| moongazer7 |
Author has written 67 stories for Biography, General, Historical, General, Life, Essay, Love, Haiku, Friendship, and Kids. Hello and Greetings: I am Moongazer, moony, or Rachel, 19, a university student, majoring in philosophy, and a totally blind individual. I live and go to school in California. I am one of those nerdy girls who gets lost in thought, but have a lot of things to say. I have a lot of opinions, and, I am proud of them! I don’t mind sharing them. They are often not very conventional and a bit eccentric. I collect old music for fun, love to debate, as well and I am a hard core conservative. I also love talking to people, taking walks, collecting quotes, and sometimes playing card games. Oh, I also like being a nerd. I am somewhat popular, though, not that much, more like well known, and I attempt to be outgoing, but fail a lot. I enjoy reading, and when I get to it writing as well. I mostly do social commentary now and parables if that.I am not that creative, and art is not really my thing. I mostly write to reason, and to teach. Most of the stuff currently on here are from at least 2 or three years ago. If not 3 or 4. My oldest piece is from my sophomore year in high school, and, I am suppose to be a sophomore in college. I have done a lot of growing, so keep that in mind when critiquing unless the author’s note says otherwise. I welcome critique but don’t be surprised if I pass on editing an old piece because I’d most likely agree with you and insist that I need to edit it completely. Otherwise, I really absolutely love reviews, and the more honest and critical, the better, at least in my opinion, so please review away! I am a university student, so I don’t have a lot of time, so you won’t really see that much up here that’s by me, and, most of it would probably come from assignments. I am not too sure what else to say, so if you want to know anything else you can ask me. Please feel free to pm me. | |||||||||
1. Who's Rachela brief eight hundred word snippet on Rachel, her life, and thoughts. A closer look at the writer and reader, the thinker, the student, and the individual. come along with me, in a wonderful journey to discover something fresh and new about a person!Fiction: Biography - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 827 - Published: 7-30-112. ignore just file transferingaaaFiction: Biography - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 707 - Published: 6-13-11 - Complete3. So, Who is Rachel?I discuss certain aspects of who I am and reveal some long time unexpressed thoughts on myself and my past behavior.Fiction: Biography - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 827 - Published: 6-3-11 - Complete4. Why Tred Blindly reviewsthis essay discusses why we must use our minds and think about the various situations we encounter and why we must think ahead.Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 525 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-3-11 - Complete5. War Terrorswarning: violence, strong language, and PtsD. A veteran of the viet-nam war, who tries to live a normal life. The broken man has little success as he lives with PTSD. Watch as he struggles to live with constant disruptions to his day by his disorderFiction: Biography - Rated: T - English - Horror/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,253 - Published: 1-8-116. Advice Collumns From Your Dearest Friend » reviewsA collection of little chapters on how to write good stories. Advice is dished out so come to take your share!Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,034 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-8-117. Humans Don't cause Warming reviewsan argumentation of why global warming doesn't exist, the first chapter is my abstract.Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-8-118. The Question Of The Cold War reviewsLooking at an issue of capitalism and communism. It discusses what side I chose and why.Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,101 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-8-11 - Complete9. Overcoming LifeA Challenge I faced while in school, a valuble lesson learnt about honors and balance.Fiction: Biography - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,085 - Published: 1-8-11 - Complete10. I Wonder Regretfully reviewsA letter of sorts to people that don't like me. A statement of a kind and a way of peaceful communications!Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 251 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-12-10 - Complete11. About Rachel reviewsA bit of a thing on me. I just talk about things...Fiction: Biography - Rated: K - English - Drama/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,976 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-12-10 - Complete12. What God? reviewsAnother question asked since the beginning of time! This one is, does God exist? Is there a good enough reason enough to belief? I explain my position!Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Mystery/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 480 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-12-10 - Complete13. Views on The War On Islamic Rule reviewsA look At the War On Islamic Rule and why it matters. I speak about why we should be fighting and the enemy we are facing. I state the enemy clearly and explain them. Rated T for sensitive topic.Fiction: Essay - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 577 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-12-10 - Complete14. Writing Philosophically reviewsA look at how to write a meaningful piece from an author that writes many philosophical stories!Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Mystery/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 838 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-12-10 - Complete15. The Mind At An End reviewsA scientific and philosophical look at writer's block and what to do when you counter this deadly disease!Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Mystery/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 531 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-12-10 - Complete16. Life's Purpose reviewsThe eternal question, What's the meaning of life. We all have different answers right? Has there ever been a definite definition? Is there one?Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Mystery/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-12-10 - Complete17. Life And Proper Attitude reviewsThe eternal question. Which should one be? Narcissist or confident? Should one only care there self or look to others as well? Should bask in there own Glory?Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Suspense/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-12-10 - Complete18. Life And Death reviewsA story about what I think about the after life. How do we know? How is the mystics right? I expand on a few things!Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Mystery/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 370 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-12-10 - Complete19. Happy Days Are Here Again reviewsA junior thesis. I did mine on FDR and his involvement on the second World war. How did he affect the progress in war?Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Drama/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,217 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-12-1020. Accessibility Is Key reviewsA rant or ramble from me. I discuss how important accessibility is to a disabled individual, along with discussing my current dilemma!Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 956 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-12-10 - Complete21. A Wonderful Read reviewsA book recommendation. It contains A summary and it's major themes. Rated T because No kid should read this anyways. It's pretty darn heavy matterial.Fiction: Essay - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 792 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-12-1022. The Teacher's Pet For The Month reviewsHow wrong can a day go? How wild can a class become when an unpopular girl wins student of the month? Is it difficult for civilized people to become savage like?Fiction: Kids - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,766 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-12-1023. A Child's Mind reviewsA Piece containing thoughts a baby might have throughout the day. What could they possibly be thinking?Fiction: Kids - Rated: K - English - Humor/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 911 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-12-1024. Illusion And Fiction reviewsA mock of Kantianst metaphysics. defending the Kantian view on observation or illusion and explaining how and why it works.Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Mystery/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-5-10 - Complete25. In Defense Of The RightA rant and also a review. A comeback to a person who tried to defend the healthcare bill and how it will not work. I also speak about capitalism and how it works along in presenting the differences between a democrat and a republican.Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,909 - Published: 4-5-10 - Complete26. war letter reviewsA letter for my history class. a lady writes to her husband who is in world war II about society and it's changes in terms of opportunity for jobs. Also it portrays how this lady feels about the opportunity and jobs.Fiction: Historical - Rated: K - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 523 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-5-10 - Complete27. Almost Eighteen And Not Eight reviewsA short reflection of turning eighteen and adulthood. A sentimental piece. My hesitancies, worries. Also, a bit on how it is not going to be like any other year. Reflected are my true feelings and thoughts on the matter.Fiction: Biography - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 559 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-5-10 - Complete28. The Social Order Of Two Societies reviewsThis is a second paper for last years AP World history class. It compares and contrasts social aspects of China and india.Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 701 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-5-10 - Complete29. The Collapse Of the Classical Empires reviewsAn essay I wrote last year for my AP world history classs comparing and contrasting the collapse of Rome and China.Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 546 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-5-10 - Complete30. Advice In Writing reviewsA two years old guide in elements of writing and how to do it. Warning: extremely fan-girlly and no real critique, wel, you can critique but I will under no circumstance fix this one. I want to preserve my 14 and a half or maybe even 15 years old style.Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,240 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-28-10 - Complete31. Philosophy reviewsA persuasive Piece detailing how philosophy is essential to life in a whole, and how the different branches are important . Speaks mostly about ethics and epistemology but I also mention Metaphysics, politics, and esthetics. T for style and word choiceFiction: Essay - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-19-10 - Complete32. Call Of LawA persuasive essay on people who break small laws that monitor bad ethics. It describes why I disagree with breaking these and How they effect society in a big way. I reason with readers on why it is important to society to follow them.Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Crime/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 886 - Published: 3-19-10 - Complete33. Glorious History reviewsA book report on The Glory And The Dream by William Manchester, which is a history of the United States from 1932 until 1972. This history book covering forty years of history covering presidents from Franklin Delano Roosevelt to Richard NixsonFiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,204 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-19-10 - Complete34. The Act Of RememberingA careful reflection and an act of reminiscing the past two years of senior high. An analysis on my overall character and changes I have made. Also included are reflections of pieces of work I have written. I have posted all of them on here at one time.Fiction: Biography - Rated: K - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,373 - Published: 3-19-10 - Complete35. A Friend TO RememberA medium length poem speaking about friendship and true exceptance of values. I discuss why my friends have influence me so much. It's a thank you note of sorts, but also an explor of what I think friendship means or rather how friendships should be.Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 228 - Published: 3-19-10 - Complete36. War JorunalsA fictional series of different letters and journals that fictitious soldiers of War World I wrote for themselves or to their family back at home. It describes some sceens of war and what goes on in their heads. Please Critique. I've never written on war.Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Horror/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 788 - Published: 3-19-10 - Complete37. The Stance On Life reviewsDISCLAIMER: FICTITIOUS quotes! An article on why abortion is rather wrong and why life is far more important. Individuals fend for the socially conservative ideology of pro-life and how abortion would be immoral. A Stance on how life is good and necessaryFiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 411 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-19-10 - Complete38. Seagull Attack reviewsDISCLAIMER: fictional so please don't take this seriously as truth, it didn't really happen. AN article detailing events concerning a seagull attack on a boy at lunchtime and the effects of it. Quotes and high school talk included for your entertainment.Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 359 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-19-10 - Complete39. Romantic Witman reviewsLooking at what witman wrote.Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Mystery/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 219 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-16-10 - Complete40. Love And LustA philosophical examination of what love is and how such an ideology operates along with an explanation why it is important to understand how to love. I also clarify some right ways ways to go about seeking love and some misconceptions of how to find loveFiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Mystery/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 219 - Published: 3-16-10 - Complete41. Lost Characters reviewsA paper analyzing Ernest Hemingway's The Sun Also Rises and the characters within that novel. I explain who they are and why they are considered the lost generation.Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,301 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-16-10 - Complete42. Discrimination reviewsConcerning internment camps in the 1940's that Japanese Americans on the west coast were required to stay in and there supposed ideology.Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-16-10 - Complete43. Dear Editor reviewswritten as if it was 1937: A letter to a Ficticious Editor of a Ficticious isolationist newspaper, concerning President Franklin Delano Roosevelt's Quarantine Speech, which they had published, and whether if I agree. I explain in detail my reasoning.Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Parody/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 613 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-15-10 - Complete44. Eccentricities reviewsA poem. Is it so odd to be a bit different? Is it so wrong to be strange? Is it so bad to not follow convention? Is it so wrong to be not well liked? Is It so bad to be out of societies norms? Is it so wrong? find out inside in this poem of mine!Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 402 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-28-1045. Fishing For Understanding reviewsAn ordinary day turned in to an extraordinary one when an extraordinary event and certainly unexpected event happens! Watch as this not so ordinary day on a fishing boat unfolds! to...Fiction: Biography - Rated: K - English - Drama/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 507 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-28-1046. The Group Spirit Mechanism reviewsA philosophy article I drafted for the school newspaper on The School and group spirit. Utilizing philosophical text, this piece goes in depth about the ethics and morality one must follow to have spirit.Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 660 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-24-09 - Complete47. Declaring War On Terrorist Goons! reviewsA write up where I pretend to be a yellow journalist in the last decade of the 1800 and the first decade of 1900. This article is about how joyful it is that The Little Splendid War is actually Happening.Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 290 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-24-09 - Complete48. Hey, You Racist! reviewsIs The word racist being miss used or over used? In This piece which was originally for the school Newspaper, I explore the impact of the word Racist being miss used and over used. I explore consequences and the reason people use the word in such a way.Fiction: Essay - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 388 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-24-09 - Complete49. Blind BlissA detailed description of a camp for mostly blind folks, and memories of my experiences along with opinionated commentary about the blind subcultural world that a majority of blind folks are involved with. Warning: Some negativity and anti blind grouping.Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,338 - Published: 11-24-09 - Complete50. Socrates reviewsNot much of a biography, but a little piece telling you the basics on socrates.Fiction: Biography - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-17-09 - Complete51. RKN reviewsShort version of the actual title. The poem is actually only R and K. It's an acrostic poem about me and telling you about myself. It uses the letters of my first and middle name.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Mystery/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-17-09 - Complete52. An Ode To The Supreme Objectivist reviewsAn ode to Ayn Rand. I speak of her achievements in poem format and how great I think she is.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 260 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-17-09 - Complete53. SE Asia reviewsIn this acrostic poem I talk about South East Asia.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-17-09 - Complete54. The Guide To effective Review Communications reviewsThe official title has one more word, but it won't fit, so sorry. In this essay I go over practical and effective ways to review someone and explain why it is a good idea to do it this way. I hope that this practical guide will aid you in your reviews.Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,876 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-17-09 - Complete55. History is? reviewsI define history, proceed to tell why it is important, and the purpose of the subject.Fiction: Historical - Rated: K - English - Mystery/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-17-09 - Complete56. Constantinople reviewsA piece speaking of constantinople. I examine several aspects of constantinople.Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 423 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-17-09 - Complete57. A For Apple To Z For Zebra reviewsA humorous piece on why I organized my profile a certain way. I explain in a humorous philosophical way why most things is alphabetized.Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Humor/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 294 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-16-09 - Complete58. The Split Of Germany reviewsDuring the cold war Germany was split in to several regions, the russian, American, and the french. I explain the philosophy in which they split up on and how it all holds up.Fiction: Historical - Rated: K - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 530 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-16-09 - Complete59. GPA Problem reviewsA fake Satirical article in which I address the problem of GPA effecting the sporting part and how such a policy might not work for the best. Written as a newspaper article, but none of the names are real.Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Drama/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 674 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-15-09 - Complete60. Ego! reviewsThe act of self love, and having pride in yourself. I describe the feeling and explain why it is good. Self Esteem!Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-15-09 - Complete61. The Irrationally Immoral Collective reviewsA piece describing a character in animal Farm and the leaders in the USSR. I explore the philosophy used under the communistic state and how it works.Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Horror/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 782 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-15-09 - Complete62. Respecting The Rich reviewsThis poem speaks of the Upper class also the "filthy rich." I defend them and examine how they do good for our society and exactly what they contribute to the world.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-15-09 - Complete63. Miracle Metal reviewsThis is a short piece on a fictional character in Atlas Shrugged. It goes through his struggles. I go through the reasoning behind his struggle, and finish off in mentioning how the problem is resolved.Fiction: Biography - Rated: K - English - Drama/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,240 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-15-09 - Complete64. Give Me Intelligence! reviewsA poem about the lack of intellectual capabilities in this era and how more must be gained. I explain the effect of the lack of intelligence in today's society.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Drama/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-13-09 - Complete65. Total War Justification reviewsDuring the early Twentieth century, we had a series of two world wars. in this essay I explain the justifications in which a few countries in Europe based their involvement in these world wars on.Fiction: Historical - Rated: K - English - Drama/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 701 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-13-09 - Complete66. In Defense Of Mighty Morality reviewsA piece defending the stance on why a person's moral convictions is more important then a big government. I explain why it is good to keep your morality in check and logically walk you through thinking about it.Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 327 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-13-09 - Complete67. Objectivism reviewsA biography of the Late MS. Ayn Rand and a detailed explanation of her philosophy. In this essay I discuss what this Objectivist philosophy is and a bit on her life and character. Also, I do summarize a few of her works, such as Atlas Shrugged.Fiction: Biography - Rated: K+ - English - Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,920 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-9-09 - Complete