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jmaster363
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since: 05-09-07, id: 567147, Profile edited: 09-06-08
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Im jmaster363(That is all).Im new here and was a member of the sister site but i realized this was a cool site aswell

Not much to know about me except i always insert my name into most of my stories somehow(Jalen btw) i also have alot of characters in my story smoke

My favorate anime is One piece it inspired my story D.H.U along with HunterxHunter other anime i like are bleach desert punk Air gear and too many to count.I can also say i greatly enjoyed part 1 of Naruto but despise part 2

D.H.U

Story:The story of a troublemaking boy who always would fight during the summer.To solve this problem his mother gives him a book so long it will take him the whole summer to read he finds hat the book never ends and is transported within the book and now is on a journey to make his way home

Begining Saga

New world Arc(Chapters 1-3)

Jalen finds himself in a new fantasy-like world after reading a book also picking up to new companions and finding himself as a military dog(Referances:MAR:The way Jalen arrives in Gozen is nearly the same fashion as Ginta Torimizu main character of MAR)

West town Arc(Chapters 4-12)

Jalen,Angela and Nesa accept there first mission to retrieve the stolen goods for West town from a group of mountain bandits(Referances:Journey to the west/Dragonball,Z,GT:Besides the fact that Dragonball itself was based off the book Journey to the west and the town is named west town the villains are based off of characters from Dragonball)

New people(Chapters 13-17)

After defeating west town bandits Jalen and co meat Musukoori a boy in a small village being pestered by a demon after comfronting the demon it is revealed it was Musukoori in disguise after a short battle a man from the military is sent to kill the beast in Jalen's place but instead him and his assitant are beaten and Musukoori begins to travel with Jalen afterwards they are given a mission to kill a group of pirates but after finding them they battle and become friends then head back for central HQ to train

Characters

Jalen:A troublemaking boy who loves to fight especially in the summer he is very respective of his friends and would fight for them in all situations.The second he enters the new world he imiediately he quickly gains 2 allies Nesa by saving him from a pack of dogs and Angela after he deafeated a group of Mystic's she saw his powers and instantly decided to go with him as her escort.Jalen hasn't mentioned word of his home or earth since the first chapter implying that he does not wish to return to earth and wishes to stay in the fantasy world.Before entering Gozen he was constantly fighting which mixed with his fire abillities makes him a force to be reackoned with he also seems to show great wittiness in battles such as figuring out the technique to beat Yarabe later beating Gandes and Lun zua with brute force he seems to have a dislike for his mother and taks to her as though they are on the same level despite this they share 2 common traits there smoking habit and love of fiction

Abillities:Jalen has the best fighting skill of his group due to the fact of before arriving in Gozen he had already been slightly trained in martial arts and led a gang his dragon abillities doubled these abillities along with his flame based attacks making him incredibly strong,though he is not as fast as Doroki or strong as Yajuumi,He appears to be idiotic in most situation but can quickly adapt to an opponents moves and shows wittiness in battle

Attacks

Dragon pistol:A quick punjch where Jalen aims for the gut while his fist is on fire

Dragon tripwire:A plain method of tripping a person by sliding there legs under the targets feet

Dragon shotgun:A blazing punch that takes incredible strength and hurts to use usually stuns the enemy

MOETEIRU NO RYU HANE:Jalen's strongest attack seen so far he spreads his arm apart and sets the ablaze and runs swiftly appearing as a phoenix and charging the enemy

Chir/Nesa:A shapeshifting cat who was saved by Jalen and now referse's to him as boss.Nesa also seems to be fairly intellectual himself figuring out how to defeat the Aikatank in a matter of seconds just by its design and intrance.Nesa's Magick ability has nothing to do with combat so for defense he created a weapon that was a mix of a hammer and a slingshot that fired bullets and had the same impact as if it were a gun it's hinted that the many pouches he wears contain the amo for this weapon.He is also very naive for instance he was running up a pole from dogs when Jalen first met him even though he could have simply flown away

Abillities:Nesa is not very strong or fast but is an able inventor and created his very own weapon combined with his flight ability and above average intelligence making him a dangerous long ranged foe,but when in close range combat his ability greatly decreases becoming near non existent as seen whenhe fought Lun zua at a distance he had shot him using his slingshot getting a direct hit but in close range was quickly slaughtered

Angela Nephalom:A princess who wishes to return to her home country for an unknown reason and uses Jalen and Nesa for help.Jalen calls her princess as a nickname along with Nesa and a few other characters.It appears she has some small fighting abillity as she hoes into martial arts poses when tense she also carries a chain link whip on the waist of her skirt.she is also the most caring and heartful of the group but also the weakest as she seldom fights and may even be afraid too and when she does her tactics consist of her running while her spirits work for her.The big sister of the group keeping everyone on track and in check her and Jalen are often quick to bicker yet seem to stand eachother her and Nesa seem to be close casually chatting with each other despite his earlier suspicions of her and seems to have a small crush on Musukoori or atleast finds him attractive as she always blushes in his presence

