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Author has written 61 stories for Love, Life, Friendship, Song, and General. Hi my name is Ardath King my nickname and pen name is Ardie I live in Lansing Michagan i am 18 and I just got Married to a wonderfull man i plan to spend the rest of my life with i also love to write poems and songs i really appreciate reviews i'm mostly a love and friendship kinda writer but i have some good ones on other topices too such as "No longger hurting me" that is a poem bout abuse(i have never been abused but i think i captuered it pritty well ) and i have two poems i wrote for my Dad before and during th time he was in Iraq i hope my work takes you out of this time and place, moves you from your seat and touches your heart. and thank you for taking the time to read my page and my work !!YOU REVIEW MY STUFF I WILL TRY TO REVIEW YOURS!! | |||||||||
1. Untilted reviewsdidnt know what to call it feedback would be great please and thanks muchComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-16-09 - Published: 7-16-092. Life's To Shortnot sure where i got it but i would like some feeback is a little shorter then normal but i hope you like it please R&RComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-23-09 - Published: 4-23-093. Backstabberok this is a knew one umm i donno i just had to get it off my chest so please read and reviewComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-8-08 - Published: 10-8-084. Not the Enemy reviewsplease R&RComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-4-08 - Published: 8-4-085. Let Me Feel Your Pain reviewswhen you read something it should take you to a whole nother time and place put you in someone elses shoes so i wrote a poem bout what i like to feel when i read something kinda pulled it out of thin air so feedback would be great thanks muchComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-25-08 - Published: 6-25-086. RIP JIMMY »i would really like some feedback pleaseComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 330 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-25-08 - Published: 6-25-087. The World Goes Round reviewsumm i have no idea what i was thinking when i wrote this i kinda pulled it out of thin air please read and review thanksComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-9-08 - Published: 1-9-088. Promise Me reviewsi'm a bit rusty havent wrote a poem in a couple of months but i hope you like this just the same Please i would really like some feed backComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-3-08 - Published: 1-3-089. The Baby Sister I've Always Wanted reviewsto a best friend the closet thing i've ever had to a Baby sisterComplete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-3-07 - Published: 11-3-0710. Let Me Make My Own Mistake! reviewsTo all teenagers you know how every parent always says i dont want you to make the same mistake i did well they say you learn best from a mistake you make yourself! please R&RComplete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 254 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-12-07 - Published: 10-12-0711. I'll Never Know reviewsumm this a knew one i kinda pulled out of thin air plz R&RComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-11-07 - Published: 10-11-0712. Help » reviewsNew Chapter..... i turned this into a song so please R&RComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 430 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-4-07 - Published: 10-1-0713. My Knight In Shinning Armor reviewssorry i keep taking this down this the last time i promise i added a knew verse and changed as few thingsComplete - Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-21-07 - Published: 9-21-0714. The Rain I Heard reviewsthis was my vary first song and I sing it 247 I have it memorized but I wanna know whatcha think so please review thanks muchComplete - Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 212 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-5-07 - Published: 9-5-0715. Let Me Take You Back To A Time reviewsuuum i guess this is my idea of what the world has become idk just tell me whatcha think pleaseComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-2-07 - Published: 9-2-0716. I Told You So reviewsnot something i usually say but this was a special case...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-15-07 - Published: 8-15-0717. True Freinds Are Always Aroundpeer pressureComplete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-15-07 - Published: 8-15-0718. The Words I wish I never Knew reviewshas there ever been a time you wished you didnt know the words I Love You?Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0719. Remebering Why I love You reviewsplease reviewComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0720. Picking up the Pieces reviewsplease reviewComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0721. The Mistake reviewsplaese reviewComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0722. Somewhere Deep Insideuumm yeaComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0723. When Theres No One Else Around reviewsthis is one of my many love poemsComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0724. True Romance reviewsplease reviewComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0725. Thank youplease reviewComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0726. Out of ControlTears of love And tears of joy Finally Someone who don’t play with emotions As if they were a toyComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0727. Only To Meour comitmentComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0728. I Call You My Everything reviewsplease reviewComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 237 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0729. Adults reviewsi sware its not a dissing poem lolComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0730. Was So Into You reviewsplease reviewComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0731. Reminding Me of When You Where Mineplease reviewComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0732. I Say I Love You reviewsplease reviewComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0733. Below the Floor BeforePlease reviewComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0734. Playing Games With My HeartEmotions Are not ToysComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 198 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0735. Look What you've done to me reviewstitle said it allComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0736. Do Or Don't reviewsi hate people that mess with emotions as a toyComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0737. Always and Foreveragain title says it allComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - Spanish - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0738. Lovethis is a ? poemComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0739. Emotional Knifeumm the title kinda says it allComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0740. No Longger Hurting Me reviewsDedicated to every girl who’s ever been Abused by their father and wished They were dead!This gives a whole new meaning to You never know what you have till it's gone.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Horror/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0741. Come Home SafeThis one I wrote formy dad while he was in IraqComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0742. Can't Lose Youi Wrote this just before my dad whent to Iraq for a yrComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0743. 1000 piecesthis one is a fav of mine i hope it will be one of yours as wellComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0744. Memory Lane reviewsa freind left behindComplete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0745. Lucky To Be Your BabyPlease Review :]Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0746. Let It Go reviewsPlease Review :]Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0747. Keys reviewsthis 2 is a songComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0748. I'm Free reviewsthis is a song FYIComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 299 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0749. For A Moment reviewsPlease Review :]Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0750. Everything About YouPlease review :]Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0751. Could It Be?Please review :]Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0752. Betrayal Is Not The WordPlease review :]Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0753. Before You reviewsPlease review :]Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0754. Anniversary PoemAnniversary Poem to my husband DannyComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0755. AlonePlease Review :]Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0756. All I've Ever FearedPlease Review :]Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0757. A Love With Fear reviewsPlease Review! :]Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0758. A Love For Everlasting EternityLove poem please review :]Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 232 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0759. I Miss You reviewsWritten for my childhood hero and favorite person in the whole world my grandma Violet.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-0760. A Black Hole Burns Like The Flames Of Hell reviewsOVER OBSESSED CHICK GONE CRAZY! Please review! :]Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 201 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-13-07 - Published: 8-13-0761. A love like yours reviewsshort simple and sweet but says it allComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-13-07 - Published: 8-13-07
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