Update: October-14th-09

This is all part of the revision of my fiction. Yes I've deleted my chapters, but they will all be back up in a few days time. If I don't delete everything and start over the next few parts wont make sense to any one but me.

So again thanks for your patience. It would really tickle me something fierce if you go back and read the revisions and then tell me what you think. Maybe point out errors? Tell me about sentences that don't make sense or don't sound very pleasing. I'm asking you to bash my writing, in hopes that if you do I will improve.

thanks,
vigilante fever

Alright; here are the face's I picked out for my characters, the wonderful banners are made by Chester/driftin away.

Melvin T. Bentley/ Chloe Darkstone: still haven't found a good one for her, so no banner yet.

Jack Williams: haven't found one for Jack either...any ideas?

Ralph Wayne (Ralphie): He's like this guy, except bigger.

Leo & Donnie Ashutosh: These two we're the only ones that I modeled after a celebrity. Mostly because Steven Strait is hot.

Shawn Collin (Ace): I really love this actor, he's so awkwardly cute- which suits Ace quite well.

Derek Denton: This is him pretty much, but imagine him with a big, charming smile.

Aaron Song (Rocket): I think Rocket is my favorite character.

Meriwether Astley (Brit): I could not, for the life of me, find any red head celebrities that fit the bill. So Rupert will have to do.

Thanks again Project Fiction for the amazing banners!

I've gotten lots of pretty banners from quizilla readers. Thanks to all who made me these lovely banners!

thanks again for my first banner kaightee00!

thanks to burger-king-queen for this amazing banner!

this amazing banner was made by monsterlilian666.

Thanks to xtwilighttx for this gorgeous banner!