Abillities:Angela shows very low fighting ability only fighting twice and loosing the first she uses intelligence and relies on others for protection which was the reason the adventure started,her abilities lie in her star cards which call forth spirits from another realm to assist her she also has a whip she carries but has never used

Musukoori:A boy who pretended to be a demon in order to protect a small village of people from the government.Newest member of the group and most knowledgeable uses a very dignified form of alchemy where he controls ice.He seems to not get along with Jalen calling him idiot every time the chance arises and hasn't interacted much with anyone beside him minus the casual hi he seems to not be one to easily open up to others.Also most girls find him attractive though he dosen't seem to notice or pay attention or is possibly just dense

Abilities:Musukoori is possibly the strongest of the group showing great intelligence combined with his ability to shape the air into ice of nearly any shape or form he desires as his strength compared to others isn't remarkable it is a feet in itself as he can lift his weapons which are composed of solid blocks of ice he also tied with Jalen as there fight was interupted and discontinued

Attacks

Ice form:Musukoori's signature ability it is used to form things from ice including boulders blades icicles mallets and other things

Lin:The next emperor in line of the country of shin who is searching for immortality.He is travelling with Jalen to pay him back as he ordered his servants to attack him he is also engaged to Angela though he talks about her as more off a sister.Lin does not use any known magick instead relying on his quickness and his schimitar and a tattoo on his hand that seems to generate energy

Tabe:A servant to Lin and an able swordsman he talks of Yajuumi marrying his granddaughter while batting him

Unamed servant:A servant to Lin who hasn't talked as of yet and is mistaken for a boy by Musukoori during there fight until she is unmasked.She uses a form of alchemy in conjugation with kunais to bring things to life and manipulate them

Yajuumi Akua:The prideful swordsman of the same pirate crew as Palone and an x bounty hunter a man of few words he tied with Jalen in a battle using his blade and can hold his own in a battle very well he is the 2nd mate of the unamed pirate crew and supposedly the strongest member more so than the very captain of the ship.He is found in extreme rage at the thought of his crew dead

His past was revealed in a flashback he came from a small village where an epidemic broke out that killed his mother and his father had left a month before this his mother told him to become strong and take his fathers sword they eventually get found trying to sneak aboard a ship which happens to be carrying slaves he is beaten and his brother was raped due to his feminine appearance after the ship is destroyed by pirates they are found by students of a dojo out with there master from there they train to become strong and after awhile his master killed him for his blade he meat the Wiseman pirates years later

Abillities:Yajuumi is effectively the strongest and most durable of the group and has shown to be a great swordsman trained as a samurai his skill is incredibly powerful as it has it's own form and can be projected

Ali baba(Doroki):Doroki is the holder of the title king of thieves and is first introduced stealing from his mansion though his main goal was to steal a genies lamp and sell it to Erazor Djin in exchange for the cities princess who was going to be sold as a slave after retrieving the g enies lamp Erazor crossed him and used its abillities to become incredibly strong once he and Jalen defeated him he began to travel with him and his friends.His abillities consist of him hiding many knives and is more than likely a mystic that can conduct lightning through his body as if he were a human lightning rod

Abilities:Fastest of the group growing up as a thief he is incredibly sneaky to the point his footprints don't make noise even when he is running.His magick is based off of electricity which he can conduct through his body like a rod and uses it to charge his kicks

West Bandits

Yarabe:A novice samurai working for the west town bandits.He was apparently the weakest member as the leader states "Maybe if they can defeat Yarabe i may finnally be able to have some fun" and also the fact that Jalen defeated him so fast he didn't even know his name.Him allong with the rest of the west town bandit's lived in a temple since birth.A referance to Yajirobe of dragon ball

Aikaruia(Aika):A high ranking subordinate of the west town bandits who seems to be very loyal to there cause who also has a very strange way of dress similar to what is worn on earth..The pronounciation of his name is really Aikaruia though it has many spellings.Though Aika is a Mystic himself his ability's have no use inside true combat so he resorts to using a high powered tank as his weapon though Nesa quickly figured out it's weakness and defeated him soon after.His appearance also closely resembles Krillin from DBZ only shorter and with a cat like smile.Him along with the rest of the wes town bandit's lived in a temple since birth.A referance to Krillin

Lun Zua:The insane leader of the west town bandits who appears to be mentally ill and have 2 personalities he first created the west town bandits after overhearing the plans from Luxus to overthrow the temple after its destruction his 2nd personality was born soon he turned into a madman who only cared about having "fun" and money along with his friends created the west town bandits of which he originally wanted to call the Lun bandit's.He was arrested by the military police and is now imprisoned.A referance to Goku

