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since: 06-16-07, id: 571560, Profile edited: 08-27-08
country: United States
Author has written 15 stories for Fantasy, Life, General, Friendship, Essay, Love, and Fantasy.

Name: Lina

Age: 20

Type: Human

Bio: I’m reluctant to give away any personal information that may compromise my safety; however, if you’d like to learn more about me feel free to IM me.

Interests: Writing prose and poetry, Violin, DDR, RPGs, Fencing, Anime, Music, Puzzles, Photography, Drawing, Sci-fi, Astronomy

Favourite Series’: Star Trek (TNG, DS9, Enterprise , Voyager, TOS), Earth Final Conflict, House, 4400, Heroes, Bones, Stargate SG1, Battlestar Galactica

Series In Progress: Star Trek Original Series, Bones, Stargate SG1, Battlestar Galactica, X-Files, Babylon 5, Angel

On The Waiting List: Got anything you think I'd like to watch?

AIM: NoSou13

For More Information: http://nosou13.deviantart.com/

If you decide to e-mail me, please make the subject clear. Put 'fictionpress' into the subject and I'll definately look. Just a 'hello' I may not recognize as not spam. =)

I’m on this site due to my sister’s positive review of it. Please visit her: empath89

I think critiques are extremely important to a person’s development as an artist. I encourage anyone who reads my work to comment on both what you find positive in my writing and where you think improvements can be made. Please be respectful and don’t just bash my work if you don’t like it, but don’t be shy. I need to know what I’m doing wrong so I can fix the problem areas.

I started writing Rook in my junior year of high school and have finished my personal editing phase of it. I have had 5 people read and help me edit it. I do hope to publish Rook, and want it to be in the best condition it possibly can be for this endeavour. I will take all suggestions seriously and will respond to all comments. If you have any information on publishers or agents PLEASE tell me. The internet is so unhelpful.

Without giving too much away, because that would ruin the mystery behind Rook, I’ll try to give as best an overview as possible. This book covers the journey of a boy, Rook, who is 12 years old and has amnesia (or so he thinks). He has been adopted, and when a strange and unfamiliar creature washes up on the shore of his village Rook’s life turns upside-down. Rook follows a recurring dream, but to what end?

As of June 24, 2008 I have removed Rook and will be replacing it with its most updated version. (Chapters 1-11 out of 17 are up!) As I get more views (so i know people are reading it and there's a point to updating) more chapters will be posted. If I find there’s no interest in this work, though, I’ll stop updating… so if you want to know what happens you have to tell me you’re interested. =D Do note that I will NOT post the last two chapters. x.x Though I doubt this is good enough to steal I don't want to take any chances.

For a better understanding of the setting and Gods in the world of Rook do read the Creation Myth. It's in poem form and acts as the prologue. You don't need to read it to understand Rook, but it should be a fun read anyway =)

I will also be posting Irea. (Chapters 1-7 are up!) This is the second book in the series. It's considerably more mature and, perhaps, realistic in the attitudes of characters and the events. Still fiction! Irea is an Angel who's views about her people are, let's just say, not the most positive. For her traitorous thoughts, she is sent to a school for girls where she is to train to become a member of the Moon Guard. Her goal: To reach the highest post possible so as to bring peace between the Angels and Demons.

Also comming up are my poems!! Yes, oh so exciting. 10 are up, more on their way.

I would like to take the opportunity to thank empath89, Koki Enwai, and Twilyt for your support on Rook. Thanks so much you guys.

If I start reviewing one of your works I will continue to do so until I'm done. I promise. Just be patient with me because I'm a very slow reader and have to put a bit of time into editing. I hate leaving off a chapter unfinished. If you want me to look over something feel free to ask. I'll get to it as soon as possible.

Hopefully, I'll be active here during the summer! Weeee!!

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"The strength of a civilization is not measured by its ability to fight wars, but rather by its ability to prevent them." - Gene Roddenberry




1. Irea » reviews
It is said that the Angels exiled their criminals to the south. The land untouched by suns became home to the Demons who have been at war ever since. Irea's quest for peace becomes entangled by the death of an ally. Critique Encouraged.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 7 - Words: 23,647 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-27-08 - Published: 6-29-08
2. Rook » reviews
Rook's 12 w/no memory of where he's from, & no explanation as to why he hasn't aged in the last few years. When a creature washes up on the shore & he begins to have recurring dreams, he gets dragged into an adventure few dream about. Critique Encouraged.
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 11 - Words: 32,295 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-27-08 - Published: 6-24-08
3. Notes for the General Writer » reviews
I've encountered a lot of people who've told me they want to write, but they don't know about what, how to start, or lack inspiration. I've come up with notes that may help. Give it a look. Now includs notes on critiquing and grammar. Suggestions welcome.
Complete - Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,403 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 6-30-08 - Published: 7-19-07
4. Shattered Reverie reviews
Preview: What is that sound? Do you hear it? Turn down the music, and just listen. Yes, that noise. The kind only the patient hear. The kind that wakes you in the night, as your body drips with fright. Critique Encouraged.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07
5. Empty Canvas reviews
Prev: Oh I have seen these words before Cast upon a closing door When it was tried Too many years ago And even your most gentle touch Will turn wilting flowers into ash Will make the sky turn black with rain And send the crows about again. Crit Encouraged
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-28-07 - Published: 7-28-07
6. Butterfly Wings reviews
Preview: I'd follow the wings of the wind To the ends of the Earth And fall over the edge Just to see you smile. Critique Encouraged.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-23-07 - Published: 7-23-07
7. Forgiveness reviews
Preview: I walk through the valleys Remembering the days The moments in the past When we would play all day. I trail along the mountain sides Go up the grassy hills Stare at the sunset At the beauty it held within. Critique Encouraged.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-18-07 - Published: 7-18-07
8. Winter Ashes reviews
Preview: The skies have grown a velvet blue And trees a tint of green The death which came with winter Melted with the spring. Critique Encouraged.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-11-07 - Published: 7-11-07
9. Even Angels Carry Guns reviews
Preview: The Earth has aged It has changed And wars have raged. From instict To standing on two feet From horses To vehicles And schedules to meet. Critique Encouraged.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-11-07 - Published: 7-11-07
10. Introduction to a dream reviews
Preview: Wake me from this dream I'm having I've had it one to many times Every little thing is glaring Shadows are consuming light And I'm still stuck within this world Though I've tried with all of my might. Critique Encouraged.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-3-07 - Published: 7-3-07
11. Mirrors reviews
Preview: Madness is the soul The soul stolen by reflections. Critique Encouraged.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-30-07 - Published: 6-30-07
12. Crimson Pain reviews
Preview: Cries echo swiftly Through the land upon which we live Raped of its beauty With every breath we give. The gods look upon us With no words to speak For the gods may not exist And every heart leaks. Critique Encouraged.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-25-07 - Published: 6-25-07
13. Childhood reviews
Preview: I remember How it used to be When all around us Was just a fantasy And I remember All the childish games When all the skies Gave way to endless planes. Critique Encouraged.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-22-07 - Published: 6-22-07
14. Angel reviews
Preview: Glowing wings of shining lights Sacred angel of the knights Casting shadows as you go Flying high as light may show. Critique Encouraged.
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-22-07 - Published: 6-22-07
15. Creation Myth » reviews
Preview: Peace preaching Serphas took up arms, Set up fortress to defend the calm, Claimed never to strike first, But torturned Demons with their thirst..... Creation of the world in which my book takes place. Critique Encouraged.
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Tragedy - Chapters: 4 - Words: 4,684 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-21-07 - Published: 6-21-07
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