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under the rain
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since: 07-01-07, id: 573594
Author has written 6 stories for Love, Friendship, and Romance.

Hay people I am:

Name: MiMi

Age: 14

Gender: Female

Why im here: To put up my poems and see if they are good

so yah some of you may not like my poems and that is ok with me

we all have our diffrences. Please tell me what is wrong with it though because i

really want to improve.

And if you love it thanks so much please tell me what you loved about it.

Some people that i know say that my poems should be about what i feel

and i know i should write about how i feel so im starting to.

Its just that im not really a person that can show her feelings truelly

Its hard for me to let people into my real self so some of my poems are about how

people i know feel and some are how i feel.

But anyway i hope you like them and tell me what i can do to improve on them.




1. Goodbye My First Kiss
I’m looking away from the past.” He saids in a husky strained voice. And the realization of what he said hits me so hard I thought my heart would stop. Please comment i know summary sucks but please read!
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 586 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-24-08 - Published: 7-24-08
2. I miss them all
this is to a verry special frien also a verry specail boy i wish i wasnt shy, i saw all the sighn i was just scared im sorry.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-21-07 - Published: 7-21-07
3. Friends are reviews
What i think friends are
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-21-07 - Published: 7-21-07
4. Dont Tell Me reviews
Pleazzz comment
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-21-07 - Published: 7-21-07
5. HER NOT me reviews
tell me your reason no matter what that may be, because i keep wondering why you picked HER... NOT me
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-20-07 - Published: 7-20-07
6. When reviews
do you think of me. R&R PLZ!
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-20-07 - Published: 7-20-07
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