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since: 02-23-08, id: 600640, Profile edited: 03-21-08
Author has written 4 stories for Sci-Fi, Fantasy, and Life.

For those of you who know me, I'm Vernon. For those of you who don't, I'm still Teldumor until further notice.

Greetings writers. Please review Breaking the Tempest, I'd appreciate it greatly. If you want me to review your story, just let me know, I'd love to. Looking for illustrations as well, though Kayla does a damn fine job, I'd like to see other interpretations.

By the way, don't hesitate at all to correct me or advise me, In fact, I appreciate that almost more than compliments, because it helps me improve. If I'm missing some descriptions, if there's a plot problem (thank you Xerza for reminding me about the dragons, I might have just let it slip by), or if there are just some really cheesy lines, please tell me. Also, advice is greatly appreciated, though not always taken, it is always taken into consideration.

Smiles,

Teldumor

Good Songs for the characters:

Teldumor: What I've Done - Linkin Park

Felix: Seven Nation Army - White Stripes

Zallen: Crazy - Gnarls Barkly

Sunder: Heaven on Their Minds - Jesus Christ Superstar

Lucas: Nemo - Nightwish

Anna Lee: Calling You - Blue October

Vincent: Stop, Hey, What's that Sound - Buffalo Springfield

Anything for Corda?

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Spoiler!!

De'Lor: Dust in the Wind - Kansas




1. God's Blade Devil's Law » reviews
There was never a more legendary Bladeship than the Rose of Sharon. But what's good is evil, what's true is a lie. What is God's will, what is man's? What is justice? What is control?
Sci-Fi - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Adventure - Chapters: 6 - Words: 22,690 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-10-08 - Published: 3-31-08
2. Breaking the Tempest: Childe Teldumor's Legend » reviews
Teldumor fought for freedom with a tyrannical crusade. When victory seemed inevitable, a betrayal sent him to be locked away forever. Years later, his rescuers discover that the Dark Lord is not the same man, and once again, Teldumor will change the world
Sci-Fi - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 10 - Words: 33,353 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 4-19-08 - Published: 2-26-08
3. The Amber Storm
A final blazing strand of glory, the tears of an executioner, and the land of crows. Free verse
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 441 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-14-08 - Published: 4-14-08
4. Canticle of the Tower » reviews
Along the road to the Tower, everything will change. Old story, not as good as Breaking the Tempest, but worth a look.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Tragedy - Chapters: 4 - Words: 11,410 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-25-08 - Published: 3-25-08
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