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since: 01-26-08, id: 597484
Author has written 1 story for Humor.

yo...

Profile huh?...thats pretty intense...let's see...been with this site for years now...under different pen names..was an on and off kinda thing what with school...college... and now work and stuff...but yeah...im back...hopefully for a substantial period..won't be writing much though..just sit here and criticize D ...i joke i joke...seriously though watch out for my reviews. I promise I will never leave a comment without an explanation...heck if I'm here long enough I'll even start some kinda rating system... looking forward to some good reads...peace

U.E.

PS: no I ain't an arrogant prick...just that writing is one thing quite close to my heart...along with soccer and music.

DANG!...I'm still here!...well I did say I'll put up a rating system...KEEP IN MIND EVERYONE IS ENTITLED TO HIS/HER OPINION..:D...I could be way off track but hey...theres a reason why people use this site!..."Constructive Criticism" I believe it's called!?...so here goes:

U.E. 1 - Oh please, just stop. I'm confused about who should be blamed the writer or the person who let you in here...

U.E. 2 - Let's see...if this was the first time you ever wrote anything...ok I'll be generous...the second time you ever penned something...it was OK.

U.E. 3 - Promising...a few improvements from here on in...and your on your way to "way up there"...

U.E. 4 - Loved it...really did...was ALMOST perfect...keep it up!!!

U.E. 5 - WOW!...your going on my favorite author's list...let me know when you publish something...ill be the first in line for a signed copy.

Don't hate me...but hey according to me reasonable criticism is the best form of appreciation...also I understand this site caters to all age groups...so I'll just stick to teens and older...hopefully that way everyone I review is mature enough to take it...Oh and for the ones I've reviewed before I put up this system?...well I can assure you they were all a 3 or higher...so SO FAR SO GOOD!..

1. A Fish In A Bowl reviews
Random!..curious to know how everyone interprets it...some major chronological issues...lost in time in my short little write up...let me know what you think...It's cool if you don't get it...i just went with the flow...din't stop to make sense...peace!
Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: M - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 775 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-3-08 - Published: 2-3-08
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