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since: 03-23-08, id: 604701, Profile edited: 04-21-08
Author has written 15 stories for Life, Nature, Religion, and Love.

Hey, okay so there isn't really a specified forum for this so I'm going to suck it up and just free-style it:

I'm seventeen yrs. old

I love words, from both the real and made up varieties.

I write short stories mostly, but I just rediscovered the awesomeness that is poetry.

I love funny stories but I don't think that I could ever write a story in any length that was truly split-your-sides funny. I wish I possessed such a talent, but alas, I am more familiar with the introspective and slightly gloomy side of lit/ poetry.

Also, I feel that yellow is one of the best colors ever! I feel that it is very misunderstood though, like the anteaters at the zoo. No one really visits them, or at least not first because they aren't exactly the cutest most cuddly of the zoo animals. Yellow is just never a color I hear many people say, "Hey, you know what? I love yellow!" I don't know if that makes sense to anyone else, but I just thought that I would throw that in there.

I just recently figured out how to post things! I have ten poems on the site right now and I would love any sort of feed back.

- K




1. Winter reviews
please review
Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-6-08 - Published: 6-6-08
2. Fingerprints reviews
that's life
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-26-08 - Published: 5-26-08
3. Fire reviews
about a forest fire......sort of
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Poetry/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-26-08 - Published: 5-26-08
4. Swimming Skeleton reviews
Just a quick one.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-25-08 - Published: 4-25-08
5. Ireland reviews
I tried my hand at an upbeat poem. Not sure it went all too well. Please give me any sort of feed back.
Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-23-08 - Published: 4-23-08
6. Trapped reviews
This poem is more about abuse than anything else. Although I've had other people read and come up with something else. Please let me know your take.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-21-08 - Published: 4-21-08
7. Weathered Hands reviews
This poem is about how life can abruptly veer off in any direction. Our job is to make sure that those circumstances don't hold us down to the point where we can't be the people we want to be.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-21-08 - Published: 4-21-08
8. What If reviews
Depressing, but true for some people I'm sure. I wrote this in a very dreary mood, which I'm sure the poem reflects. Regardless, I hope you enjoy it. I would very much appreciate any sort of feed back.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-21-08 - Published: 4-21-08
9. Brillo Pad reviews
This poem is about faith, and the concept of believing in something without necessarily being able to see its source. For some people faith is more than enough, but for others proof is necessary. Which category do you fit into?
Complete - Religion - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-21-08 - Published: 4-21-08
10. Face Paint
Written from a prompt my friend gave me. Since I am terrified of face paint-not sure why, I decided to make the poem more about what face paint could represent. I either got just a poem out of this experience, or I figured out the root of my fear!
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-21-08 - Published: 4-21-08
11. Lavendar
This poem is about racism and unfair discrimination, and what it's like to rise above it.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-21-08 - Published: 4-21-08
12. Seagulls
This poem is about the roles people play in society and it poses the question: What is the true meaning of survival of the fittest? Those who are cut-throat and agressive, or those who have something significant to contribute?
Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-21-08 - Published: 4-21-08
13. Arctic reviews
This poem is based off of a prompt that my friend gave me. 'Write a poem about the arctic.'
Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-20-08 - Published: 4-20-08
14. Night reviews
About an animal, can you guess which?
Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-20-08 - Published: 4-20-08
15. Never the Same reviews
Did in ten minutes. It's kind of dreary. but true
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-20-08 - Published: 4-20-08
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