This is about how I sometimes dont give up my problems and worries to God, yet He still is there for me. Please read and review it for me and tell me what you think. Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-17-08 - Published: 3-17-08
Writing about God is sort of difficult for me, i think because I want every word to be so perfect. I think I did ok with this one though. Please read and review, and leave some constructive critism.
This is about when you want to make a sitution better and you cant find the right words to do so. This is kind of a work in progress but please review and give some constructive criticism.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
I wrote this poem like a year ago when I first started writing, so its really not a great poem at all. Its pretty much about Jesus and how great He really is and how much I need Him.Please review and add some constructive criticism if you want.
Hi. This is the 1st thing that Ive written and let somebody else see, so if I could get some reviews and constructive criticism on it that would be great. I love to write and I wrote this the day after a friend of mine committed suicide. So its kinda bad.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-3-08 - Published: 1-3-08
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