
i prefer to have a friendly/anonymous association with my fellow writers.
i think that the first four chapters of Filth in the Beauty is shit.
therefore it will be re-written.
Attention!
Filth in the Beauty is in the process of being re-written, so far chapter one is up. There is a more defined setting for this one rather than the first version of Filth in the Beauty. Not only is it more defined, the rating has also risen - there will still be references of drugs, sex (a lot of it) and incest.
Concerning your review
- It's not always going to be praised, so be well aware I'm quite possibly going to give you the flaws of your story more often rather than the good parts - I think that'll boost the writer potential (if you have any) to grow. I really don't think reviews of stating 'iloveit' it going to say much. If you want a good review - be sure to PM me back. I usually leave reviews at the last chapter, when I've seen all that you have done and feel you deserve the comment.
Please, do have a good day.
I put down Filth in the Beauty and it will be revised and edited before putting up again. It will be renamed as well. Find it.