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| Helizabeth |
Author has written 47 stories for Romance, Fantasy, Nature, Mystery, Life, War, Fantasy, General, Love, Mythology, and Friendship. This is just where I will go whenever I need to post some shitty original fic I wrote. Really, all I want from this site is constructive criticism. I don't want anyone to say that they loved it, because if they loved it then they are uneducated. No offense, but really. Nothing is perfect, and I would like you to help me improve. "I'm more of a man than you'll ever be. I'm more of a woman than you'll ever get." -Angel Dumatt Shounard Kirk: Mr. Spock, you'd make an excellent computer. Kirk: Really, Mr. Spock, you're becoming more and more human every day. I just saw Star Trek, and am now SERIOUSLY in love with Spock. He's just so awkward and cute!! I also love Chekov. He was so cute! And that accent... I will never, ever rate a story "just in case" all my ratings will be one less than they should be, unless for some reason I write a K or K+ story. I doubt it, but most stuff will be T if it's fluff without smex, or M if it's sex. But I lean towards T on everything. I have a fanfiction account under a different name: Slow Walker or something like it. This is me, and that's all that's important. That I can live my own life. So you won't get my name, but I will tell you that I live in Texas, I am a slash addict, smut addict, and fluff addict. The hardest thing I'll read is violent roleplay. I WILL NOT read rape. Of any kind. I hate it. I love Greek mythology, My Chemical Romance (which I just rediscovered, and I freaked out I was so happy!!(THANK YOU LIMEWIRE!!)), the webcomic Vampirates!, I love Harry Potter (Drarry, AS/S, Dramione), if your vampire sparkles you're doing it wrong, Underworld kicks Twilight's sparkly ass, MILK was THE BEST MOVIE EVER!!, I LOVE the British TV show Skins, Limewire is saving my life, A Touch Of Insanity is my best friend even though Marching Band is stealing her from me, I'm straight, I'm a virgin, I'm a junior in highschool, I'm white, I have blonde hair (naturally), I have green eyes, my dad is pissed that there are pictures of me on Facebook, and you should really read the bit below this. No joke, it's really moving. Well, not the bit right below, but the bit under that. The one about homophobia. Faries Can Have Fun Too: Guy and Adam Guy Adam and Shane Series: (Melinda will be in another one I'm writing) Fabio being really emo Melinda who will be coming, I promise Shane and Adam Shane is the one on the bottom (which is usual), but he has curly dirty blonde hair. But you can't search that on google images, so I had to use an emo. But they are adorable! Any of my Mythology Stories Eros is fucking hot. This is Mitch Hewer, who played Maxxie in Skins, and he was FUCKING HOT!! Seriously, if I could, I would just -CENSORED-...ahh...so pretty... LOok at the adorable emo! (//_-) Homophobia and You: They're people too! Stop the hate and spread the love! I am the girl kicked out of her home because I confided in my mother that I am a lesbian.
