I am a story critic and would like to give out my name so that you wont have to worry if I know you or not so dont complain about it.

I will post I story but it will tell what I think about the other stories and what they do or do not need in them.

Tell others about me and have them send some of there stories so I can read them.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~Announcements~~~~~~~~

Who ever was it that sent me a message to read there story i lost it on my computer cant need you to tell me what your

story is called so I can read it.

To the other writers: I have been quite busy and my computer went haywire so now I need you to send me you link or the name of you story so I may re-read

it and post comments about it.