Heya.
The name's PerpetualMotionDevice, a lowly n00b to fictionpress. I picked this as a title cuz...well...that's what I am I guess. I'm hoping this weird-ass name will get me a few readers for what I have in store actually, because I have this unquenchable curiousity for writing. I'm not gonna be satisfied until I figure out what makes writing good or bad, or at the least until I get a potshot and write one good thing that people like. Hopefully poetry, because it consistently continues to frustrate me by refusing to take a freakin' DICTIONARY DEFINITION. Gr.
...anyways...I'm here, I'm writing, and I'd like some feedback if you have the time. And please...pleasepleaseplease, if I submit any prose, be brutal about it. I've been told that I can do stuff really well-written-like, but that's not nearly all there is to a story. So spare a few seconds to read a scrap of poetry or a bit of prose for this lowly authoress (right, I'm a girl) and submit an honest review, a'ight?
A'ight.