1) Gay marriage is not natural, and as Americans, we always reject unatural things like eyeglasses, polyester, and lyposuction. 2) Gay marriage will encourage people to be gay, in the same way that hanging around tall people will make you tall. 3) Legalizing gay marriage will open the door to all kinds of crazy behavior. People may even wish to marry their pets because a dog has legal standing and can sign a marriage contract. 4) Straight marriage has been around a long time and hasn't changed at all; women are still property, blacks still can't marry whites, and divorce is still illegal. 5) Straight marriage will be less meaningful if gay marriage were allowed; the sanctity of Brittany Spears' 55-hour just-for-fun marriage would be destroyed. 6) Straight marriages are valid because they produce children. Gay couples, infertile couples, and old people shouldn't be allowed to marry because our orphanages aren't full yet, and the world needs more children. 7) Obviously gay parents will raise gay children, since straight parents only raise straight children. 8) Gay marriage is not supported by religion. In a theocracy like ours, the values of one religion are imposed on the entire country. That's why we have only one religion in America. 9) Children can never succeed without a male and a female role model at home. That's why we as a society expressly forbid single parents to raise children. 10) Gay marriage will change the foundation of society; we could never adapt to new social norms. Just like we haven't adapted to cars, the service-sector economy, or longer life spans... Have PRIDE! Support Gay Marriage! America... you were just pwned Gwen: Don't you ever stop? John: What? Five minutes left to live, and you want me to behave? Oh, that's gorgeous! Gwen: That's a poodle! John: It's nice! | |||||||||
1. Impossibilities » reviewsTeacher/Student. Ben is nine years older than Maya and her English teacher, and man, is he hot with his shirt off! Collection of unrelated oneshots. M rating starting on chapter 3.Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 13,741 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 3-3-11 - Published: 8-4-10 - Complete2. No One Spends the Holidays Alone reviewsONESHOT! Rebecca thinks she is going to be alone over the holidays, so she sits down to watch Love Actually and feel sorry for herself. That's not the plan Mark was thinking of...Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,863 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-26-10 - Complete3. How Derek Zoolander Got Two Kids Together reviewsONESHOT. Amy had always liked Jacob. He was funny and smart and played cello like a beast. Oh, and he was REALLY sexy... Rated T because there is no actual sex. If there was, or if I had used stronger language then it might have been M, but it is not.Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,669 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-23-10 - Complete4. I Hate How Much I Need You » reviewsShould I smile because we're friends, or cry because that's all we'll ever be? I hate how much I need you.Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 492 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-9-09 - Published: 11-20-08 - Complete5. Slash in an Insanely GRated Fashion reviewsONESHOT, SLASH. And they frolicked through the field in an insanely G-Rated fashion. Dedicated to ATouchOfInsanity, I hope it's not too adult for you, darling! Crack!fic, very loosely based on two characters from Spring Awakening.Fiction: Romance - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 617 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-9-09 - Complete6. Francisco » reviewsSorry, but I'm not adding more. SORRY! BILINGUAL STORY English/Spanish Sylvia lives in a small town on the US side of a Texas/Mexico border. Follow her life as she meets, befriends and falls in love with the slightly mysterious, slightly sexy mexican byFiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 6 - Words: 12,674 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-5-09 - Published: 2-26-09 - Complete7. I Will Follow You Into the Dark » reviewsSorry, but I won't be adding any more. SORRY!I was always Demeter's least favorite. So why did I fall for her daughter? hints of side character slash. HadesPersephone. Title courtesy of Death Cab for CutieFiction: Mythology - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 6,963 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 7-3-09 - Published: 3-4-09 - Complete8. When the Day Met the Night reviewsWhen the moon found the sun/He looked like he was barely hanging on/But her eyes saved his life/In the middle of summer. When Luna found Ray he was a big screwup and a heavy drug user. Her eyes saved his life in the middle of summer. Panic at the Disco.Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,676 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-2-09 - Complete9. Loving YouI hate to see you kill yourself. I hate you, but I could never stop loving you. This is about my friend who is destroying himself with drugs, and I hate it. He won't listen to me, I've told him to stop smoking too, but he won't listen.Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Published: 5-11-09 - Complete10. Plane Rides reviewsONESHOT. A super long plane ride. A bunch of high schoolers. The Nervous Game, the Heir to the Golden Cube, Limp Lettuce, and creepy songs about eating people's hearts. This is your average school trip.Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,485 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-24-09 - Complete11. Hopelessly AddictedHe feeds you beautiful words/Wonderful words/Winding their way around your heart/Twisting into your brain,/Running through your veins/Until they consume you.Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 190 - Published: 4-22-09 - Complete12. Beauty is a Curse » reviewsMy adaptation of the Cupid/Psyche myth, but I made them Greek. Anyway, lots of slash of every flavor, mm, ff, mf. Well, mf isn't slash, but you get the point. Rated for language. Follows the original myth as close as I could. Veers a bit.Fiction: Mythology - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 10 - Words: 18,909 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 3-21-09 - Published: 11-30-0813. Aphrodite's Plan » reviewsI was always Demeter's least favorite. So why did I fall for her daughter? And where does Adonis factor in without breaking everyones heart? hints of side character slash. HadesPersephone. COMPLETE!Fiction: Mythology - Rated: T - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 20 - Words: 35,476 - Reviews: 98 - Updated: 3-4-09 - Published: 2-7-08 - Complete14. The Dork King reviewsMark likes football. And Kent. Kent likes his violin. And Mark. Too bad they're best friends... Dedicated to A Touch of Insanity for her birthday! I kept it clean for you!Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,789 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-1-09 - Complete15. The Really Gay Bar reviewsThe tale of hyper Shane dragging his boyfriend Adam to a Really Gay Bar. Rated M for swearing and sexing. ONESHOT. SLASH.Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,894 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-29-09 - Complete16. Love IsLove is nothing if not shared.Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 209 - Published: 1-28-09 - Complete17. Don't Leave reviewsAnother Adam/Shane. A bit more violent than the last. Happy ending! MM, boy love, yaoi. the best of all worlds! Adam helps Shane! Shane is a little emo boy.Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,959 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-14-09 - Complete18. Dinner in the Form of Adam reviewsShane tries to make dinner, but finds it too hard. Adam can help with that! Pure smut. Yaoi. MM. ONESHOT. heavy M rating. No cannibalism, sorry MidNight!Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,068 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 1-9-09 - Complete19. For You, I Will reviewsFor you, I will. What I am willing to do for you. I will shatter my world to keep you close to me.Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-21-08 - Complete20. Growing Up »Two poems about a girl. I had to write them for school, and now I need them to keep a higher story count than my friend. The first one about her as a little girl, the other about her in her late teenage years.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 190 - Published: 11-20-08 - Complete21. ChildDemon reviewsA little girl turns into a demon. You thank God that it's only a dream, but is it really?Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-20-08 - Complete22. PromiseA promise rests on your lips/melting like chocolate/tasting like tears./Promised words drip from you lips.Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Published: 11-20-08 - Complete23. The Breath of the Ocean, the Song of the SeaNot a very good poem. I'm not doing this for the reviews, my friend and I have a challenge to see who can up their story count the most by tonight. This poem is not exactly about anything. Just saying that we need to stop and listen to the ocean.Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Published: 11-20-08 - Complete24. Black Monsters reviewsNot a very good poem. I'm not doing this for the reviews, my friend and I have a challenge to see who can up their story count the most by tonight. This poem is basically talking about the ocean.Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-20-08 - Complete25. The Sun's JourneyNot a very good poem. I'm not doing this for the reviews, my friend and I have a challenge to see who can up their story count the most by tonight. This poem is about the sun rising and setting.Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Published: 11-20-08 - Complete26. Romance Where No One Knows the Other's Names reviewsCompletely plot-less. Just kinda fluffy. A bit like the last slash oneshot I wrote. Had the idea because Irish accents are sexy. Now you know you wanna read it, 'cause it has sexy gay Irish guys. And the title is just so intriguing. You know you want to..Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,440 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-15-08 - Complete27. Chocolate Mornings in a Woodcutter's Cottage reviewsThis is a Hermes/Eros pairing and for those of you that have also read Aphrodite's Plan, this is the side story I was promising. Basically a bunch of fluff, if you don't like the slashie, first off you're insane, second: don't read it then! Oneshot.Fiction: Mythology - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,663 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-19-08 - Complete28. How to Lead a Life of Crime and not get caught reviewsHello, my name is Anna and I'm a 22 year old criminal. I never killed anyone. Not yet. But all that might change when Danny introduces me to Connor, the worst best friend ever.Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Crime/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,612 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-18-0829. I Love You Too reviewsThis is a poem I wrote after watching Torchwood a lot, so it was meant to be a slash. But if you know a girl named "Nick" then it can be het. Suicide, that's the kind of poetry I write. I'm not completely happy with this, so R R and tell me what you thinkPoetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-24-08 - Complete30. Did you Notice Me? reviewsI just finished watching NCIS, so this poem was born. It doesn't directly say anything about NCIS, but if you saw the episode that was on March 25, then you'll understand.Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3-25-08 - Complete31. Faries Can Have Fun Too reviewsThis is the Valentines story I'm finally getting out. SLASH ONESHOT LANGUAGE. Rated T. Guy is an adorable emo faerie, who meets Adam, the new kid who will almost get him killed. Accidentally, of course. And no this shouldn't be rated T but I want reviews!Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,621 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 3-25-08 - Complete32. Your Green Eyes reviewsYou stare at me, stare with those bright green eyes. So that's not exactly what i wrote, but it gets the message across. Basically, person kills person.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-22-08 - Complete33. Death reviewsUm, this is a poem I wrote about death, so. Yeah. The poem is WAY better than this crappy summary. I say we should petition the FP people to make a Death category for poems. WHO AGREES?Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 253 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 12-2-07 - Complete34. Amarande and Altair reviewsThis is a story about vampires I had to write for English. Rated T because of vampirism. I need reviews! Constructive critisism! This sucks! Anything! ONESHOT!Fiction: Mythology - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 501 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 11-18-07 - Complete35. A Story of Two Shy Lesbians reviewsHi, my name is Lacey and this is the story of how I met my first love, Kacey. ONESHOT! Femslash, if you don't like, don't read. If you read and review, I'll return.Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,452 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 11-16-07 - Complete36. Could You Love Me? reviewsA poem about a guy who is professing his love to his best guy friend. If you change the words, it could be about lesbians or straight people. Rated T because my friend dosen't read anything K or K plus.Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 342 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-14-07 - Complete37. Look at the Butterflies reviewsA young girl is diagnosed with a brain tumor and this is about her told by her brother. ONE SHOT. Rewritten! Already!Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 528 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 9-19-07 - Complete38. RIP reviewsYeah, um, about death. Thats mostly what I write.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 9-18-07 - Complete39. Robbers and Romantics » reviewsDanny, Ana, and Connor have been best friends forever. Why does life have a way of screwing up the perfect relationships? It's so unfair! When Connor leaves for a while and then comes back, have Danny and Ana alienated him too much? What will Connor do?Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 19 - Words: 11,168 - Reviews: 35 - Updated: 9-16-07 - Published: 8-23-07 - Complete40. Persephone reviewsRandom poem I wrote for English about Persephone dying. I know it's technically imposible, but hang with me.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-4-07 - Complete41. My Life reviewsA random poem I wrote for English about my sad life. Written when I was really mad at my math teacher. Please R&R!Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-4-07 - Complete42. Hades reviewsRandom poem I wrote for English describing the Underworld. Please R&R!Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-4-07 - Complete43. Fear reviewsRandom poem I wrote for English about how sad war is. Please R&R!Poetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-4-07 - Complete44. A Perfect World reviewsRandom poem I wrote for English about how the world has doomed itself. Please R&R!Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-4-07 - Complete45. Who done it? reviewsIt was a drafty morning as I boarded the bus. I saw a flash of silver and heard a cry. I ran onto the bus and saw a woman. Her eyes were open and she looked surprised. I looked down at her. Pooling from her body, was blood. Constructive criticism needed.Fiction: Mystery - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,608 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-24-07 - Complete46. The Roar of Dragons reviewsThis is a poem I had to write for science class last year. I think it is good, but everything can be improved by your wonderfull constrctive criticism! please R&R!Poetry: Nature - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-24-07 - Complete47. The Great Wreck of the Sea Princess reviewsA crew of Pirates are attacked my an elemental force and have a conversation with a Kraken. Just something I wrote for English class two years ago. Rated T just for violence. please R&R!Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 914 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-24-07 - Complete
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