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since: 12-23-07, id: 593416, Profile Updated: 01-18-09
Author has written 2 stories for Fantasy, and Supernatural.

Hello! You can call me Breezebits or whatever short version of that you want to (I'm actually also Pantherstar on Fanfiction.net!)

Update #2 - Taking a break from BT and its sequel for a while. Got a new story idea, and it's gone pretty well so far, I think. I definitely think my writing has improved drastically and it shows in this one. I've got nine chapters done at the moment, so I'll post them however fast I feel seems good. Please read and review if you have some spare time!

Update #1 - I haven't posted anything in awhile because I'm working on doing some MAJOR editing on Blindly Trusting, which I have amazingly finished. Yeah, so I'm pretty pleased with it, but still quite a bit of polishing to do, and I plan to attempt to publish it. Which will probably prove difficult and stressful. But I'm gonna try! And I've been trying to incorporate at least some of the advice that has been given in reviews. 'Tis very helpful. =)

Also working on sequel to it when I'm not editing or off doing something else, seeing as there is lots of resolving to do. Anyway, probably won't be posting anything for a looooooong time. I'll still come on to check out updates on stories and stuff like that though. :)

Here are some things about my authorly self.

Inspiration- I often have dreams about people that don't exist and if I still remember the dream when I wake up and it was interesting, then I try to create a plot around it. Other times I'll be listening to music and something in my mind will just click. Kind of odd really, but I can't describe it any better.

What keeps me writing- Why don't I just stop and give up when I get writer's block? Because my friend threatens to strangle me if I don't write more and send her the next chapter. Nice of her, isn't it? And now my other friend is giving me death threats about it too. And another one. Even my MOM is threatening to withhold my meals!

Style- I tend to keep things fairly fast-paced, but not so fast that it's overwhelming. I write some stories in first person and others in third person. I usually have two main characters, a boy and a girl.

Genre- I'm not sure how to identify the genre. Usually I like to take just the world as it is and add a few twists here and there (for example, the curses and blessings in BT) so that it's interesting, but not so overwhelming that you freak out and go "omg-what-the-frick-is-going-on-it's-too-much-to-keep-track-of". I think I'll call it Realistic Fantasy. XD

Here are some things about my non-authorly self.

Favorite Books- Maximum Ride, Warriors, Pendragon series, Guardians of Ga'Hoole, all my friends' books that they're writing, many others

Favorite Music- (in no particular order favorite-wise) 10 Second Drop, 10 Years, 3 Doors Down, 30 Seconds To Mars, Adema, Alanis Morissette, Alter Bridge, Augustana, Barcelona, Breaking Benjamin, Chevelle, Cold, Coldplay, Crossfade, Dark New Day, Daughtry, Default, Disturbed, Evanescence, Evans Blue, Every New Day, Five.Bolt.Main, Flaw, Flyleaf, The Fray, Fuel, Goo Goo Dolls, Good Charlotte, Green Day, Hinder, The Last Goodnight, Lifehouse, Lifer, Limp Bizkit, Linkin Park, Luna Halo, Maroon 5, Matchbox Twenty, Matt Nathanson, Mute Math, Nickelback, Nine Days, OneRepublic, P.O.D., Papa Roach, Pat Monahan, Puddle Of Mudd, Rob Thomas, Saliva, Seether, Sevendust, Simple Plan, Smile Empty Soul, Snow Patrol, Staind, Stone Sour, Switchfoot, Three Days Grace, Train, Trapt, Within Temptation, and some others

Favorite Manga- Bleach is the best, very closely followed by Death Note and Naruto. I also like (in no particular order) Psychic Academy, Chobits, Juvenile Orion, The Demon Ororon, .hack// Legend Of The Twilight, Crescent Moon, Zombie Powder, Zombie-Loan, Yu Yu Hakusho, Someday's Dreamers, etc.

Why do I review? Because I know it's important to many people to see what other people think of their work. I know it's important to me. It's great to see what all kinds of people think, instead of just one point of view. So if I'm going to take a few minutes to read something, I might as well be nice enough to take the few extra minutes to review. REVIEW PEOPLE. It means something. =)

Detailed Summaries

Blindly Trusting- Nala Rayn has hated life ever since the sudden death of her parents. She was left alone without anyone really caring. Not that she's trying to get attention; her personality was never really very endearing. Now, as a sixteen-year-old junior in high school, she faces school, and, well, school. She has Nishi, her "trained" fruit bat for company, but still no human who she can really relate and share anything with.

Xaide Tran has hated life ever since the sudden death of his parents. He was left alone without anyone really caring. Not that he's trying to get attention; in fact, he's trying his hardest to avoid it. Now, as a sixteen-year-old junior in high school, he faces school and a hell of a lot more. He has no one, not even an animal to confide in.

Sound similar?

However, Nala and Xaide's world is very like our own except for one key difference. Every six months, a cursed baby is born and a blessed baby is born. A curse or a blessing can be anything, imaginable or unimaginable. There is only enough technology to tell if a child has a curse or blessing, not what exactly the curse or blessing does. Blessed children often live much better lives than most. Cursed children are, obviously, pretty much the opposite.

Xaide is cursed, and he knows very well what his curse is.

Nala is, actually, even more interesting in this way: she was the cursed and blessed baby of the six-month period she was born in. She knows what her curse is. Her blessing? She hasn't discovered it yet.

And so, as books always go, it's fate that they meet.

(Rated T for violence, but mostly language...-mutters something about Xaide in a temper-)

Walk Away From the Sun - In the world we know, wolves trek through the wilderness. In the world we know, humans spread like disease, leaving civilization in their wake. In the world we think we know, there is a run-down house in the woods that is home to human beings that transform into wolves every new, half, and full moon.

And then there's Enta, caught somewhere in between. Living with the wolves, avoiding the humans, transforming with the werewolves. Though she transforms with them, she is not truly one of them. When they are human, she is wolf. When they are wolf, she is human.

She may be the outcast, the freak, but her life is stable enough...for a while. Until everything she thinks she knows comes crashing down.

And now the pieces have all been put back together in the wrong way. Avoiding the wolves. Being hunted down by the werewolves for consorting with a human who she hardly even knows, a human who is more than a little strange and creepy. And that's without mentioning the other werewolves, the bloodthirsty ones that humans whisper stories about.

But could this be the way the pieces were supposed to fit together all along?

(Rate T for some language and some violence)

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1. Walk Away From the Sun » reviews
I was a wolf. I was a human. I was a werewolf. But truthfully, I was none of those things. Not really. -Detailed summary in profile- Chp. 7: Although so many changes were taking place, I never felt the changes, only the pain that came with them.
Supernatural - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 7 - Words: 28,826 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 8-1-09 - Published: 1-18-09
2. Blindly Trusting » reviews
I'm thinking maybe being an orphan, hating life, being cursed, and having feelings for a serial killer probably wasn't the best idea.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 19,194 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-13-08 - Published: 12-26-07
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