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Author has written 4 stories for Family, Life, Love, and Essay. Hello :) I'm not pretending to be the worlds best poet, i just fancied trying my hand at it before studying a-level english next year. If your not too busy, please read and review my short poem, i'd really like your criticism, so i can apply it to any future work, practise makes perfect? I like to review other peoples work, thinking about what i like or don't like about it helps me to improve my stuff, so i'll most definitely review you right back. I'm Rosie, by the way xxx | |||||||
1. My Perfect Read reviewsFor AS Level English we had to write about a book thats inspired us, a book thats taught us something that means a lot to us. I decided to write about this, i would really appriectame some feedback before giving it in! Its only short so it wont take long!Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 673 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-10-08 - Published: 9-10-082. I can see it in your eyes reviewsa short poem, i just opened up microsoft word really late one night and started tying, and this is the end-product.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-19-08 - Published: 8-19-083. Blip reviewsa short poem about when to 'call it a day'Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-19-08 - Published: 8-19-084. Forever reviewsmy first serious poem, would appriecate feedback and suggestions on this. Its about coping with the loss of my grandad, the most important man in my life.Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 217 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-2-08 - Published: 8-2-08
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