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since: 04-03-07, id: 562562, Profile edited: 11-01-08
country: United Kingdom
Author has written 8 stories for Fantasy, Supernatural, General, Mythology, General, and Romance.

~Previously known as aphrodite ivory~

My policy is to try and return all reviews that I recieve...

I wish it were other peoples too :(

Review "Anonymous Romance" or "Crossing" as they are the ones I think about most.

If you do review, then thankyou!

"Woad" and "The Butcher and the Teapot" are a little gruesome so beware the squeamish!

Any reviews are welcome... in fact I especially enjoy critical ones as they help me to improve my writing better.

Check out my forum! http://www.fictionpress.com/ft/562562/1282/1/


Stories Authored: (8) . Favorite Authors: (0) . Favorite Stories: (5) . C2 Communities (0) .


1. Anonymous Romance
Romance is done differently in Berele's city. Messages and gifts are left in locked boxes across the city for ones beloved but they are never meant to know who you are until the end when you're already engaged. It proves to be interesting.
Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,004 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-31-08 - Published: 8-31-08
2. Poetry reviews
My first go at poetry... Therefore it doesn't rhyme and isn't too high brow. This being acknowledged all criticism is welcomed! I will add more as I go along. Also the format didn't go as I originally wrote it as fictionpress wouldn't let me. Damn them!
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-26-08 - Published: 2-26-08
3. The Beggar reviews
A short story on a beggar. Written under time constraints for an exam but hard to revise without tearing out its basic meaning.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 551 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-10-08 - Published: 2-10-08
4. Faerie Tail reviews
Just a snippet I wrote a while ago. A half parody of fairy tales. I'm trying to decide whether to continue or not.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 354 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-26-08 - Published: 1-26-08
5. Crossing » reviews
Reviews are welcome although I do need to edit the first chapter. Work is at current suspended on this. [It is about a girl who finds out about the backstreets of a city in a fictional victorianesque age.]
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 5 - Words: 6,439 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 1-11-08 - Published: 4-7-07
6. Woad reviews
About ancient events in a woodland clearing. Short and complete.Slightly gory but only depending on how vivid your imagination is.
Complete - Mythology - Fiction Rated: T - English - Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 339 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-9-07 - Published: 8-9-07
7. The Butcher and the Teapot reviews
Don't take this too seriously... Just something I wrote for an english class once. Rated T for the bit of gore at the end.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 693 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-4-07 - Published: 5-4-07
8. An Apparition reviews
Work done for class... Review it and see what you think, it contains a ghost and is based on a family story. Set in England, 1950's
Complete - Supernatural - Fiction Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,279 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-17-07 - Published: 4-17-07
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