MelGrl
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since: 07-12-07, id: 575001, Profile Updated: 12-09-08
country: USA
Author has written 6 stories for General, Young Adult, Love, and General.

My Favorite Books: -Twilight Saga by Stephenie Meyer

- Blue Bloods Series by Melissa De La Cruz

- Pride and Prejudice

- Jane Eyre


My Stories

My Forever Broken Heart

This is my first story I posted. It's not very good since it's my first time. I only wrote the prologue, so if I get any reviews, I'll continue it. Please read and critique my writing and give any suggestions on how to improve my writing. This is a little happy in the beginning but it won't be in the whole story.

Staring a New Life

This is my second story. I decided that this will be a series starting from Melissa's freshman year all the way to college. Starting a New Life is the first of the series where Melissa is dealing with her parents death and starting high school at her granfather's all boys academy.

My Poems

The Day You Left Me

My first poem I posted. Please tell me what you think of it. Kind of heart breaking.

8/21/07 Currently I am writing the first chp. of My Forever Broken Heart, the update for Starting a New Life, and a new story called My Bros and Me. Hopefully I can update before school starts for me.

9/03/07 Ok, I had just post the first chapter of My Forever broken Heart. Now I am going to post an update for Starting a New Life, and the beginning of my new story, My Bros and Me soon. My bad news, I will not update for a bit since school is starting tomorrow.

4/26/08 Well, I feel really bad for not updating any of my stories, so I just posted up some poems I wrote recently. I really am having writer's block on both stories, and I keep getting new ideas fo other things, so I'll try to update as soon as possible. I'm sorry.

Possible Future Stories

My Bros And Me

Take a girl who is perfectly content with her life but suddenly her world is turn upside down. How? By unexpectedly finding her father she never knew and finding that the Gods of the school are actually her brothers by blood. Will she accept her new family or will they turn away from her?


1. My Bros and Me reviews
Name. Lesley Renyell. Age. 15 years old. Occupation. student. Family. Single mother. Lesley never thought this monstrous bomb would be dropped on her by her own mother: her brothers that she never knew she had are the demi-gods of the school. SAY WHAT?
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Family/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 893 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-19-10
2. Akai Ito
Akai Ito-Japanese for red thread. Legends say that fated lovers, aka soulmates are bound together by a red thread tied to each other's pinkies japanese legend / ankles chinese legend and that each person has only one true soulmate in his/her life.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 494 - Published: 3-6-09
3. Poem Collection reviews
These are some poems I came up with from the top of my mind. They may not be very good, but feel free to read them if you like.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,825 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-26-08
4. My Forever Broken Heart » reviews
Hannah, now 20 years old, still has a broken heart after three years. Now hear her story about a boy who stole her heart and left her only with memories and heartache.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,009 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 9-2-07 - Published: 8-2-07
5. Starting a New Life » reviews
Melissa Hyes, just 14 when she lost both of her parents in a car accident. Now she's has to go live with her only relative, her grandfather. What she doesn't know is that he is the headmaster of an all boys academy, where she'll have to attend.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,019 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 8-3-07
6. The Day You Left Me reviews
short poem
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-3-07 - Complete