Share/Save/Bookmark
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Lorki
action: Feed . Send Message . Subscribe . Favorite
email: Email
since: 08-08-07, id: 578208, Profile edited: 08-09-08
Author has written 11 stories for General, Life, Essay, and Fantasy.

You got my name there and its all you need I suppose

I dont write much, i have plenty of ideas bundled up in me but so much school and work and social life.

I'm always up for discussion or debate. Some people don't like my ideas and thats okay with me.

I've got a pretty good self image.

Was that an Earthquake or did i just Rock your world?


I write poems for the most part

I'm a good fiction writer but its hard for me to commit

Odds are I'll put SOMETHING up someday

I also Like writing things on my opinions.

You'll find lots of that, I'm a ranter.


I try to return the reviews I get, I think its polite.

I welcome intelligent flames on anything I write

Just don't be an idiot

"Lolz! u r soooooo rong! Stoopid"

None of that.

I especially welcome people agreeing with me, haha



Cool Things About Lorki

1) I'm a girl. A super cool one too

2) I run. I play sports. I'm active. I love it.

3) I'm a high school student- Upperclassman

5) I live on the west coast.

6) I'm a vegetarian

Things Lorki Likes

1) Fun things!!

2) Spontaneous funny people

3) Animals

4) Warm rain storms

5) Sports and playing around.

6) Boys ''

Things Lorki doesn't like

1) Overly judgmental people

2) Hurting living things.

3) People who disrespect life.

4) Attention whores

5) When people put a story of mine on their favorites or their alert but don't leave a review. It kills me inside.

6) Pollution


Things You Ought To Do

The Review Game- http://www.fictionpress.com/forum/The_Review_Game/1867/

The Review Marathon- http://www.fictionpress.com/topic/1867/182555/1/


Update- August 9th

Once again the next chapter of The Dog King is taking way to long. I had it half done, then loss interest with it for a few days, then with a burst of inspiration i finished it at 3 in the morning, I was going back through it to edit (around 3:30) when my laptop decided it needed to hibernate. I wasn't too nervous because usually it will recovered documents when it does this but this time... it didn't. So now I don't really have anything. I could cry.


PROJECTS (Oh goody):

The Dog King- This story is complicated... and involves many twists and surprises. Ultimately it is about Aviel, a god with many odd characteristics and humanly habits, and the human girl he seeks out to help him help himself and escape the disease that is killing off the gods (there are many many gods, think of it kind of like the guardian angel thing. Theres not one per person but about one per lets say species...) It involves many aspects of humanity (or lack there of) and what it means to be human or more then human. it is not so straight forward a story, it is not a fight between good or evil but rather a struggle between reason and mindlessness and finding what is truly, rather then traditionally, right or just. An underground war, creatures called demons and creatures called gods and in between a beast called a human. Questions will be asked, like; what does belief really have to do with what ultimately occurs in the world, and how many gods smoke cigarettes and occasionally higher prostitutes?

This is meant to be an intense and meaningful story, but it is not meant to lack humor or idle drama, trust me, theres plenty.

Don't read if you are offended by fictitious gods that don't quite follow traditionally what a god ought to be. I will try to return reviews as always.

My wonderful beta for this story is Very Serious she kindly cleans up all the messes I make!

Calloway- not up yet, will be soon, another story, kind of a backseat project to The Dog King but I still think It'll be updated semi-regularly. I will put up a summary once I organize the prologue and the first chapter.

Things That Kill Me Inside- Well rather then make this into chapters each one will be its own fic. They are all just rant-essays on specific topics that get to me. They will cover quite a bit, and quite a few controversial things, and also a great deal of opinions on regular every day things that from my own experiences, a lot of people seem to disagree with.

I welcome an open mind for this 'series' but, I'd love to hear from people that disagree, I know I sound like a broken receord but be intelligent in your arguments if you plan to disagree with me. If you are rude and stupid about it I reserve the right to hunt you down, rip out your colon and then whip you with it. The moral of the story: Don't be an idiot.

Enjoy everyone!!


Stories Authored: (11) . Favorite Authors: (0) . Favorite Stories: (4) . C2 Communities (0) .


1. The Dog King » reviews
Aviel, a god of many bad habits, seeks the help of a human girl when the natural system of life begins to break down. As Gods die suddenly the link between man and spirit begins to dwindle. What creature hunts the divine? -Reviews returned! Chapter 13 up!
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 13 - Words: 27,123 - Reviews: 58 - Updated: 7-29-08 - Published: 5-22-08
2. Human reviews
My friend had an abortion and people have been so hostile to her because of it, and it really makes me angry because no one even knows the details of what happened or anything. I am pro-choice, but the point of this is compassion.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-22-08 - Published: 7-22-08
3. Calloway reviews
Because a blissfully arrogant and stupid world must be just that: blissful. Summary will change with first chapter, Prologue up now
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 396 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-21-08 - Published: 7-21-08
4. These Things Change reviews
These things change, at least I like to think that... Reviews Returned
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 6-29-08 - Published: 6-29-08
5. Things that kill me inside Issue 2 » reviews
Alternative schools, specifically those that do everything for the student. Sense when did learning have nothing to do with trying?
Essay - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,423 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 6-11-08 - Published: 6-1-08
6. Things that kill me inside Issue 1 » reviews
Cutters. Honestly, I don't buy the 'I can't control it' crap. Its a choice, and its a stupid one. Reviews returned Unless they're something like 'Lolz, u r stoopid.' Rated for some language. Chapter two on 'The depression Fad'
Essay - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,883 - Reviews: 20 - Updated: 6-2-08 - Published: 5-27-08
7. The A word reviews
Apple, art, alone, August? Nope. Abortion, and I say "If you want one get one." Reviews welcome, go ahead and disagree but please do so intelligently. This is a rant brought on by a conversation, its mostly for my sake, once again.
Essay - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 509 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 5-20-08 - Published: 5-20-08
8. Grow up reviews
a rant. I don't like people blaming problems on society, it seems an opinion thats popular on this site. So feel free to review, agree or disagree. I try to return all reviews.
Essay - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 463 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 5-15-08 - Published: 5-15-08
9. Blaming Society, how brave reviews
I hate it when people blame their problems on society. Thats pretty much what this poem is about. Agree or disagree, I love differing perspectives. I will try to return all reviews ' Some 'harsh' language
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 186 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-13-08 - Published: 5-13-08
10. Looking down reviews
I'm not perfect, I'm not the greatest person... I look down on people, like everyone else does. Reviews will be politely returned
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-9-08 - Published: 5-9-08
11. Maybe its Just Luck reviews
many of people would take pity on me. But maybe its just a lesson... Reviews will be kindly returned
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-3-08 - Published: 4-3-08
Return to Top