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Author has written 4 stories for War, General, and Romance. Hi. My name is Juvenilia. I know, what were my parents thinking? Of all the stupid twee things they could have called me! I certainly wouldn't have picked such a dumb name for myself, that's for sure. If you have any constructive criticism, please shoot. I can dish it out when needed and I can CERTAINLY take it. I'm serious, be as harsh as you like. To those of you who recognize THIRTEEN, I would like to say that it is NOT a rewrite; rather, it is a re-imagining. The writing itself is quick and shoddy, but now that I know my plot a bit better, I can change it and make it cleaner. So the writing may actually be much worse than in MDT, but this is an experiment in the plot itself. I wanted to change the beginning a bit, shorten the story, make the characters younger, and make the atmosphere a little bit darker and more dangerous. I don't think I'm very successful but oh well. Oh, and don't feel like you need to review if you know the story in its other form. I know that many of you like that story and I wouldn't want to make anyone read something if they don't want to (especially something that has not been beta-read or edited), which is why I'm posting under this account, where less people have me on alerts and such. A secret, if you will. If you are a NEW reader, on the other hand, I would love to hear from you. Comments on the plot, writing, anything. | |||||
1. THIRTEEN reviewsAll Henry wants to do is finish his homework and keep his scholarship money. Unfortunately, this involves fairies, magic, and a girl who has been asleep for about one hundred years. Oh, and kissing.Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,631 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-4-09 - Published: 11-4-092. When Harry Met Sally reviews-ONESHOT- See, she loves him. She loves his dumb stamp collection, his nerdy movies, and even his boring obsession with making Excel spreadsheets. Jenna is sure that she loves him endlessly, and oh, why won't he notice her?Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 591 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 12-18-08 - Published: 12-18-083. Juliet In January reviewsJuliet in January, frozen mid-kiss.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-12-08 - Published: 9-12-084. This Is My Love Story, America reviewsDo you hear me, America?Complete - War - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 228 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-24-08 - Published: 4-24-08