confidence. I wouldn't recommend reading it.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 649 - Reviews: 44 - Updated: 11-19-07 - Published: 11-19-07
12. Misplaced Trust » reviews
Sequel to CC. Nikole's story continues as she tries to locate the AST's missing creations, plays matchmaker with her friends, and tries to stop the people who want to kill her for her money from killing her. WILL BE CONTINUED WHEN I HAVE TIME OR REVIEWS.
Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 5 - Words: 8,612 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 10-24-07 - Published: 8-17-07
13. Persuading the Nonbeliever » reviews
COMPLETE! Keira has man problems. One guy wasn't what he seemed. The other guy was her old crush. She thought she would make both the stubborn bachelors regret their words and fall in love. That didn't work out quite as planned either.
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Mystery - Chapters: 9 - Words: 10,340 - Reviews: 91 - Updated: 9-29-07 - Published: 8-25-07
14. Hold on to Hope » reviews
COMPLETE! There seemed to be no escape in sight for Hope from overprotective males. She attends two different schools. One where she didn't speak. The other she was herself. Her two worlds collided. Problem? Of course. Amusing? What do you expect?
Complete - Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 12 - Words: 22,388 - Reviews: 92 - Updated: 8-24-07 - Published: 8-3-07
15. Shattered, Beaten, and Broken » reviews
COMPLETE! Brianne is an ordinary teen that never expected anything bad to happen to her. Suddenly the evil of the world is revealed to her. About a girl who finds inner strength to take down the bad guy. Warning: VIOLENCE.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 14 - Words: 10,321 - Reviews: 44 - Updated: 8-18-07 - Published: 8-10-07
16. Selfish Intentions » reviews
COMPLETE! Negotiator Ivory Clarkson's life is complicated by a friendship turned romance, her identify, finding her family, unexpected enemies, and being a teen. She just wanted to help people. Too bad some people want to hurt her.
Complete - Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Mystery - Chapters: 10 - Words: 29,304 - Reviews: 27 - Updated: 8-17-07 - Published: 8-15-07
17. Fate » reviews
COMPLETE! Excerpt: I ran in shame. I don't know if I'll ever regret running away even though things happened to me because of it. My soul would have died, but I think I gave up a piece of me when I agreed to Noble's terms. You see, Noble is a vampire.
Complete - Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Angst - Chapters: 9 - Words: 18,630 - Reviews: 39 - Updated: 8-16-07 - Published: 1-28-07
18. My Sweet » reviews
COMPLETE! A vampire hunter finds herself in over her head when she seeks help to avenge her family's deaths and gets involved with a super hot vampire and his halfbrother, who are enemies. And just who is she seeking revenge against? Look for a twist.
Complete - Supernatural - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance/Mystery - Chapters: 5 - Words: 2,932 - Reviews: 42 - Updated: 8-4-07 - Published: 8-3-07
19. When an Angel Falls » reviews
COMPLETE! A story about a girl who deals with the world of darkness, vampires, and other magical creatures. She doesn't realize just how much power she holds. She encounters people that make her question everything she knowns. . . Twist at the end.
Complete - Supernatural - Fiction Rated: T - English - Mystery/Romance - Chapters: 9 - Words: 10,961 - Reviews: 39 - Updated: 7-8-07 - Published: 4-20-07
20. 657 Things » reviews
COMPLETE! Rei crushed on her best male friend. She moved on to dating his older brother. Things are complicated by Rei's secrets and sibling rivalry. After she gave up interest on the other brother that brother started crushing on her. Ah, irony.
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Mystery - Chapters: 15 - Words: 24,436 - Reviews: 42 - Updated: 6-28-07 - Published: 4-28-07
21. Changing Carver » reviews
COMPLETE! Murderers, terrorists, plotting teens, bombs, an unsuspected boyfriend, a mom in need of major therapy, an unwanted father, and her special talent are things Nikole has to put up with. Too bad anger management didn't go well.
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 23 - Words: 55,161 - Reviews: 74 - Updated: 6-15-07 - Published: 2-17-07
22. A Liar's Mission » reviews
REVISED! A very short story. Love triangle: girl, dead guy, and living guy. A druggie finds out death wasn't the answer and becomes his girlfriend's guardian angel. A schizophrenic psychic tries to help two bitter enemies and a girl stuck in between.
Complete - Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,850 - Reviews: 79 - Updated: 3-9-07 - Published: 1-31-07
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