I've finished the rough draft of Starpack. It is, of course, very rough. Eventually I'll go back and change it a lot. It may be vey different, or it may be basically the same. I'm not really sure. It should be better, though. If anyone has any advice go ahead and tell me.
Finally, after about 7 months, my computer is working again! I'm sure that everyone who had been reading my story before my computer died has either given up on it or forgotten, which is fine. I'm going to continue to updating and whoever wants to read it obviously can. Like always, i'd appreciete reveiws.
Go ahead and read my stories. I'd appreciate it if you reveiwed them. Be as harsh as you'd like. If you ask I'll read one of your stories. I like gore and action.
Starpack: The Victory of Defeat: It's hard to give a good summary for this without making it sound corny. Fortunately or unfortunately, it has a decent amount of drama in it. Basically, it's about a pack of wolves who are threatened by an evil wolf pack after being wounded by the hardships of winter. It's not done yet and this is only the rough draft. This is the first real story I've ever written so don't be too disappointed in it. But it does have action in it so I think it will keep you entertained.
The Way of the Hunter: This is a short story about a hunter as he kills an animal. I think anti-hunters may enjoy this story also... but I'm not sure. I just randomly felt like writing this, so it's not the best.
I have ideas for other stories too, but they're still in the brainstorming process. Actually, they haven't even gotten there yet.
For some reason my writing doesn't suite my personality at all. WARNING: My stories have a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes.
Likes and Interests: Cars, motorcycles, guns, penguins, wolves, pirates, ships, and guitars.
I also like Tabasco sauce and most anything spicy. My favorite food is elk heart. I also really enjoy music, and it often helps me write. I like most kinds, just as long as it has a good tune. I would share more personal information, but I'm not very interesting. Like I said before, go ahead and read my stuff. :)
Oh, and by the way, my sister has an account on fictionpress too. She's a really good writer so, you should read her stuff. Her pen name is Dawn Blackraven, and if you mess with her in any way, you will regret it.
-Jacky
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