So, I'm John, I'm 17 and a college student and I have absolutely nothing to say about myself. Except maybe that I enjoy writing but don't think I'm really any good at it but I still do it to pass the time.

I'd really appreciate any reviews people can give me, either positive (so I know I should continue to post the stories here) or negative (so I can hopefully improve my writing). And if you review me I'll review you in return; because I'm nice in that way (and would really like some reviews).

The two stories that I am currently writing are

What a Difference a Balloon Makes - It's a kids story about an elephant, the credit for writing this should go to my friend Chris who made me write it. Although write now I have no real plans to continue it, but if people show some interest in it I may consider doing more.

No Way Out of the Mind - Is aimed more at an older audience, teenagers plus basically. It tells the story of Zach, Sally and Derek mainly and their lives at school and how they cope with everything basically. It is the story I'm currently concentrating on most right now and would really appreciate any reviews you can give me positive and negative. Chapter 2 will be posted soon too.

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1. No Way Out of the Mind » reviews

Zach and his classmates not only have to struggle with exams but two of them have to deal with depression too. Zach starts to discover secrets about them, and it soon becomes apparent that people aren't always as they seem, not even with his best friend.

Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,956 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-24-08 - Published: 3-25-08

2. What a Difference a Ballon Makes »

The story of Phil the elephant and his search for his best friend, a balloon.

Kids - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,562 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-13-08 - Published: 3-25-08