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| GhettoBread |
Author has written 6 stories for Family, General, General, Love, and Romance. I live in California. Big fun here. . .I can't even surf, yeah. I WAS: GhettoBread: I took that name because in the movie "Freedom Writers", there's a part which refers to the whites being called "wonderbread" and the blacks "The Ghetto" and I'm like half and half so I was GhettoBread. Fear me! (technically, I still am ghetto bread but that's only because I have not chosen a different name that I liked so...) I like reading, and while I don't hate reviewing I don't like doing it. If I feel like it's needed then I shall suck it up and do it. Needing: hasn't updated in billions of years, not enough reviews even though it's AWESOME, or just because I plain-jane LOVE it and want to share my love! :) Can someone please tell noobies NOT to put "I suck at summaries" in their summary? Their summary is a representation of their work! How do they think they'll get attention if they basically say that they can't write a story? A summary doesn't have to be this intimidating thing. A sentence or two's fine, and if you work those sentences, people will see it. It's not the end of the world if you don't have a good summary. Make the writing good and people will flock to you. I don't like self--criticizing authors. | |||||||||
1. Rant of a Mad Black Woman » reviewsCh2. I don't understand why everything has to be one or the other. One parent drinks alcohol thus they are an abusive drunk. Sometimes a mother or a father can enjoy a generous amount of liquor and not beat their children."Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,142 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-13-10 - Published: 3-15-092. Misery reviewsMarkus, oh Markus, oh Markus. What is he ever to do? He wants to feel loved but his potential lover is unloving. Why can't he have the romance his mother and father had?Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,266 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-6-08 - Complete3. Your Black Slave love poem reviewsThis is a poem I made last night 2/28/8 , reviews are appreciated and loved, same goes for criticism. It can be read from either perspective boy or girl , I personally was thinking boy when I wrote it, but don't let that stop you. NOT HISTORICALLY REAL!Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 186 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-29-08 - Complete4. A Poem reviewsI changed it to a poem now, because I didn't like the dream part It hurts...Like I lost something I've never had...SomeonePoetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-26-07 - Complete5. Kiss Me reviewsoneshot We hadn't been the best of friends until I tackled him into a 2 inch deep mud puddle, after that I had all the respect I needed from him.Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,901 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-17-07 - Complete6. Tell Me the Truth As I Grew reviewsNo I wasn't mugged, raped, jumped, abused, robbed, or anything else it may seem like. But I feel strongly about this poem between me and this person. We never had a real relationship, probably never will.Poetry: Family - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 238 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-12-07
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