Hi my name is Ardath Alzner my nickname and pen name is Ardie I live in Lansing Michagan i am 18 and i love to write poems and songs i really appreciate reviews i'm mostly a love and friendship kinda writer but i have some good ones on other topices too such as "No longger hurting me" that is a poem bout abuse(i have never been abused but i think i captuered it pritty well ) and i have two poems i wrote for my Dad before and during th time he was in Iraq i hope my work takes you out of this time and place, moves you from your seat and touches your heart. and thank you for taking the time to read my page and my work

!!YOU REVIEW MY STUFF I WILL TRY TO REVIEW YOURS!!

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1. Backstabber

ok this is a knew one umm i donno i just had to get it off my chest so please read and review

Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-8-08 - Published: 10-8-08

2. Not the Enemy reviews

this was written for my in-laws i would love some feedback on this one please

Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-4-08 - Published: 8-4-08

3. Let Me Feel Your Pain reviews

when you read something it should take you to a whole nother time and place put you in someone elses shoes so i wrote a poem bout what i like to feel when i read something kinda pulled it out of thin air so feedback would be great thanks much

Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-25-08 - Published: 6-25-08

4. RIP JIMMY »

i would really like some feedback please

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 330 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-25-08 - Published: 6-25-08

5. The World Goes Round reviews

umm i have no idea what i was thinking when i wrote this i kinda pulled it out of thin air please read and review thanks

Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-9-08 - Published: 1-9-08

6. Promise Me reviews

i'm a bit rusty havent wrote a poem in a couple of months but i hope you like this just the same Please i would really like some feed back

Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-3-08 - Published: 1-3-08

7. The Baby Sister I've Always Wanted reviews

to a best friend the closet thing i've ever had to a Baby sister

Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-3-07 - Published: 11-3-07

8. Let Me Make My Own Mistake! reviews

To all teenagers you know how every parent always says i dont want you to make the same mistake i did well they say you learn best from a mistake you make yourself! please R&R

Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 254 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-12-07 - Published: 10-12-07

9. I'll Never Know reviews

umm this a knew one i kinda pulled out of thin air plz R&R

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-11-07 - Published: 10-11-07

10. Help » reviews

New Chapter..... i turned this into a song so please R&R

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 430 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-4-07 - Published: 10-1-07

11. My Knight In Shinning Armor reviews

sorry i keep taking this down this the last time i promise i added a knew verse and changed as few things

Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-21-07 - Published: 9-21-07

12. The Rain I Heard reviews

this was my vary first song and I sing it 247 I have it memorized but I wanna know whatcha think so please review thanks much

Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 212 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-5-07 - Published: 9-5-07

13. Let Me Take You Back To A Time reviews

uuum i guess this is my idea of what the world has become idk just tell me whatcha think please

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-2-07 - Published: 9-2-07

14. I Told You So reviews

not something i usually say but this was a special case...

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-15-07 - Published: 8-15-07

15. True Freinds Are Always Around

peer pressure

Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-15-07 - Published: 8-15-07

16. The Words I wish I never Knew reviews

has there ever been a time you wished you didnt know the words I Love You?

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

17. Remebering Why I love You reviews

please review

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

18. Picking up the Pieces reviews

please review

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

19. The Mistake reviews

plaese review

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

20. Somewhere Deep Inside

uumm yea

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

21. When Theres No One Else Around reviews

this is one of my many love poems

Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

22. True Romance reviews

please review

Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

23. Thank you

please review

Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

24. Out of Control

Tears of love And tears of joy Finally Someone who don’t play with emotions As if they were a toy

Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

25. Only To Me

our comitment

Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

26. I Call You My Everything reviews

please review

Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 237 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

27. Adults reviews

i sware its not a dissing poem lol

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

28. Was So Into You reviews

please review

Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

29. Reminding Me of When You Where Mine

please review

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

30. I Say I Love You reviews

please review

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

31. Below the Floor Before

Please review

Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

32. Playing Games With My Heart

Emotions Are not Toys

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 198 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

33. Look What you've done to me reviews

title said it all

Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

34. Do Or Don't reviews

i hate people that mess with emotions as a toy

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

35. Always and Forever

again title says it all

Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - Spanish - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

36. Love

this is a ? poem

Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

37. Emotional Knife

umm the title kinda says it all

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

38. No Longger Hurting Me reviews

Dedicated to every girl who’s ever been Abused by their father and wished They were dead!This gives a whole new meaning to You never know what you have till it's gone.

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Horror/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

39. Come Home Safe

This one I wrote formy dad while he was in Iraq

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

40. Can't Lose You

i Wrote this just before my dad whent to Iraq for a yr

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

41. 1000 pieces

this one is a fav of mine i hope it will be one of yours as well

Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

42. Memory Lane reviews

a freind left behind

Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

43. Lucky To Be Your Baby

Please Review :]

Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

44. Let It Go reviews

Please Review :]

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

45. Keys reviews

this 2 is a song

Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

46. I'm Free reviews

this is a song FYI

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 299 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

47. For A Moment reviews

Please Review :]

Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

48. Everything About You

Please review :]

Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

49. Could It Be?

Please review :]

Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

50. Betrayal Is Not The Word

Please review :]

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

51. Before You

Please review :]

Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

52. Anniversary Poem

Anniversary Poem to Danny

Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

53. Alone

Please Review :]

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

54. All I've Ever Feared

Please Review :]

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

55. A Love With Fear reviews

Please Review! :]

Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

56. A Love For Everlasting Eternity

Love poem please review :]

Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 232 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

57. I Miss You reviews

Written for my childhood hero and favorite person in the whole world my grandma Violet.

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-14-07 - Published: 8-14-07

58. A Black Hole Burns Like The Flames Of Hell reviews

OVER OBSESSED CHICK GONE CRAZY! Please review! :]

Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 201 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-13-07 - Published: 8-13-07

59. A love like yours reviews

short simple and sweet but says it all

Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-13-07 - Published: 8-13-07