Introduction
Name - Kyle
Sex - Male
Age - Between 15 and 50
About me- Well i don't where to start. Im a Kiwi (thats Nzer for you who don't know) and play the piano. Thats all i can really think of for now.
Review policy.
I will return any and all in depth reviews made and try my best to give answers back. Though it may take a while i promise, just email me if you're not happy with the response and I'll leave two or three more reviews. I appreciate critques most of all, as they can help me improve. Which i desperatly need help in. Any way Im here to have fun and try write some good stories.
Thoughts
When reading, i perfer fantasy. When watching I perfer anime. When writing, I perfer typing. So what did we learn here.
Fantasy + Animes x typing = Nerd sqaured!
That's a pretty broad description of me and my personality. When I started on this site, around about fifteen. I was arrogent and thought I could be a great writer over night. Of course I'm still not great but I'm working on improving! And arrogently enough I posted my first story Stayo, and I remember my first review. Well sort of, here it is summerised.
A great exampe of a classic mistake.
Then I lose track but it went something like this.
Your grammar sucks, improve it !
And it's that very first review that made me realise writing is not easy nor is it a few pages and fame fame fame. It takes time and effort and a lot of editing. I thanks that reviewer, if he ever looks on this page!
Speaking of Anime I would have to say mine is Evangeliion Neon Genesis and for one simple reason. IT MAKES GOD WANT TO SEE IT FOREVER AND EVER!
Of course I don't know God, nor have I met him. But i don't think even he could turn the prodigy which is Evangelion. So if you have neverr heard about it, watch it and prepare for the most mind blowingly sucker of an ending you would never expect of any anime. Except this one, Evangelion.
Oh and I love Death note also, Light is one of those characters that I feel I should hate, but for some reason don't. I know he is evil, but I find it impossible to hate the guy.
Then we would come to another of my favourites which is Eureka Seven. It's not so much the dialouge that gets me into this, as it is the setting and how cool the characters look. I mean they fly on freaking sky boards! Oops I mean Ref boards (is that how you spell it?) I guess you could call me a mecha sort of guy, but I just love unique anime characters and all of these anime have them.
Favourite anime characters list
Rei - An angel from heaven in the form a child.
Asuka - A Devil from hell whose attitude makes her a bitch to be around with. But makes you symphanize with.
Light - The guy you love to not hate. As stated before I find it impossible to hate him, even though hes this derranged psychopathic nut job!
Roy Mustang - If that name didn't give you a hint on how cool he is, then you need to be shot. He is the epitomy of cool.
Eureka - Perhaps it's her similarites to Rei Ayanami that make her so damn cool. Or perhaps its because she is one of the cutest anime characters out their. Whether it's none or both, I could care less.
Holland - I like his jacket and the way he beats Renton. No joke he bashes Renton on like three occasions. The resaon I like that is because of Rentons childish but perfect voice.
To be updated soon.
Belrodna
After seven years living with the infamous Scarlet Liar. Belrodna Belliar returns home after receiving an unexpected letter from her Sister, Elronda Belliar. When she returns almost all that she knew in her childhood has changed and there is the fact her Sister just became in charge of the Belliar line.
Ominous Emnity - Stayo
Set in a fictional world, this is my first story or stories i've ever written. The Legends of Vastion starts off with a man called Adam, his son Seth and his wife Kateline. They inquire the help of Rogue who has promised them safe passage outside the city in excahange for nothing.
Ominous Emnity, set fifteen years after Legends of Vastion, Seth has become The northern Kismet and makes his way towards the east to meet with his family, and tell them of the news. When he arrives he notices strange things and is captured by the Vastions who have attempted to invade the land of the east. War will likely break out and only he can stop it.
Currently rewriting these two, and adding a more serious tone to it. Stories have been deleted but I am stating here that if any one uses any material from these I will not stand for it. So I will write a short list of what I'm stating is mine.
Kismets - Protectors of the Four Factions and prison wardens for their respective towns. They are neither poweful nor are they weak, they are the ones most loyal to their country.
Barnong - Desert beasts that have been tamed by the Vastions.
Vastions - A group of people living in the south deserts of the world.
Stayo - A sword weilded by the hero who killed the last dragon in the third town of the east. It is a blade lost and forever forgotten. He was engulfed by the pillar of fire that consumed him the night he slain the beast.
Manices - People from the North, accounts of them were never specified.
Names of places and people. - Vastion, Cernadanae and Manice. People - Seth, Sen(tance), Adam, Eneth, Kateline, Elyk, Fraust, Lilith and Ferde.
Notes - I am doing this because I am careful. Of course i cannot copyright the ideas, just the names. So if there are any stories with these names repeated and used in their story. Like Eg The use of ten names or all of them, I might decide to act. You have been warned.
So you can use the ideas as much as you want, just name them differently and we won't have a problem.
These stories ended up with a total four hundred hits, which isn't much i know. But it surprised me as they were my first stories ever. I plan to mature the series up a notch and add more detail and elements to the table. New characters and new situations.
Date posted - April 28th 2008
War cannot equal love
A peice that popped into my head one night and I wrote it off a whim. I will be deleting this also and brainstorming ideas then write like I did the first time I wrote it.
It's about a girl who has lost her parents and because she was offered a spot in the military so that her sister would enter a medicine centre she took it. And the story follows on a certain amount of years later, after the death of Commander Fit's Eminine.
All characters and names belong to me, muwahahaha.
Current status and ideas about stories.
Stayo (Both) - Rewriting hasn't started.
War cannot equal love - Currently writing.
When will these stories be back up? - Once I've completed the first book of Belrodna I'm going to start on Stayo and Legends of Vastion.
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