My story: Love, Hate, Live on the line...

it's the first chapter of my first original fiction, so it is a work in progress, but before I continue I'd love for a second opinion on it.

I started writing this to help along my writers block and to get the idea out of my head, as I'm usually a Naurto or Harry Potter Slash fan and have several Harry/Voldemort and Sasuke/Itachi fanfiction I am working on as well at Fanfiction.net.

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1138072/BloodiedFangs

I keep reading through this story and thinking, should it be with my fanfictions because it seems quite close to a harry/Voldemort relationship? Or am I thinking too much about it and the story will do fine as an original?

Leave a review or something if you can answer either question and i'll be happy :)

Felinity

Little picture i drew while bored to go with the story, which I later touched up on the computer.

http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r67/BloodiedFangs_2006/lovehatefanart2.png

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1. Love Hate Live on the line reviews

Collage students Tom and Alex absolutely hate each other with a passion. But what if they were forced to be dance partners in a show, that held their futures in it's success? Would they get along or would it spark even more aggression? Tom/Alex M/F

Young Adult - Fiction Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,229 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-18-08 - Published: 5-18-08