Wrote this a LONG time ago. Sort of the bane of my writing existence, a big learning curve and a whole lot of bad mistakes. Review the plot or flame my horrible sentence structure and comma use. Go on, do it!
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Fantasy - Chapters: 9 - Words: 25,535 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 12-27-08 - Published: 6-7-08