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Author has written 18 stories for Fantasy, Life, Humor, Fantasy, and Love. Ramenluver Hey y'all, I would appreciate it if you would check out J.L. Hastings stories as well. Believe me, she is a wonderful writer, and you can't help but get attached to her stories, so if you're in the neighborhood, send her a review. Thanks! Reviews-- Chances are, if you review me, I'll gladly review back. I love giving constructive criticism. The reviews I give are honest ones, and I always try to point out the good and bad things about your story, ways you can improve it, grammatical errors, etc. I don't give people a pat on the head, because that doesn't really help you with your story. Oftentimes, when a writer freaks out over a review, I just want to tell them this, "I know you keep acting like I just insulted you baby, but how do you think babies grow? They fall and they skin their knees occasionally, and they get picked on by bullies, and sometimes they even get rocks thrown at them. However, if they are resilient, and they roll with the punches, then they grow up to be strong, healthy adults." Same thing with stories. Accept constructive criticism as it is: not something to make you feel insulted, but something to help your stories grow. My stories-- Ariana, Be Forgotten- Is discontinued for now. Just don't read...trust me. Old stuff. I plan on rewriting it. This story is my literary baby, so I'm going to stick by it and hopefully get a more up-to-date version posted soon. Unborn- Daniele Harper is just your average teen with bad luck. But when her rotten luck ends up ending her life, she becomes sworn in as a grim reaper. She is promised a new life if she can complete her task. But her job has more twists than she bargained for... It is a very twisted story. Soul Sworn is the second book. Reborn is the third. And a word to the wise to all those plagiarists out there. If you even think of stealing my work...I will hunt you down, rip your heart out, and feed it to the shark masquerading as my lawyer. :) Love you guys! -Ramen | |||||||||||
1. Celestial reviewsYou were one of those people with eyes that resembled black holes...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 8-22-09 - Published: 8-22-092. Perfection's Flaw reviewsMake of it what you will...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 7-28-09 - Published: 7-28-093. Prisoner reviewsSomeone who still hasn't finished their prison sentence....Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 3-31-09 - Published: 3-31-094. Locks, Keys, and Memories reviewsA person suffering from a failing memory. Any constructive critism is welcome.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 11-17-08 - Published: 11-17-085. Unborn » reviewsDanielle Harper is a sixteen year old prone to more fatal accidents than your average teen. But when her unfortunate bad luck ends her life, she is faced with the dilemma of fulfilling the job of a grim reaper. Full summary inside.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 17,236 - Reviews: 118 - Updated: 7-18-08 - Published: 12-8-076. My Sun reviewsA metaphorical poem about love lost. Simple, but I like it anyway.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 6-23-08 - Published: 6-23-087. Bath Time reviewsI don't know. It just came out. XDComplete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 3-3-08 - Published: 3-3-088. The Daydreamer reviewsA person who is oblivious to someone trying to torment them, because they are daydreaming to keep the pain away.Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 2-27-08 - Published: 2-27-089. The Death of a Murderer reviewsA murderer realizes the penalty of his actions. The title may be a bit misleading...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-6-08 - Published: 1-6-0810. In The Eye of the Beholder reviewsIn The Eye of the Beholder...not everything is what it seems.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 11-28-07 - Published: 11-28-0711. I See Beauty In A Stick Figure reviewsSomething very close to me. About learning to love who you are for what you are. Make of it what you will.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 11-7-07 - Published: 11-7-0712. Modern Day Cinderella reviewsJust something I made for fun...is a list of chores given to a girl by her mother...Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 9-9-07 - Published: 9-9-0713. Ariana, Be Forgotten » reviewsAriana, a waitress working at Spireturn Inn, finds out that she is destined to be a savior of sorts to a dying religion. She is paired up with a vampire and necromancer by fate, and has to fight against terrible odds. Is DISCONTINUED.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/General - Chapters: 7 - Words: 16,265 - Reviews: 74 - Updated: 8-31-07 - Published: 6-23-0714. Death reviewsJust a quick poem about death. Tell me if it's any good.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 8-19-07 - Published: 8-19-0715. Existence reviewsAnother muse inspired poem. I personally like this one.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 8-18-07 - Published: 8-18-0716. I'm At Home reviewsAbout a man who runs away from home, leaving his five year old without a father. Years later, they are reunited, but not in the way that she hoped...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 7-2-07 - Published: 7-2-0717. The Poorly Rich Man reviewsAnother depressing poem I wrote about a year ago. For some reason, this poem sounds better when I don't give away the plot in this summary.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 6-28-07 - Published: 6-28-07
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