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readyforpeace
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since: 08-31-07, id: 580861
Author has written 13 stories for Love, General, Family, and Life.
Here is a list of things that you should know about me so that you can understand my poetry better:
I'm new to writing poetry but I’m enjoying how therapeutic it’s been.
I never let people get close to me as a way of protecting my secrets.
Poetry is what lets my get those secrets out.
They might seem trivial to you but they aren't to me.
I'm female (even if I don't act like it sometimes)
Yes I am crushing on a girl
I'm really looking for some constructive criticism so don't be shy.
If you review something of mine I will review something of yours.
You name it I like to create it.
I am the type of girl who "not many notice, and yet the type who notices everyone else."
(As said so eloquently by "daughterofmusic") 



1. Puzzle » reviews
I'm not sure how to summarize this one... I wrote it while feeling left behind and alone. Let me know what you think.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 2 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 2-18-08 - Published: 2-12-08
2. My Challenge » reviews
This poem is about an average yet challenging day. I'ts proving to be a challenge to write because my plan is to have 26 lines starting with the letter a, 25 with b, 24 with c...ending with 1 line starting with z. 351 lines total. It should fun :D
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 26 - Words: 2,695 - Reviews: 56 - Updated: 1-3-08 - Published: 12-22-07
3. A Negative New Year reviews
My feelings of desperation surrounding New Years.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 1-1-08 - Published: 1-1-08
4. They Say reviews
This is a modified version of a poem that I wrote a while ago. Since then I have accepted myself more and hated myself less. R&R please.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-18-07 - Published: 12-18-07
5. The Gong reviews
This is a sonnet that i wrote for my english class about my love for a gong at my camp, bucks rock that I love to relax and sit in.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-15-07 - Published: 12-15-07
6. My Acoustic Guitar reviews
The title says it all...
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-13-07 - Published: 12-13-07
7. Just out of my reach reviews
this poem is also a sonnet but i like it much more than my last one. It's about the way love always seems to escape me.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-11-07 - Published: 12-11-07
8. Not Another Disappointment reviews
This is about the pressure I feel to not disappoint my dad. For the time being he is not disappointed, i just hope I can keep it that way.
Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-9-07 - Published: 12-9-07
9. Unrequited Feelings reviews
This poem is set up to be a sonnet, 14 lines and rhymes: abab cdcd efef gg. The reason I don't write with any genders is because I might hand it in for a class. If you have a better idea for a title feel free to tell me.
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-7-07 - Published: 12-7-07
10. Picture Perfect reviews
I'm not really sure what thoughts inspired this poem, it just came out. Its about contrast between how we really feel and what we appear to feel. I like how none of it rhymes except for the last two lines. Would a better title be Capturing the moment?
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 12-7-07 - Published: 12-7-07
11. Awake reviews
Some nights I stay awake just so that if she wants to talk I'll be there for her. A lot of times she'll sign on and we'll talk for hours. I love it, I like to make her feel better and study with her for tests even if I'm already prepared.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-6-07 - Published: 12-6-07
12. gay? reviews
This is a poem that talks about the strange feeling of being unsure of my sexual orientation. Maybe I’m just in denial…
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-6-07 - Published: 12-6-07
13. Erosion of the Heart reviews
This is about a girl that I have a crush on and really care about. She has no idea that I feel this way and consequently hurts me by mistake.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-6-07 - Published: 12-6-07
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