| GawjuzDudette |
Author has written 4 stories for War, and Life. I have always been a writer, and always will be. While my mother writes children stories, i tend to write Fiction, Science fiction, poems and sometimes monologues. Another passion of mine is acting, and im actually pretty good at it. I write what i feel or whatever ideas the Lord gives me. I have ADD, so it's kind of hard to get things done just right or right on time, and im not exactly computer savvy, so if something seems off or out of place, i ask you to please work with me. I need to update my writing severly, especially The Heart Broken. The Heart Broken is my prize story/possesion to me. I wrote it when the circumstances around me filled me with hate, and a boy's denial to me is what decided the ending lol. Even though it's long, it's very good i think, but i would love to hear some criticizism about it. I'll take honest opinions, even if your telling me how terrible or confusing it is, i wont hate you lol, i definitely need some improvement in my writing and those constructional criticizisms is the only way i can improve. I have been through a lot in my life and my writing tends to show it. Writing and creativity, is the only way i can truly express myself, so a lot of my writing is mostly negative, but it doesn't mean I'm a negative person, it just seems to be that the only time i write is when I'm upset lol. I do however have a "love" poem that made a friend of mine almost cry called "For Just One Boy" that i need to still download. I like to meet new people and would love to talk to them. If you have any ideas or comments, please, i would love to hear them. | |||||||
1. The Loser reviewsa girl tries to give advice in a bad situation, while others wont listenPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 243 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-23-07 - Complete2. My Biggest Fear reviewsa girl who is afraid and questions lovePoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 301 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-23-07 - Complete3. Kind Sira girl who feels she has no self worth because no one around her listens to herPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Published: 9-23-07 - Complete4. Heart Of SteelFighting through a hard life while nobody helped and finally making it in the end by themselves.Poetry: War - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Published: 9-23-07 - Complete