Gandes:A monk looking member of the west town bandit's he was alongside Aika when they came to attack Jalen and the others.He took advantage of the fact that Jalen couldn't see at the time while fighting him though he was beatin by Jalen after he made his arms go numb forcing him to use a dagger inside of his mouth to fight which pierced his skull.Gandes has no magic and uses a monk style martial arts to fight.He like the rest of the west town bandits lived in a temple since birth

Military

Jack Demoness:A Lt in the military that found Jalen and asked him to be in the military in the first place he is seemingly care free but very intelligent and knowledgeable of Jalen's powers he also does not to seem to care much for the king as he didn't even flinch at the thought of his death and almost seemed dellited in it he gets along well with Jalen though on bad terms at first they seem to have come to some sort of friend type relationship and talks casually around him along with his assistant his powers apparently have to do with explosians or demolitian of some sort as he was nicknamed 'Bomber' by the king

Aoi:Demoness's personal assistant who shares a strong bond with him she is also a weapon specialist and always carries 2 pistols and is an excellant spy.She is also very kind letting Angela and Nesa stay at her home while training with Benkei.Nesa remarks her as very attractive

Colenel Varse Lamarr:A well known colonel working for the government he seems to be a no nonsense type of person and knew Wyt on a personal level

Siege Crozer:A high ranking general of the military who seems to be disliked by the rest of the colonels for his smart alic wisecracking attitude despite constantly wearing a playful smile like a fox

Cornell Destruce:A sleepy high ranking lieutenant who dosent seem to talk much unless embarassed

Wyt(Dimenos):An x police officer who supposedly died in a fire saving a child and now presumably wears a mask because of it.He was sent by his master Natas to offer an alliance between him and the government.He was good friends with Varse in his days as a police officer

Sir William:The leader of the nation's army resources he seems to be like a father figure to those under him and is usually quite cheerful yet very sharp and powerful for his age he posses extraordinary fencing skills and is strong enough to knock Jalen off his guard completely with barely a swing and seems to have taken a liking to him.He has gone to great lengths to assure the death of Jalen and his friends after hearing he is a traitor

Jade:A Brigadere General within the military who constantly wears a mask and even goes as far as killing a subordinate after he sees his face,He uses some form of freezing fire ability to fight.He is massively strong and the strongest character shown at this point he was strong enough to take out everyone at sinking sands single handedly

Zenith:A part of the bounty hunting duo working with the government.He is apparently the ladies man type and was first seen surrounded by women his weapon of choice is a giant double sided viking war axe on his back.He's kiled Lyra and her brother Tampa so far

Yamiyama:A part of the bounty hunting duo working for the government.He is very quiet and stern with his work unlike his partner but seemingly dislikes fighting as the only time hes showed force was to destroy dynamite headed his way.His trademark weapon is 2 revolvers he uses

Circus of fear:A group of privateers working with the military who's ship has a giant circus big top on it

Raz De Cruque:The leader of the circus of fear who was sent to kill Jalen and his friends he is never shown to fight but instead orders around his crewmen to fight for him

Harle:A presumed acrobat as she wears a leotard and killed Wiseman.She is named after Harlequin clowns

Binaz:A clown who uses knives for fighting he killed Palone

Wiseman Pirates

Wiseman:The leader of the wiseman pirates he is called cowardly by his crew and talks in a very polite tone similar to Palone.He was thought to be killed by the circus of fear but him and Palone survived to fight Jade and die by his hand

Tampa:A small boy on the same pirate crew and the main demolitionist he is very short tempered and looses all intelligence when angry he fought Nesa and uses dynamite to fight.He was thought dead but fought alongside his sister against Jade

Lyra:The archer on the same pirate crew as Palone and Tampa and like Tampa is quickly angered but instead of using dynamite she fovuses her attacks by using arrows.She was thought to be killed but showed up alongside her brother to fight Jade

Palone:The 3rd member of the same pirate crew that Tampa and Lyra belong too seeming to be much more level headed and kind hearted Palone is hasty to fight but is presumed to be about as strong if not stronger than Musukoori and even got along with him in contras to the rest of his pirate crew.He was thought dead but showed up to fight Jade

Others

Medusa:The girl who trained with Musukoori and Jalen under Benkei and seems to have a crush on Musukoori and greatly respects Benkei caling her beutiful her magic is unknown but seams to deal with snakes

Benkei:A woman who has great control over magick and is a close friend of Jack Demoness she seems to not.A habit of hers is to appear without close due to the fact she cannot tell whether she is clothed or nude.She taught Jalen,Medusa and Musukoori to better control magick mostly off screen

Angela(Earth):A kind girl and Jalen;s first friend in the human world after moving to japan she is a very ditzy yet well educated girl who bears a resemblance and even has the same first name as Angela from Gozen

Terminology

Dranus:The form of currency used in Gozen the symbol is a capital D with 2 lines going through it in the middle

MagickThe substance of power Mystics use to mold there powers

Mystic:Those that can mold and control Magick

State Military:The Defacto united government in control of Gozen



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