Tortured Breath
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since: 12-14-07, id: 592419, Profile Updated: 02-09-10
country: USA
Author has written 4 stories for Mystery, Romance, General, and Biography.

Mmmmk... where to begin and where to end...

I know that most people don't read the profiles, especially before they read the stories...
Why then do people put things about their stories in there profiles?
Especially when they are relevant to the plot, or characters?
Their logic escapes me...

I hate long profiles that carry on f...o...r...e...v...e...r
Let me read your stories without the fluff...
Not leaving out the fact that the word "fluff" in and of itself is amazing.

I don't get along with my parents.
I love my little brother to death.
My husband is my rock and the love of my life.

Freedom.

I have trouble with sympathizing.
I feel more like people are just complaining.
Look at what you still have.

Choppy sentences can make good writing.
But they do not make up for a bad writing form...
No matter the excuses you make...
So don't give me that shit.

Honestly...

I am an insomniac...
For one reason or another...

I am a hopeless romantic.
Living with someone is amazing.
Falling asleep in their arms is ten million times better.

I am a huge fan of parties...

I x3 anything with mango in it.

I am a writer and want to be critiqued.
Returning the favor is necessary.

Anyone can write poetry.
It takes a special person to bring fiction to full light.


"I'm selfish, impatient, and little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control, and at times hard to handle, but if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at me best."

~M. Monroe



1. MY WINGS WERE LONG BROKEN » reviews
Brielle's mind wants nothing from him but her body wants everything. Geoffrey returns the favor three fold in his visits to her every night. She is locked away to keep her from the world, all to himself. But she knows she is expendable...who will save her
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 8 - Words: 10,612 - Reviews: 49 - Updated: 2-9-10 - Published: 12-20-07
2. YOUR LITTLE GIRL reviews
Yes. Yes. Mother. Father. I did what you never thought I could do. I moved on. At the tender age of seventeen I removed myself from a situation that most people now gaze upon as "normal." Sure. Well it was not normal for me. To say that least that is...
Fiction: Biography - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,014 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-11-08 - Complete
3. TO BE LEFT IN SILENCE, AGAIN reviews
There is an old tricycle sitting in our backyard. One of the older kinds with the red and white paint, chipped and rusted, the white streamers hanging from the handlebars, dirty and torn. Papa got it for me and my baby sister. . . before she died.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,235 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-13-08 - Complete
4. LIKE MY BROTHER'S AND SISTERS reviews
I used to have nine brother's and sisters... They were all older than me, so I guess that makes me the youngest... But I don't have that many brothers and sisters anymore. Three have left and they're never coming back...
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,343 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 12-20-07 - Complete
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