For those of you who know me, I'm Vernon. For those of you who don't, I'm still Teldumor until further notice.
Greetings writers. Please review Breaking the Tempest, I'd appreciate it greatly. If you want me to review your story, just let me know, I'd love to. Looking for illustrations as well, though Kayla does a damn fine job, I'd like to see other interpretations.
By the way, don't hesitate at all to correct me or advise me, In fact, I appreciate that almost more than compliments, because it helps me improve. If I'm missing some descriptions, if there's a plot problem (thank you Xerza for reminding me about the dragons, I might have just let it slip by), or if there are just some really cheesy lines, please tell me. Also, advice is greatly appreciated, though not always taken, it is always taken into consideration.
Smiles,
Teldumor
Good Songs for the characters:
Teldumor: What I've Done - Linkin Park
Felix: Seven Nation Army - White Stripes
Zallen: Crazy - Gnarls Barkly
Sunder: Heaven on Their Minds - Jesus Christ Superstar
Lucas: Nemo - Nightwish
Anna Lee: Calling You - Blue October
Vincent: Stop, Hey, What's that Sound - Buffalo Springfield
Anything for Corda?
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Spoiler!!
De'Lor: Dust in the Wind - Kansas
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