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A Raindrop's Shadow
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since: 03-08-08, id: 602664, Profile edited: 05-13-08
Author has written 12 stories for Life, Haiku, General, Nature, Friendship, and Love.

Well, I just joined Fiction Press (I am only an apprentice on the boards).


Writing is my way to vent out my emotions...to take everything that is bottled up and express it. I between the ages of 10-75 its your choice, and love to write, but I am not really that good at it and came on here to help me improve, learn, and share my writings. Uhm, if I were you, don't read my life and choking on the words...they both stink and are probably not even worthy to be on here. Try "Ode to an Orange" or "Imaginary Post it Notes"...most importantly, keep reviewing...concrit is love

I am AMAZINGLY optimistic, Crazily mEsSy, a music ADDICT, a girl that has too many ideas, a pretty bad poet (trying to learn how to be good), a soccer player, a dreamer, a hopeful lover, and alot more than what can ever be written in my profile.


Great reviewers:

simpleplan13 (Thanks for all the reviews! Best reviewer ever =)

midnight in eden (Be prepared for the concrit, but it helps a ton!! Thanks for all of your help on my writings!)

Tranquil Thorns (Thanks for your reviews!)

I thought I would give special recognition to them since they have given me several reviews that were very helpful, but I would like to thank everyone who has reviewed any of my pieces...your reviews are immensely appreciated! :D


A bit about me:
Favorite Music: Almost anything besides country, rap, and really boring ballads.
Favorite Book: Ishmael by Daniel Quinn
Favorite Movies: The Messengers, The Martian Child
Things I like: Soccer, Basketball, writing (duh..), writing (given...), dancing, singing in the shower, nature, giraffes & pandas (actually almost all animals..), Mountain Dew!
Current Addictions-Vitamin Water & Orange (fruity forever or something like that) Stride gum

FoRmErLy KnOwN aS--

DayDreamerGal7- Ugh, hate the name and the stories I wrote under it.

Deleted Stories:
A view from the Fry Cook (Ok, this is by far the worst thing I have ever written )
Choking on the Words (ehhh. this one was just ok)

About my current name--

it was inspired by this haiku I wrote (before I knew that syllable count mattered. ha ha I was so stupid.)--

A Raindrop’s Shadow

Silhouetted upon the ground they dance

To the beat of thunder

Spiraling and free falling.

Note to readers-
Sorry about the lack of editing. I currently will have more time to address some of the changes in my poems that I would like to make. Please continue to review. You don't know how helpful your comments are!


Be sure to check out the Review Marathon! Which I am currently banned from...most unfortunately! :(




1. 100 Words for 100 days
A personal challenge to write at least one hundred words for 100 days. These words may be used to document my life or my feelings. Lots of emotion and thought. Please R & R the pieces.
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-13-08 - Published: 5-12-08
2. Love's Masquerade reviews
R & R! Thanks : A sonnet that is supposed to be in iambic pentameter. Please give suggestions!
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-9-08 - Published: 5-9-08
3. Royal Relationship reviews
You are my knight, I am your princess. Please review! Anything is appreciated! Enjoy.
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 234 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-31-08 - Published: 3-31-08
4. A Superficial World » reviews
Today's world is based upon beauty, but is our definition of beauty wrong? We the people must change. *look at title* Please review and I will do the same for you! Enjoy!
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 543 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-30-08 - Published: 3-27-08
5. Self Discovery reviews
I can't find.....myself....
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-28-08 - Published: 3-28-08
6. Imaginary Post it Notes reviews
Another attempt at haiku. Leave a review and I'll leave one for you! Enjoy.
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-27-08 - Published: 3-27-08
7. An attempt at a haiku reviews
*Look at title* My first time every trying to write one. Leave a review and I will do the same for you! Enjoy.
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-18-08 - Published: 3-18-08
8. The Prize reviews
Odd, how for minutes it is so coveted....but then is worthless once again. PLEASE R & R.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-18-08 - Published: 3-18-08
9. The door is still open reviews
Friendship & love are so funny. When you finally think you have found the right person, it seems that there is some fault in them. A poem about a friend. PLEASE REVIEW! ANYTHING IS IMMENSELY APPRECIATED!
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 233 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-17-08 - Published: 3-17-08
10. Slowly and Steadily reviews
Life is limited. PLEASE REVIEW! ANYTHING IS IMMENSELY APPRECIATED!
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 262 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-17-08 - Published: 3-17-08
11. Ode to an Orange reviews
I never thought I could look at something so ordinary, and find something so beautiful. PLEASE REVIEW! CONSTRUCTIVE CRITCISM IS IMMENSELY APPRECIATED! D
Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 238 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-17-08 - Published: 3-17-08
12. My Life reviews
Life is such a beautiful thing. Here is a short poem about mine.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-16-08 - Published: 3-16-08
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